Jnsepli I J CRITICAL OBSERVATION? ON SHAKESPEARE. By JOHN UPTON Prebendary of Rocbefter. Ne forte pudori Sit tibi Mufa lyrae folers, & cantor Apollo. Hor. LONDON: Printed for G. HAWKINS, in Fleet-Jlreet. M,DCC,XlVL 4824G lo T O T H E RIGHT HONOURABLE THE EARL of GRANVILLE THESE CRITICAL OBSERVATIONS ON SHAKESPEARE ARE WITH ALL DECENT HUMILITY AND THE HIGHEST ESTEEM INSCRIBED AND DEDICATED BY TH E AUTHOR. . Critical ObfervationS ON SHAKESPEARE, BOOK I, SECT. I. *F ^IS a common obfervation, and there- fore perhaps not altogether untrue, that * critics generally fet out with thefe two maxims j the one, that the author muft always dictate what is left -, the other, that the critic is to determine what that befl is. There is an afiertion not very unlike this, that Dr. Bentley has made in his late edition of Milton : " ' I have " fuch 1. See his fir ft note on Milton's Paradife loft. However to do the Dr. juftice, there are fome errors which he has Undoubtedly mended, of which two are moft remarkable. B. VII, 321. The fmelling g ourd, which fhould be /*///. and ^-.451. fo&ottMjtg, which ought to haVe been printed, foul living. In mod of the other places, if he cannot find errors, he will make them. But methinks an author fhould B bear 2 Critical Obfervations Book I. " fuch an efteem for our poet, that which of the " two words is the better, that: Ifay was dilated bear his {hare, as well as the tranfcriber : and though the context is a facr-ed thing, and ought not to be dillurbed, yet in a note a better reading may be propofed. In B. IX ^. 670. there is the following beautiful defcription. As nuhen of old fomc orator rtnound Jft Athens er free Rome, where eloquence Flour ijhd, fence mute, to fame great caufe addreji, Stood in himfelf collected, while each part, Motion, each aft won audience, ere the tsngue. In defcriptions particularly the words ought to be neither embarraffed, nor ambiguous. But here, is motion the ac- cufative or nominative cafe ? If the accufative ; how fa* fetch'd is the meaning, each part won motion ? If the no- minative ; Milton fhould have given it, tach part, each mo- tion, each aft : or rather thus, in a great meafare according to Dr. Bentley's reading, Stood in himfelf collected whole, nubile each Motion, each act won audience, ere the tongue. Colleffed whole : Infeipfo tot us feres, at fue rotundas. Hor, L. II. f. 7. A perfon mult have no feeling of poetry not to allow this the better reading ; but allowing this, no rules of criticifm will fuffer him to alter, what the tranfcriber, or printer has not firft altered. In Shakefpeare the editors have propofed many better readings, which they fhoald have men- tion'd only in their notes ; and they would thus have de- ferved that praife for their ingenuity, which they feem to forfeit, by going out of their province to correft the author, when they fhould only have corrded the faulty copy. c by Seft. i. on SHAKESPEARE. 3 " by Milton." And from a fimilar caft of rea- foning, in his preface to Horace, he fays, * that thofe emendations of his are for the moft part more certain, which are made from conjectures, than thofe from ancient copies, and manufcripts. 'Twas never my intention to call in queftion the fkill, and abilities of one, whofe reputation in learning is fo defervedlyeftablifhed : but there was a good piece of J advice, (which I cannot fo eafily pafs over, becaufe of univerfal tife to critics,) offered him, when firft he made his defign known of publifhing his Horace , which was, to admit into the context all thofe better readings, for which he had the authority of ancient manufcripts ; but as to meer conjectural corrections, to place them in his notes. His reply to this advice was, as might be expected, " No, for then who will re- " gard'em?" Our great critic was too well guarded by his learning, to have his own reply turned as a farcafm againft himfelf; which might fo juftly 2. Plura igltur in Harattanis bis cur is ex covjeflura fxbi- iemus, quern ex cudicum Jubjltiio \ et t xiji me omnia fallunt, plerurr.qitc certicra. 3. Of this pnrticular circumftance I was informed by the late learned Mr. Wafs of Aynoe. I will add here a rule of Graevius, in his preface to Cicero's offices : A prifiis libris nan rccedtndum, tiijt oat librarii, aut fcioli peccatum fit tan tcjlatum, fit at omnibus, qui non cnligent in Jclc t ^idiri pojfit. B 2 b 4 Critical Obfervations Book I. be turned againft many dealers in the critical craft, who with little, or no ftock in trade, fet up for correctors, and fuccefibrs ofAriftarchus. There is one part of their cunning, that I cannot help here mentioning, which is, their intruding their own gueffes, and reveries into the context, which firft meeting the reader's eye, naturally prepoffefs his judgment : mean while the author's words are either removed entirely out of the way, or per- mitted a place in fome remote note, loaden with * mifreprefentations and abuie, according to the great 4. Dr. Bentley's foul play in this refpeft is moft notori- ous ; who, in order to make way for his emendations, will often drop the only, and true conftruftion : the reader is miilaken if he thinks this done through ignorance. I will initance in a correction of a paflage of Virgil, Aen. IV, 256. which, among many other corrections, I chiefly make choice of, becaufe fome have beendeceiv'd into an opinion of its fu- perior excellency : and I will give it in his own words, from a note on Horace, Lib. I. od. 34. Hie primum paribus nit ens Cyllenius alts Conftitit : hir.c toto praeceps fe corpore ad ur.das Mi fit, aat : ad quod evitandum " vetuftiffimi aliquot codices apud Pierium mutato ordine " fie verfus collocant, HauJ aliter terras inter caclumquc volabat Materno veniens ab a' old play ; every one may pare his nails with a wooden dagger. Now Hamlet, having been inflrufted by his father's ghoft, is refolved to break the fubjeft of the difcourfe to none but Horatio j and to all others his intention is to appear as a fort of madman : when I o Critical Observations Book I. Milton or Shakefpeare, tho' it may be fport to you, as the pelted frogs cried out in the fable, yet, when therefore the oath of fecrefy is given to the centinels, and the Ghoft unfeen calls out /wear ; Hamlet fpeaks to it as THE VICE does to the Devil. Ah, ha boy, fayft thoufo? Art thou there, trupenny ? Hamlet had a mind that the cen- tinels fliould imagine this was a fhape that the Devil had put on j and in Aft III. he is fomewhat of this opinion himfelf, The Spirit that I have fe en May be the Devil. This manner of fpeech therefore to the Devil was what all the audience were well acquainted with ; and it takes off in fome meafure from the horror of the fcene.J Per. haps too the poet was willing to inculcate, that good hu- mour is the beft weapon to deal with the Devil. Truepenny is either by way of irony, or literally from the Greek T^uVanov, veterator. Which word the Scholiaft on Ariitophanes, Clouds -jr. 447. explains, T^'^D, o >&egiltlgt[A(Afi>oi; lv TOvu!g9 minus nata, non minus ccrte mirabilia ad laudem : te, cum tot literis legends, tot diciar.dis, tot manu tua fcribendis fufficias * * * te magnam diei par tern ingra . 6. A&x- (/.atl'tvuv $icrp.uv. Amber flream, III, 359. and in Parad. Reg. Ill, 288. Callim. hym. in Cer. j>. 29. AX/x]g WO \ioug. Ambrofal odors, I, '245. Spenc. B. 2. c. 3. . 22. The which ambrojial odours from them threw. Virg. Aen. I, 403. Horn. II. . 529. Aft^oc-.a. x rT* t . Milt. V, 56. Hh dewy locks dijliir d Amlrofia. Ambrojial Night, ,642. Horn. II. '. 57. A^oc-W J vux7a. of bis throne, VI, 679. Irenaeas L i. c. 14. tw, O /> affeffbr. Nonnus in his pataphr. of St. John, in the beginning, 'Ati^n rJ*fi?^ ii^ji. Sophocles 3. on SHAKESPEAKS. 23 no other reafon than being common. Nor are rough words to be avoided, if the fubject be harfh and rough. The muficians and painters can in- form Sophocles in Oed. col. p. 316. Edit. Steph. fpeaks of Jujiice, us The a/e/br of Jove : Atxrj $>}&< Zwc. So Arrian in Exped. Alex. IV, 9. d iraXa* o- f eZ*tyi<; TT> Aixiv tracgt^fai TW At' tTroiwav. Pindar calls Rhadaman- thus, Saturn's aj/e/or, and Callimachus the poets, Apollo's affeflbrs. A bevy of fair women, XI, 582. The fportfman's phrafe, (peaking of quailes. Spencer ufes it very frequent, B. z. c. 8. f. 34. and B. 4. c. 10. f. 4. and B- 5. c. 9. f. 31. And Shakefp. in Hen. VIII. Ad. i . / all this noble bevy, has brought with her One care abroad. Arms on armor clajhing bray'd horrible difcord, VI, 209. a gr. GfaixtH, clamare. Horn. II. /x,'. 396. %%*& riv^ta, fomtum dedere arma. II. $ '. 387. ^ga'^E ^ ^er a ^6^. remugiit 'veru laid tellus. Shakefp. in K. John Aft III. Brajing trumpets. In Hamlet Adi I. The kettle-drum and trumpet thus bray out The triumph of his pledge. Spencer, B. 4. c 4. f. 48. Then ft/rilling trumpets loudly ""gan to bray. Sings darkling, III, 39. Sidney's Arcad. p. 614. edit. quart. He came darkling into his chamber. Shakefp. in Midi". Adi. II. O wilt thou darkling leave mt ? In K. Lear, Acl I. we "Mere left darkling. In Ant. and Cleop. Al IV. darkling Jland The -varying Jhore of the world. Dulcet Symphonies, I, 7 1 2. Shakefp. in Taming of a fhrew. To make a dulcet and a heavenly found, a Lat. dulcis. Ital. dolcf t doUiato, C 4 Or ;24 Critical Obfervations Book I. form us, what effeft difcords have in mufic, and fhades in pi&ures. Even in profpe&s (Nature's landfkips) how beautifully do rough rocks Or HEARST thott rather pure ethereal ftream, III, 7. Hor. f. II. 6. 20. Matutine pater, feu Jane libentius AUDI 3. y~e birds That finging up to heaven- gate afcend, V, 198. Shakefp. in Cymb. Aft I. Hark, the lark at heaven's gate Horrent arms, II, 513. Virg. Aen. I. Horrentia Mortis Arma v/rumjue cano, and Aen. X, 178. horrentibus haft is. Met. from the briftles of animals ftanding ereft. So B. VI, if. 82. Briftled with upright beams of rigid f pears. And Virg. XII. Striftifque feges mucronibus \iQtrtt ferrea, i. e. an iron crop briftles with unfheathed fwords. This me- taphor Milton has lengthened out into a fxmilitude, E. IV. )fr. 979, &c. Hyacinthin locks, IV, 301. Horn. od. '. W ben Vapour* fir* d IMPRESS THE AIR, IV, 558. Shakefp, in Macbeth, Aa V. -A f^// wa)']/? thou the intrench ant AIR /T///6 tky keen f^icord I M P R E s s . In K. Rich. II. Ad. III. He ufes the fubft. mfre/s : from the Ital. imprefa ; ab imprimendo. i. e. a device with a jnotto ; an achievement. from my awn nuinJo'ws torn my boujbtld toat ; Rax*d out my IMPRESS. Nat Sed. 3 en SHAKESPEARE. 25 rocks and ragged hills fet off the more cultivated ,< fcenes ? But however you find fault, in the name of Wot with INDENTED ivavt Prone on the ground, as Jinct, IX, 496. Shakefp. in As you like it, Aft. IV. fpeaking of a (hake, And with indented glide* didjlip away. Liquid fre, I, 229. Shakefp. in Othell. Aft. V. has the fame expreffion ; fo has Virg. Eel. VI, 33. Et liquidi Jlmul ignis. Liquid air, VII, 264. Spencer, B. I. c. i. f. 45. Virgil. Georg. I, 404. Liquid light, VII, 362. and Lucret. V, 282. The pure marble air, III, 564. Shakefp. in Othello, Aft III. AW by yond marble hcaafn. In Timon, Aft IV. *Ike marbled manfeon all above, a Graec. fAafpotigsti, refplcndere, /**/*', marmor. Horn. II. | . 275. aXa |x,a/x.6ji/ : which the fcholiart interprets, favxr.t. Hence Virg. Aen. VI, 729. Aequor marmoreum. Shining, re* fplendent like marble. Herat. I, 19. Urit me Gtyccrae nitor Splendentif Pario marmore purius. Minims ef nature , VII, 482. Proverb. XXX, 24. Quqtuor ifta funt minima terrae, according to the Vulgate. Spencer, B. 6. c. 10. f. 28. To make one minime of thy poor handmayj. There is an order- of Monks, who took the name of Minims thro' affefted humility. Shakefp. in Midfum. Adi III. Lyfander to Hermia, Get you gone, you dwarf \ You minimus. Mr. Theobald reads, you minim you. Wfereattd, II, 683. Spencer, B. i. c. 2. f. 3. that mi/- treated fair. B. 2. c. 7. f. 42. his mifcreateJ mold. Shakefp, Hen. V. Aft I, Or $ Critical Observation* Book I. of the Mufes keep your hands from the context j be cautious how you pluck up what you may think excrefcencies, Or nicely charge your underflanding foul With open tiths mifcreate. O FOR that warning VOICE, IV, i. Shakefp. in Roraeo and Juliet. Aft II. O FOR a faulkner 1 ! VOICE, To lure this tajjel gentle back again. Prolog, to K. Henry V. O FOR a mufe offre &c. In arms they flood Of 'golden PANOPLY, VI, 527. /* eelejli&l yANOPLY all armed, VI, 760. In ailufion to St. .Paul's Epiftle to the Ephefians, VI, n. t$vo- r*j IlANOnAIAS j^ x.. r. A. let us PI. AY, Ai meet is, after fucb delicious fare, IX, 1 027. The whole paflage feeras an imitation of Horn. II. /. 44^- U- I'- 5 '4- The word p!ay, is ufed in the fame fenfe as the Latins ufe Ludtre t and the Greeks ll^ux. Fis anus, et tamen Visformofa videri 1_,vi>i$qu et bibis inpudens. Hor. IV. 13. LUSISTI^//J, edijii fatis, atque bilijli. L. 2. 2. 214. Turla Menandreae fuerat nee Tbaidos olim Tanta, in qua popxlus LUSIT Ericbthonius. Proper tills. Natives and font of heaven, POSSESS 'D before By vone, V. 790. i. e. Slaves to none. So the Athenians calkd the flaves, jfl*>a7, fofej/tons, tbingi pofleffed : The jnafter, *uRr,pb&. See Ariiloph. Plut. ;fr. 4. The $e&. 3^ on SHAKESPEARE. 25? excrefcencies, left with thefe you tear in pieces the poet himfelf. Jam farce fepulto, Pane pias fcelerare manus. 7tre morn Begins Her rofy PROGRESS /miling, XI. !?. Shakefp. in K. Henry IV. Aft III. Ibe heavenly -barnef s 1 d team Begins bis golden PROGRESS in the eajl. Sceptred King, If, 43. Horn. II. '. 279. Thou my SHADE Inferrable, muft with me along, X, 24$. Hor. L. 2. 8. fpeaking of thofe who attended Maecenas as unbidden gueito. Quos Maecenas adduxerat UMBRAS. And L. I. Ep. 5. Locus eft et pluribus UMBRIS. 'Tis a pretty allufion of conftant attendants in the fun- fhine of fortune, and who cannot then be eafily ftiaken off. SHAVES with level wing the dtep, II, 634. VirgiL V, 2 1 7, RADIT iter liquidum ctleres neque commo'vet alat. Now morn her rofie ftefs in th" 1 eaftfrn clime Advancing, SOW'D the earth 'with orient pearl, V, I. In Ariftot. poet. K.tp. *a. Sf&xTra ^Xya. Lucretius, Et lumine conferit arva. Virgil, Et jam prima novo fpargebat lumine terras. the violence of Ramie!, VI, 3 7 1 . Virgil, XI, 576. Violent!* Turni. i. e. the violnt Turnus himfelf. SECT. 2% Critical Obfervatlons Rook I. SECT. IV. IT feems no wonder, that the mafculine and nervous Shakefpeare, and Milton, mould fo little pleafe our effeminate taft. And the more I confider our ftudies and amufements, the greater is the wonder they mould ever pleafe at all. The childifh fancy and love of falfe orna- ments follow us thro* life ; nothing being fo dif- pleafmg to us, as nature and fimplicity. This admiration of falfe ornaments is vifibly feen even in our relifh of books. After fuch examples, can we ftill admire, that rattle of the Mufes, a jingling found of like endings tag'd to every line ? Whilft we have ftill preferved fome noble remains of antiquity, and are not entirely void , of true genius's among our own nation, what taft mufl it mew, to fly for amufements to the crude productions of an enQaved nation ? Yet this is our reigning taft : from hence our law- givers are taught to form their lives and con- duct, with a thorough contempt of ancient learning, and all thofe, whofe inclinations lead them thro* fuch untrodden paths, But this perhaps will not appear fo furprifing, when 'tis confidered, that the more liberal fciences and humane letters, are not the natural - growth of thefe Gothic and northern regions, We Sect. 4. on SHAKESPEARE. 29 We are little better than fons and fucceflbrs of the Goths, ever and anon in danger of relapfing into our original barbarity. And how far the corruption of even our ' public diverfions may contribute i. Becaufe thefe may be abufed, fome, contrary to all rules of logic, have argued therefore they ftiould entirely be aboliftfd ; as if, becaufe my little finger pain'd me, I fhould have my whole arm cut off. Prynne, with the whole tribe of puritans, reafon'd after this manner. What then, mall we think of St. Paul, who cites the plays of the Athenian ftage in his graveft epiftles ? He has a whole line from the Thais of Menander in his firft epiftle to the Co- rinthians, XV, 33. 0ti:n>' jj'flaj xfio-Q'' opitiat nemsft. 'Tis well known the Jews had many dramatic pieces among them, (tho* not perhaps defign'd for the ftage) taken from ftories out of their own chronicles ; fuch fcems the book of Job. To me it appears almoft evident, that St. Jude alludes to a kind of dramatic poem j [yet Michael the archangel when contending with the Devil, he difputetl about the body of Mofes, durji not bring againji him a railing accufation, but Jaid, the Lord rebuke thee. if. 7.] where Michael and the Devil were introduced difputing about the burial of Mofes. The ftory might be taken from fome old Rabbinical comment upon thelaft chapter in Deuterono- my, and the fubjeft might be, The death of Mofes. But not play-books only, but all books of elegance hav* thefe, worfe than Goths and Vandals, attacked : and thefe in- deed muft be firft deftroyed, before their own barbarity can take place. How contrary a ch^ra&er was that of the Apo- ftle Paul ? How politely does he addrefs the Athenians with citations go Critical Obfervations Book I. contribute to the corruption of our manners, may be an inquiry not unworthy the civil magi- ftrate : citations from their own Poets ? How learnedly does he charafterize the Cretans, with humour quoting a verfe from a prophet, as he there calls the religious poet Epimenides ? [not afya-] Nor mould the elegant addrefs of the Apoftle to the Corinthian women be pafled over, i Cor. XI. 10. Ai raro c^ston v ywn l&a-ictv rp^tiv ITT* T? xe^aX^', AIA TOYS AITEAOYE. There were books in vogue among them (a fort of romances) that told them tales of angels falling in love with women. This is alluded to by Jofephus in his antiquities, L. I. c. IV. "AyytXot SEW yvmii-t crvp^yifas vu-? iyiiyo-ctr ma^ct*;, from a miftaken text in Gen. c. vi. jK 4. which Milton has rightly explained Par. Loft, XI. 621. &c. And hinted at the other opinion. V, 446. If ever t tken, Then bad the Sons of God excufe /' have been Enamoured at that fight. Some of the Rabbins fay Eve was fo beautiful, that the prince of angels fell in love with her, which occasioned his fall. Now thefc ftories were believed by the women in the Apoftle's time ; he puto them in mind therefore of thefe received opinions, and condefcends to reafon on their own hypothefis : for the angels fake then veil your faces, &c. From a like hypothefb the Apoftle, Ephef. ii. 2. calls Satan a prince of the air. But above all will be feen the learned elegance of Paul, when he came to Mars's court Se&. 4. on SHAKESPEARE. 31 ftrate : lawgivers of old did not deem it beneath their care and caution. You may fee what a ftrefs ts laid court at Athens ; for even then, tho' their fortune w changed, the Athenians were renowned for arts and fciences : "A^f? 'A0>jva*oi, xctla. fVfuufe u<; &0-$i/*onr8$ /*? Stugu. Ye men of Athens, I fee that in all things you are very religi- oxs. There is great art in the Apoftle's ufing a word of a middle fignification : &fiofrfs- This the Athenians took as a complement ; and for this zeal in religion they were praifed by their orators and poets. Then mentioning the infcription he faw on an altar, TO THE UNKNOWN GOD, [fee Paufan. in Eliacis, Lucian in Philop. PhiloftraU de vita Apoll. VI, 2.] he takes occafion to fpeak td them of God ; and he fpeaks to them in fuch a manner, that they imagined one of their own philosophers difcourfing to them. Qvx. i %ctgc7ro>jT Before all temples, tfr upright heart and pure. See i Cor. Hi. 16, 17. i Cor. vi. 19. 2 Cor. vi. 16. The apoftle goes on, En-ciW rs 1| wo a^atlot irZv I'O*-. This common relationship between mankind was a conflant topic f 32 Critical Obfervations Book I. laid on mufical entertainments alone, in Plato's republic. Nor did the ftatefman Cicero, in his laws, think Plato's an idle notion. 2 Quamobrem ilk quidem fapientiffimus Graeciae vir, longeque doRiffimuSi valde bane labem veretur : negat enim mutari poj/e muficas leges fine immutatione legum publicarum. Ego autem nee tarn valde idtimendum, nee plane contemwndum puto. Matters of thefe con- of the academy and porch. Hence the Emperor Marcus Anton. XII, 26. ej cvyyiviia. diQgwira r^oj Era TO utfyuK-cKiv y!. [where s is for a ftoo] Even Lucretius could fay, caelejli fumus omnesfemine orinndi ; Omnibus ille idem pater eft. The apoftle however does not cite the philofophers, but even a poet to witnefs this truth, Aratus. So far they Kftened and acquiefced. But when he began to introduce his grand do&rine, of one, not only being fent into the world to teach mankind the will of God, but of this divine perfon's being raifed from the dead : this aara0-? they could not bear ; their old poet Aefchylus had told them, "A7ra| Savofl- T? er' aWrac-tJ. Eumen. 651. The hubbub began, and the Apoftle was obliged abruptly to break off his difcourfe. 'Tis a fubjecl deferring confidera- tion, how blind zeal and fuperftition on one hand, and open profligacy and contempt of religion on the other, tend equally alike to lead us die fame road to ignorance. 2. Cicero de Leg. II, 15. Plato's words are, E~ia<& yp KA1NON [lego, KOINQN] pww .a/Ia&t'W.tH' t&a&Tn*, Pbilemonii, Alexis fabellv Sec*t. 4, 0# SHAKESPEARE. 35 couraged, but the originals were burnt and de- ftroyed. If any furvived this religious mafiacre, 'twas partly owing to fome particular attach- ment to a favourite author, and partly to meer accidental caufes. About the fame time the northern nations difmantled the empire, and at length left it an eafy prey to the Turk. If we turn our eyes to our own country, we cannot go farther than the invafion of Julius Caefar, without being immerged in legends and romances. But even in that late period of arts and fciences, our Britifh barbarity was fo very notorious, that our 5 inhofpitality to ftrangers, our poverty and meannefs, and our ignorance of every fabellas, et Sappbui, Erinnae t Anacreontis, Minermimi, [MimnermC\ Bionis, Akmanis, Alcaei carmina intercidijje, turn pro his fubf.ituta Nazianzeni nojlri poemdta ; quae, ctfi excitant animos nojlrorum hotr.intim ad Jlagrantiortm rcligionis cultum, non tamen $t xatla <7Vf&ir)Xo$. *H ftiv ya,^ isfvilhtlo f<.f/)- cacQau a^xajxiay at'-nT;, 15 a'fAa^Tia. *H $1 T nr^osXfVSai f*i7 opfii;?, Kola. *vp6t*of. After YI a/*Tt, by the tran- fcrib?r's negligence, $' elvrw is omitted. The paflage I would thus read, Avr^ li T? nron:lx hrlri v erfe,~] lut when ?; dntfcs ignorant ly, the fault is accidental [ per accidens, ~^ 7 o illuftrate from Shakefpeare. The apufia x6' UVT^S, Jtc historical tranfaclions of York and Lancafter : the making Seft.5- cn SHAKESPEARE. 4I for he fhould have rejected what was incapable of embelifhment. But in thofe (tares where his imagination has greater fcope, and where he can " lye without being contradicted, there he reigns without a rival. making choice of fuch a ftory as the Winter 's Tale, Sec. The f*lia xaia evpk&Giitos, is where Shakefpeare, not heeding geography, calls Delphi an ifle, in the Win- ter's Tale, Aft III. Not knowing phyfic fays fleurific, inftead of fletbory, in liamlet, Aft IV. With others of the like nature. 1 1. Homer knew the whole art of lying t and has taught other poets the way. As^a^e SI Horace has given this an elegant turn in his art of poetry, J-iSf'. Atque it a menfitur, Jic verts falfa remifcet, Pritno ne vtedium, media ne (lifer epet imum. SECT. V. BU T perhaps our poet's art will appear to greater advantage, if we enter into a detail, and a minuter examination of his plays. There are many who, never having red one word of Ariftotle, gravely cite his rules, and talk of the unities of time and place, at the very mention- ing Shakefpeare's name ; they don't feem ever to have given themfelves the trouble of confx- dering, whether or no his ftory does not hang i together, 42 Critical Otfervations Book I. together, and the incidents follow each other naturally and in order , in fhort whether br no he has not a beginning, middle and end. If you will not allow that he wrote ftrictly tragedies -, yet it may be granted that he wrote dramatic heroic poems ; in which, is there not an imita- tation of one action, ferious, entire, and of a juft length, and which, without the help of nar- ration, raifes pity and terror in the beholders breaft, and refines the perturbed paffions ? So that he fully anfwers " ' that end, which both at " the firft and now, was and is, to hold as 'twere " the mirrour up to nature ; to mew virtue her " own feature, fcorn her own image, and the *' very age and body of the time, his form " and preffure." Let us fuppofe Shakefpeare has a mind to paint the fatal effects of ambition. For this purpofe he makes choice of a hero, well known from the Britifh chronicles, and as the ftory had a particular relation to the king then reigning, 'twas an interefting ftory ; and though full of machinery, yet * probable, becaufe the won- derful 1. Hamlet, Aft III. he feems to have had in his mind \vhat Donatus in his life of Terence cites from Cicero, Comoedia ejl imitatio lcolme ; who ordered his fol- 4iers to hew them down a bough, and bear it before them to Dunfmane. E 3 any 54 Critical Obfervations Bbok I; any where can parallel it, but that moft fublime paflage in Virgil, where the great fucCeffofs of Aeneas pafs in review before the hero ? 3 eyes. Our poet's doling with a compliment to James the firft upon the union, equals Virgil's compli- ment to Auguftus. The variety of characters with their different manners ought not to be pafTed over in filence. Banquo was as deep in the murder of the king, as fome of the I7 Scotilh writers inform us, as Macbeth. But Shakefpeare, with great art and addrefs, deviates from the hiftory. By thefe means his characters have the greater variety ; and he at the fame time pays a compliment to king Jame.s, who was lineally defcended from Banquo. There is a thorough honefty, and a love of his country in Macduff, that diftinguifhes him from all the reft. The characters of the two "kings, Duncan and Macbeth, are finely contrafted ; fo are thofe of the two women, lady Macbeth and lady Macduff. l j . Igitur' re cum intimis amicorum, in qvibus erat BANQJJO, communicata, regent cppyrtummi infidiis ad E n, ourat & go [oi tiffins ^ vyyiticu;. ri l WOIIJT. Ki$. tl . But a machine may be ufed tut of the aclion of tbe drama, either to explain fame things that tave already happened, (which 'tis impoJJ&le otberwift fur a. man to ie acquainted with ) or that may ha^en hereafter, cntcnring ivbicb ive want to be informed. The murder of the Se&. 6. on SHAKESPEARE. $g of the murdered king was ufually feen to walk on a platform before the palace, where the cen- tinels kept guard. There was a foldier, who doubting this tale, came on the platform out of curiofity, the king is a fact of this fort, which could not be known but by a machine. Machines thus introduced add furprife and majefty to the incidents : nor are they improbable, if according to the received and vulgarly-believed opinions ; as the ghoft in Hamlet, th^ witches in Macbeth, &c. The epic poet has greater latitude : hisjpeciofa miracula are received more eafily ; he tells you ftories ; the tragedian reprefents them, and brings them before your eyes. Segnius irritant animot demijfa per aurem, uam quae funt oculis fubjeffajidelibus. Hor. art. poet. 1 80. Now what is marvellous, and out of the vulgar road, is highly pleafing. What Ariftotle fays to this purpofe is worth our notice. I will give his words as they feem to me they {hould be printed and corrected. A?. *} watch Se#. 6. o;2 SHAKESPEARE. 61 watch upon the platform. At the ufual hour the ghoft enters, and draws Hamlet apart to tell him his dreadful tale, which was improper for the reft to be acquainted with. Our hero determines upon his behaviour, and * fwears the centinels to fecrefy. However, upon fecond thoughts, he does not know but the apparition might be the 4 devil, that affumed his father's ihape : he will therefore have furer foundations to proceed on, before he puts his intended revenge in execution j and an expedient offers itfelf : for certain players arriving at court, are inftructed by him to play 3. He fwears them on his fword, very foldier-like, and agreeable to the ancient cuftom of his country. Nor is this lefs fcholar-like in our poet. Jordanes in his Gothic hiftory mentions this cuftom, Sacer [glzdi\is']apiu/Syt&arum reges Jemper habitus. Ammianus Marcellinus relates the fame ceremony among the Hunns. L. 31. c. 2. Hence our learned Spencer, B. 5. c. 8. ft. 14. And fwearing faith to either on his Hade. The fpear was held equally facred. Ab origins rerum pro diis immortalibus veteres bajlas coluere. Juftin. L. 43. c. 2, The fpears, they called fcepters^ fo Paufanias informs us : and this explains to us that paflage in Homer, where Achilles fwears by his fcepter, which he hurls to the ground. /'. e. his fpear. II. . 234. and 245. 4. Oreftes, in Euripides, Ele&r. -jr. 979, has the very fame doubt, that Hamlet has. Oreftes. T A^ tJr' AaVw ilw' aVuxao-Bti? $if ; Eleft. "li^sv xa0{lw Teiwe^ ; lyu pit a Soxu. fome- 62 Critical Obfet -vations Book I. fomewhat before the king like the murder of his father. I'll obferve bis looks, I'll tent bim to the quick j // be but blench^ I know my courfe. And here our poet takes an opportunity to pay ' a fine compliment to his own art, s P ve beard that guilty creatures at a play, Have by tbe very cunning of tbe fcene Been Jlruck fo to the foul, that prefently 'They have proclaimed their makfaftiom. This making of a play within a play, befides introducing fome ftrokes of fatyre on former tragedians, mews, by the comparifon, to what perfection our poet brought tragedy, which after him made no further progrefs. There was ufually in the beginning of every act a dumb mew, be- ing a fymbolical reprefentation of what the au- 5. "Tis plain Shakefpeare alludes to a ftory told of Alex- ander the cruel tyrant of Pherae in Theffaly, who feeing a famous tragedian aft the Troades of Euripides, was fo fenfibly touch'd, that he left the theatre before the play was ended ; being aftiamed, as he owned, that he, who never pitied thofe he murdered, (hould weep at the fufferings of HECUBA and Andromache. See Plutarch in the life of Pelopidas. Wbaft HECUBA to bim, or be to HECUBA, that bejhould vjeepfQr her ? diencc Sect. 6. on SHAKESPEARE. 63 dience were to expect , who were well dealt with, if after all they could guefs at the poet's mean- ing inveloped in a figurative and bombaft ftile. But why do I enter into a detail of particular beauties, where the whole is beautiful ? Divine juftice at length overtakes the tyrant in his fe- cure'ft hours, and the poet is true to the caufe of virtue. The Electra of Sophocles, in many inftances, is not very unlike the Hamlet of Shakefpeare. Aegyfthus and Clytemneftra, having murthered the former king, were in pofieflion of the crown, when Oreftes returned from Phocis, where he had been privately fent by his fifter Electra. Thefe two contrive, and foon after effect the punimment of the murtherers. Electra is a Grecian woman, of a mafculine and generous difpofition of mind ; me had been a witnefs of the wickednefs of thofe two mifcreants, who had barbaroufty plotted the death of her father, the renowned Agamemnon : his ghoft called for juftice , and me herfelf, rather than they mall efcape, will be the inftrument of vengeance. Thus when Clytemneftra calls out to Oreftes, O fan, Ofon, have mercy on thy mother ! [from within, Electra replys, For theejhe felt no mercy, or thy father. Clyt. Ob, Pm wounded. [from within. Elect. Double the blow, Orejtes. There 64 Critical Obfervations Book I. There is a vaft affectation of lenity in mankind: and I am inclin'd to believe that an Englim au- dience would fcarcely bear this Grecian character. Soon after Oreftes kills Aegyfthus, and, that this piece of juftice maybe a greater expiation to the manes of the murdered king, he kills him in the fame place where Aegyfthus had killed Agamemnon. SECT. VII. THO* people in a lower ftation of life take a peculiar fatisfaction in feeing wickednefs in high places brought to punifhment ; yet are they no lefs pleafed, when the poet condefcends to bring matters home to themfelves, by paint- ing the pafiions of a more domeflic nature. Such a paflion is Jeakujie -, to the fatal effects of which, the peafant is equally fubject as the prince. 1 An unhappy young woman (for fo her name fignifics) falls in love with a commander in the Venetian ft- rvice, who had entertain'd her with a ro- mantic account of his own exploits -, and hearken- ing to no advice, but her own mifplaced incli- nations, i. Dido's cafe feenis exa&ly like that of Dcfdemoiw. The Dux T/ojattas told lici 1m wonderful adventures by lea and land, of irichantmcnts, mouAcrs, ,^c. 'Zhefetohear diJ DiJo ferioufly incline. I Haerent Sect, 7. OTZ SnAKESPEAkE. 65 nations, fhe marries him. There was an officer under him, cunning and hypocritical, with an appearance of great honefty : he thought he had been wronged by his captain both in his bed, and in having another preferred before him. This Hat rent infixi pftfore VULTUS V t H B A qite . She confults her fitter, <%u$s N ovus hie ttojiiis fuccejjjtt fedibus bofpes ! Qutm ftfe oreferem ! quam forti petto re et armis I Heu quibus ille Jaflatus fatis ! quae bella exhaujla canelat ! If indeed (be could harbour any notions of a fecond lover, Aeneas was the man ; but that was far from her thoughts f " No, if I ever think of another lover, may " The filler, a fine lady, knew what advice fhe would follow, viz. what her inclinations perfuaded her to, Holane per pet ua maerens carper e jiwentd ? Nee dulces natos, Generis ntc praemia noris ? Id cinerem, aut manes credit curare fepultos ! In fliort the hero, by chance, foon after meets his rnifrrefs in a cave : a fort of a match is huddled up between ^m : and he, having gain'd his ends, watches an opportunity, and leaves her to defpair and death. That even a religious lawgiver, and a founder of an empire mould be caught with love, is no great wonder ; but that he fhould complicate his crime with cruelty and treachery, is not this foinewhat out of character ? And has not the poet a hard taflc to L* ing him fairly off, by the help of even his pagan deities ? F to 66 Critical Obfervations Book I. to him feem'd fufficient reafon for revenge ; and cafting how to put his revenge in execution, no readier way offered itfelf, than to ftir up Othello to jealoufy, whofe temper naturally led him to that fatal pafiion. Jealoufy often arifes from an opinion of our own defects to pleafe ; and Othello had too much reafon to be apprehenfive of fuch defects in himfelf ; as he was by complexion a Moor, and declined in years. The art of the poet is beyond all praife, where he makes lago kindle by degrees the flames of Othello's jealous temper, which burfting out into rage and fury, occafions firft the deftrudion of his wife, and loon after his own. SECT. VIII. THESE three plays, of which I have above given a Ihort Iketch, end with an unhappy cataftrophe -, and all the ftories are finely calcu- lated to raife the tragical paflions, grief, pity, and terror. 'Tis fomewhat ftrange, at the firft thought, that people ihould take any kind of delight to Ice iccnes of diftrefs : yet even x fhipwrecks and florins i. Lucretius II, i. Sec. This is faid of the vulgar. The phifofophcr receives no pleaiure from fuch objefts, but prevents the paffion of grief, by confidering the neceflary and natural connexion, and relation of things. Storms and Se#. 7. on SHAKESPEARE. 67 ftorms at fea, when beheld from the fhore , and embattled armies viewed with fafety from afar, raile a mixed kind of pleafure in the fpeclator, partly from novelty, and partly from a pity of the misfortunes of other men, not without a re- collection of his own fecurity. Now if the tragic mufe can raife the paffions, and refine them too, is fhe not the hand-maid of philofophy ? But however it muft be confefled, that if any of Shakefpeare's plays be plainly proved to have variety of fables and actions, independent each of the other, with no neceflary or probable con- nexion, then muil thefe plays be faulty, and ac- cording to the common expreflion, without head or tail -, like the picture defcribed by * Horace, a mixture of incoherent and monftrous parts. Whereas in every poem there mould be a natural union, as in a well proportion'd human body, where all is homogeneal, united, and compact together, fo as to form a J whole. It and tempefts, the violent effe&s of the perturbed paflions, &c. have no beauty confidered by themfelves ; yet they arc 2. Horace in his art of poetry, $. i. &c. 3 . A 'whole is that -which has a beginning, middle and end. The beginning fitppofes nothing wanting before it/elf ; and requires fometbing after it : the middle fttppofes fomething that fiuent before y And requires fomething to follow after : the end require! nothing after itfelf, but Jutyofes fomething F 2 that 68 Critical Qbfervations Book I. It does not follow, becaufe a hero is one man, that the fable is therefore one ; for one 4 man might that %oti before. Arillot. chap. vii. The ghoft informs Hamlet he had been murder'd : this is an exadt begin- ning; no one wants to know any thing antecedent, but only the oonfequences ; which are the middle : the murderer being deftroyed, the Itory ends, and nothing is required after. Othello privately marries Defdemona ; this is the beginning : his jealoufy is the middle : the effe&s of his jealoufy are the end. Macbeth's ambition is roufed by the prediction of the witches ; this is the beginning : his procuring the crown by murder is the middle : his punifh- ment, being the eftecls of his ambition, is the end. And thefe ftories are fuch, as the memory can eafily comprehend and retain, as a whole ; e-jp^ovst/lo*. Juit as beautiful objeds, being neither vaft, nor diminutive, can eafily be meafured by one united view of the eye ; Ei/ViWIo*. Ariftot. xitp. '. Thus in all things that are beautiful unity is evi- dent ; by this, relations and proportions are difcovered : but where there is no idea of a whole, there is no idea of order ; and confequently no beauty. 4. The unity of the hero alone does not preferve the unity of the fable : nor is- the poet to give a historical recital cf the acts of Thefeus, or Hercules ; nor, like Statius, to defcribe the whole hero, Nos ire per cmnem, Sic amor eft t beroa we/is. By this means the unity of the aftion is deftroyed, as well as the Simplicity. ex duntaxat ft unum. Hor. art. p. jfr. 23. To Seft. 8. on SHAKESPEARE. 69 might be employed in variety of a&ions, and fables. So that to defcribe the whole hero, or the life and death of kings, and to make a hifto- To this purpofe Ariftotle in his poetics, chap. viii. Xtf Si, TK 'XXK fupuSluuiSf *> /*> ^^0-^ Iv6<; In*, /**? rayrrj? oXn;, % T* fisgj) Wra TWK ta^a.^tLtuv iniAHAON, [lege EDI TO OAON,] ^{ fto^on TOYTO [fcribe TOYTOY] ?r. ^ / o/^r imitations, that which a man imitates is one jingle thing ; Jo the fable, being the imitation of an aftion, ought to be one, and that too a ivbo/e ; and the parts Jbould fo correfpond, that one cannot be removed^ tranfpofed or retrenched, without making a change in the whole. Tor whatever can be added or left out, yet fo as fo make nothing for the 'whole, cannot be any part of that whole. Again in chap, xxiii. Tawrj) t in refpetl to other poets, herein appears divine, in that he treats not of the whole war, tho"" it has a beginning, and an end : for it would be too great, and not to be comprehended at one *vie*iv : or fuppofe be could have reduced it to a jujt extent, yet he would have been perplexed with fuch a variety of incidents. J$ut now taking one part only of the war, he introduces a great number of eft f odes. F 3 rical yo Critical Obfirvations Book I. rical detail of particular fads, is writing chroni- cles, not poems. But has not Shakefpeare been guilty of this very fault ? Are not feveral of his plays called hiftorical plays The life and death of King John The life of K. Henry VIII. with many more of the like nature ? And did not he think, that the unity of the hero conftituted the unity of the action ? 'Tis true indeed, that the editors of Shakefpeare have given a play of his the tide of The life and d^atb of King John. But who- 11 confider this tragedy, will fee the title mould be, < fbe troubles and death of King John. For John having unjuftly feized the crown, and excluded the rightful heir, his nephew Arthur Plantagenet; the king of France efpoufes the intereft of the young prince. Hence arife king John's troubles, his punifliment and death. The life of K. Henry VIII. would not improperly be entitled, The fall of cardinal Wool fa. The car- dinal is (hewn in the fummit of his power and pride ; and his fall was in a good meafure owing to the king's marriage with Anna Bullen. Here therefore the play mould have ended ; but flattery to princes has hurt the beft poems : and f ijhis, I mail fpeak 5 hereafter. Other plays of our poet are called, Fir/} and fecond parts, teTbtJirjl and fecond parts of king Henry IV. But thefe 5- See below fcft. XIV. plays Sed. 8. M SHAKESPEARE. 71 plays are independent each of the other. 'Tbefrft part, as 'tis named, ends with the fettlement in the throne of king Henry IV. when he had gained a compleat victory over his rebellious fubjects. 6tu. Tragedy at much as pojjtble tries to confine itftlf to one period of the fun y [fpeaking with refpeft to it's fuppofcd diurnal motion} Df to exceed it as little as may bt : the epopaeia it unlimited as to time. Arift. wep TTCI^T. xity. i, The 74 Critical Obfervations Book I. The ftory therefore (which is the principal part, and as it were the very foul of tragedy) being made a whole, with natural dependance and con- nexion ; the fpeftator feldom confiders the * length of time neceflary to produce all thefe incidents, but pafles all that over -, as in Julius Caefar, Macbeth, Hamlet^ and in other plays of our poet. To iropofe on the audience, with refpect to the unity of place, there is an artificial contrivance of fcenes. For my own part, I fee no great harm likely to accrue to the underftanding, in thus accompanying the poet in his magical ope- rations, and in helping on an innocent deceit ; while he not only raifes or fooths the paffions, but tranfports me from place to place, juft as it 2. The real length of time in Julius Caefa r, is as follows, A. U. C. 709. a frantic feftival of Luperci was held in honor of Caefar, about the middle of february, when the regal crown was offer'd him by Antony: March 15, he was (lain. A. U. C. 710. Nov. 27. the triumvirs met at a fmall ifland, formed by the river Rhenus, near Bononia, and there adjufted their cruel profcription. A. U. C. 711. Brutus and Caffius were defeated near Phiiippi. Macbeth reigned feventeen years. So Johan. de Fordin Scoticron. L. iv. C. 45. Macbabtui malignorum vallatus turmis et tpibus praepotem regali dignitate potitus an. dom, MXL. rcgnavit annis XVII But the time is fo artfully paffed. ever, and the incidents fo connected, that the fpe&ator imagines all continued, and without interruption. pleafes Se&. 9. on SHAKESPEARE. 75 pleafes him, and carries on the thread of his ftory. This perpetual varying and fhifting the Scene, is a conftant caufe of offence to many who fet up for admirers of the ancients. 3 Johnfon, who thought 3. In his prologue to Every man in his humour. Sir Philip Sydney, in his defence of poefie, has the following no bad remark. " Our tragedies and comedies, not with* " out caufe cried out againft, obferving rules neither of (t honeft civilitie, nor flcilful poetrie. Excepting Gorbo- * ducke (againe I fay of thofe that I have feene) which " notwithstanding, as it is full of ftately fpecches, and well founding phrafes, climing to tlie height of Seneca his " ftile, and as full of notable moralitie, which it doth mod ' delightfully teach, and fo obtaine the very end of poefie. " Yet in truth it is very defeftuous in the circumftances, *' which grieves me, becaufe it might not remaine as an ' exaft modell of all tragedies. For it is faultie both in " place and time, the two neceflarie companions of all cor- " poral adlions. For where the Itage fliould alwayrepre- " fent but one place ; and the uttermoft time prefuppofed " in it mould bee, both by Ariftotle's precept, and common " reafon, but one day ; there are both many days, and " many places inartificially imagined. But if it be fo in " Gorboducke, how much more in all the reft? where you " jhall have Afia of the one fide and Affricke on the other, ' and fo many other under-kingdoms, that the plaier when " he comes in, muft ever begin with telling where he is, or " elfe the tale will not be conceived. Now (hall you have " three ladies walke to gather flowers, and then we muft beleeve the ftage to bee a garden. By and by we heare I " news 7 6 Critical Obf equations Book I. thought it a poetical fin to tranfgrefs the rules of the Grecians, and old Romans, has this glance at his friend Shakefpeare. 70 make a child now fwaddkd to proceed Man, and then /boo te up in one beard and weed " news of fhipwracke in the fame place, then wee are to " blame if we accept it not for a rocke. Upon the backe of " that comes out a hideous monfter with fire and fmoke, " and then the miferable beholders are bound to take it for " a cave : while in the mean time two armies flie in, repre- " fented with foure fwordes and bucklers, and then what " hard heart will not receive it for a pitched field ? Now of " time they are much more liberal : for ordinarie it is, th^t " two young princes fall in love ; after many traverfes fhee " is got with childe, delivered of a faire boy, hee is loft, " groweth a man, falleth in love, and is ready to get another " childe; and all this in two houres fpace : which how " abfurd it is in fenfe, even fenfe may imagine. * * * But " befides thefe groffe abfurdities, how all their playes bee " neither right tragedies, nor right comedies, mingling " kings and clownes, not becaufe the matter fo carrieth it, " but thruft in the clowne by head and moulders to play a " part in majefticall matters, with neither decency nor dif- " cretion : fo as neither the admiration and commiferation, " nor the right fportfulneffe, is by their mongrell tragi- " comedy obtained. * * * I know the ancients have one " or two examples of tragicomedies, as Plautus hath " Amphrituo. But if we marke them well, we mall finde " that they never, or very daintily match home-pipes and " funerals. * * The whole trad of a comedie fhould be full of delight, as the tragedie fcould be ftill maintained " in a well raifed admiradon." Pajt Sett. 9. on SHAKESPEARE. 77 Paft tbreefcore years, or with three rufty fiver ds, And help of fome few + foot-and-half-foote words 5 Fight over Tcrke and Lancafter's longjarres, And in the tyring-houfe bring wounds to fcams. He rather frays you will be pleas' d to fee One fuch, to day, as other plays Jhould be. b Where neither chorus wafts you o*re thefeas Sec. And again in his play, Every man out of his humour : Mit. How comes it then, that in fame one play ws fee fo many feas, countries and kingdoms, paft over with fuch admirable dexter itie ? Cor. O, that but fhews how well the autbours can travaile in their vocation, and out-runne the apprebenjion of their auditory. Whether the unity of time and place is fo ne- ceflary to the drama, as fome are pleafed to re- quire, I cannot determine ; but this is certain, the duration mould feem uninterrupted, and the ftory ought to be one. 4. Sef$uipeJalia verba. Hor. Art. Poet. -jr. 97^ 5. Thofe three plays relating the hiftory of K.. Henry VI. are much the worfi of Shakefpeare's plays. 6. In Shakefpeare's K. Henry V. SECT. 7 8 Critical Qbfervations Book I, SECT. X. \ A S dramatic poetry is the imitation of an M\* action, and as there can be no action but what proceeds from the manners and the fenti- mcnts , manners and fentiments are its eflential parts ; and the former come next to be con- fidered, as the fource and caufe of action. 'Tis action that makes us happy or miferable, and 'tis manners, whereby the characters, the various inclinations, and genius of the perfons are mark- ed and diftinguilhed. There are four things to be obferved in manners. I. That they be ' good. Not only ftrongly marked and diftinguiftied, but good in a moral fenfe, as far forth as the character will allow. A Thais of Menander was as moral, as you could fuppofe a courtefan to be -, and fo were all Menander' s characters, as we may judge from his tranflator Terence. They were good in a moral, common, and ordinary acceptation of the word, not in a high philofophical fenfe. In Homer, the parent of all poetry, the angry, the inexorable Achilles has valour, friendlhip, and a contempt of death. In Virgil, the trueft of I. "E* f*l? xj w^rra* oWj Xfr.ra, 4. Ariifat. csji TTO^T. xsp. it. his Se6t 10. on SHAKESPEAR. 79 his copyers, even Mezentius, the cruel and athe- iftical tyrant, finely oppofed to the pious Aeneas, when he refolves not to furvive his beloved fon Laufus, raifes fome kind of pity in the reader's breaft, 1 Aejluat ingens Imoin corde PUDOR, miftoyte infama luflu, Et furiis agitatus AMOR, et CONSCIA VIRTUS. Milton would not paint the Devil without fome moral virtues ; he has not only valour and con- duct, but even compaflionate concern, f Thrice be ajf~afd y and tMce infyight offcorn Tears fucb as Angels weep, burft forth. and prefers the general caufe, to his own fafety and eafe. * Nor f air d they to exprefs how much theyprais t d 9 That for the general fafety he defpfd , His own. So that the Devil's character has every thing agreeable to the modern notions of a hero , but nothing of thofe chriftian characters) humility and refignation to the will of God , the great and chara&eriftic virtues of chriftianity, which our divine epic poet would chiefly inculcate. 2. Virgil. Acn. X, 870. 3, Milt. Par. 1. I, 619. 4. Milt. II. 480. But 8o Critical Observations Book I. But what fhall we fay then of fuch characters, as a Polyphemus, Cacus, Caliban, the Harpies, and the like monftrous, and out of nature pro- ductions ? They feem to be in the poetical world, what in the natural are called lufus naturae ; fo thefe are lufus poetici, the fportive creations of a fertil imagination, introduced, by the bye, to raife the paffions of admiration and abhorrence ; and indeed they are fo far under-parts, as to be loft in the grand action. Upon thefe principles I cannot defend fuch a character as Richard III. as proper for the ftage. But much more faulty is the Jew's character, in The Merchant of Venice , who is cruel without neceflity. Thefe are not pictures of human creatures, and are beheld with horror and de- teftation. In this poetical painting of the manners of men, it ought to be remember'd, that 'tis the human creature in general fliould be drawn, not any one in particular. Now man is of a mixed nature, virtue and vice alternately prevailing ; it being as difficult to find a perfon thoroughly vi- tious, as thoroughly virtuous. Thus Philofo- phers who make human nature their ftudy fpeak of it , and thus the * greateft of all philofophers, having touched upon the character of the mifan- 5. Socrates in Plato's Phaedo. p. 89, 90. edit. H. Steph. i thrope, io. en SHAKESPEARE^ 81" thrope, adds, AijAov OTJ vw TEXNH2 ftif zrttf T# profefs a hatred of mankind and fociety, and would paint human nature ill, want art^ and are but bunglers in the fcience they profefs. For it muft be by long habit, and unnatural practice, that a man can become void of humanity and human affections : fmce, as our * mafters in this wan-fcience have obferved, even public rob- bers are not often without focial and generous principles. Whenever, therefore, a human crea- ture is made to deviate from what is fair and good, the poet is unpardonable if he does not Ihew the motives which led him aftray, and dazled his judgment with falfe appearances of happinefs. Mean while how beautiful is it to 6. Plato in rep. 1. i. p. 351. edit, Steph. AOXE<{ jj roXiv v> r^oloTnJov rj Xr)ra?> ^ xXswla?, ? a'^Xo T e'fly^, cftt xotfjj \ir\ Tt %] a.S'ixui;, cr^a| at Tt SvnctcrQctt, tl aSutuir 7vX)jXBs ; Cicero in Off. II. 1 1. Cujus [juftitiae] tanta. vis eft, tit nee illi quidem, qui maleficio et feeler e pafcuntur t pojfint fine ulla particula juftitiae rvwere . Epift. 1.2. c. 2O. rt xj j sXata cra^n' j*j fee $2 Critical Obfervatiom Book 1. fee the ftruggles of the mind, and the pafiions at variance ; which are wanting in the fteady villain, or fteady philofopher ? and thefe are characters that feldom appear on the ftage of the world. But what is tragic poetry without paflion ? In a word, 'tis ourfelves, and our own paflions, that we love to fee pictured ; and in thefe reprefentations we feek for delight and inftruction. II. The manners ought to be 7 fuitabk. When the poet has formed his character, the perfon is to act up to it. And here the age, the fex, and condition, are to be confidered : thus what is commendable in one, may be faulty in another. An inflance of the fuitablenefs of character we have in Milton, where Eve withdraws when me finds her hufband and the angel entring on ftu- dious thoughts abftrufe. * Her bufband tbe relater Jhe prefer' d Before tbe angel-, and of him to a/k Cbofe ratber : He, Jhe knew, would intermix Gratejul dignjjions^ andfohe bigb difpute With conjugal careffes. When he gave thefe fuitable manners to Eve, he had in his mind Plato's great art, fo much com- "-.-"*. Anil. <=-; KMT. xt$. . Redder eperfmatfcit coitveniiKtia cuiqHf. Hor. poet. ^.316. 8. Par. loft. VIII, 40. i mended Sect. 10: on SHAKESPEARE; 83 mended by 9 Cicero, in making old Cephalus withdraw in the firft book of his republic on the pretence of a facrifice. Shakefpeare feems to me not to have known fuch a character as a fine lady ; nor does he ever recognize their dignity. What tra- montanes in love are his Hamlets, the young Percy, and K. Henry V. ? Inftead of the lady Bettys, and lady Fannys, who mine fo much in modern comedies, he brings you on the ftage plain Mrs. Ford and Mrs. Page, two honeft good-humoured wives of two plain country gentlemen. His tragic ladies are rather feen, than heard j fuch as Miranda, Defdemona, Ophelia, and Portia. So Lavinia isjuftfhewn in Virgil, innocent, and quiet. But Juno is a Fury ; Dido and her fifter Anna plot together to debauch the pious prince of the Trojans. On this fide they fet the fleet on fire ; on that, they blow the trumpet to fedition. And even a heroine 9. Cic. ad Att. 1. IV. ep. 16. )uod in it's libris, quo* laudas, perfonam dejtderas fcaevotae, non earn teme're dimovi : fed fed idem, quod in -n-cXmia, deus Hie nojler, Plato : cum in Piraeeum Socrates 'venij/et ad Cepbalum, locupletem et feflivum fenem ; quoad primus ille fermo haberetur, adtft in difputando fenex : deinde cum ipfe qucqae commodffime locutus ejftt, ad rem dilf ctifOGHtnvtia-i T, i) y^ aVcpatvovlaj ytupr.t. Ariftot. -ETE^* croi!T. *j^>. r- And prefently after, Atxsa $l t e oT; aaeoXuxivuet TI us Irix, n w? x trx, n xafi^Aa TI Vc^s;Ici1ai. Again, Ks. iS. "Er ^ *ati Trx ^av6t> TaT-a, [legC TouTa,] oVa t;7ro TB Xo.'s JsT tucc^cc<7Kivat,fffir,tcit' f*ig*> ot TUTUI, ro,TE aTro^kjentira*, xj TO X-Jtjy, >c^ TO -craOn AafiiMUffa^iu' oTtx, ^scx, 11 fooox, o^x, xj co-* Toiat-ra, xj TTI fti.l- ments, ivbich are the proper apparatus of poetic difcourft : their parts arc to demenjirnte t to/o/-ve t and to raij'e the pajfiors, as pity, fear, anger, and the like ; and to eKcreafs ar.d diminijh. 2. Hor. art. poet. 317. Dr. Bentley, not refledling how to feparate hiftorical from poetical truth, has altered this pafTage in his edition ; he reads, Et vivas line duccre i'c;(. r . H 2 raders, ioo Critical ' Obfervations Book I. rafters, the nature and difpofitions of mankind. In this light Shakefpeare is mofl admirable. Can the ambitious, and jealous man have fentiments more expreflive of their manners, than what the poet gives to Macbeth and Othello? Mark Antony, as Plutarch informs us, affected the Afiatic manner of fpeaking, which much re- fembled his own temper, being ambitious, un- equal, and very rodomontade. And 3 Cicero in his Brutus, mentioning the Afiatic manner, gives it the following character: Aliud autem genus eft ncn tamftntentiisfrHpuntaium^ quam verfasvolucre, atqite incitatum ; quails mine eft dfia tota ; nee flutnlni fclum oraticnis, fed etiam exornato^ etfaceto gcihT,; vcrborur.1. This ftyle our poet has very artfully, and learnedly interfperfed in Antony's Speeches. He thus addrefles Cleopatra, 4 Let Rome in Tyber melt y find the wide arch Of the raifd empire fall, here is my fpacc 9 Kingdoms are clay, &c. And again, 5 Theflrirt of NeJJus is upon me ; teach me ^ thou mine anceftor^ thy rage. 3. Cic. in Brut, five de claris orator, f. 95. & f. 13. HIKC AJlatici oratores non contemnendi quidem tec celeritate, nee copid, Jed parum prejjt, et ninris redundantes. 4. Antony and Cleop. Aft I. 5. Ant. and Cleop. Adt IV. alluding to the ftory in Ovid. Met. IX, 2 1 7. Sophocles in Trachin. jK 790, &c. I Let Seft. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. J0 i Let me lodge Licbas on the herns o'tb'moon ; And with thofehands^ tbatgrafpt the heavieft club^ Subdue my wortbieft felf. Nor with lefs art has Shakefpeare exprefied the coquetry of the wanton Cleopatra. "When he defcribes nature diftorted and depraved, as in the characters of the Clown, the Courtier, the Fool, or Madman ; how juftly conformable are the fentiments to the feveral characters ? One would think it impoffible that Falftaff fhould talk otherwife, than Shakefpeare has made him talk : and what not a little mews the genius of our poet, he has kept up the fpirit of his hu- mour through three plays, one of which he wrote at the requeft of queen Elizabeth. For which reafon, if 'tis true what 6 Dryden tells us, fpeak- ing of Mercutio's character in Romeo and Juliet, that Shakefpeare faid hfmfelf, he was forced to kill him in the third act, to prevent being killed by him : it muft be his diffidence and modefty that made him fay this , for it never could be thro* barrennefs of invention, that Mercutio's fprightly wit was ended in the third act ; but be- caufe there was no need of him, or his wit any longer. The variety of humour, exhibited in the feveral characters, deferves no lefs our ad- 6 Dryden's defence of the epilogue : or an efluy on the dramatic poetry of the laft age. H 3 miration i i o 2 Critical Obfervations Book I. miration; and whenever he forms a different perfon, he forms a different kind of man. But when he exercifes his creative art, and makes a 7 new creature, a hag-lorn tyhelp^ not honoured with a human jhape ; he gives him manners, as difproportion'd, as his Jhape, and fentiments pro- per for fuch manners. If on the contrary nature is to be pictured in more beautiful colours j if the hero, the friend, the patriot, or prince ap- pears, the thoughts and fentiments alone give an air of majefty to the poetry, without con- fidering even the lofty exprefllons and fublimity of the diction. What can be more affecting and paflionate than king Lear ? How does the ghoft in Hamlet raife and terrify the imagination of the audience ? In a word, the fentiments are fo agreable to the characters, fo juft and na^ tural, yet fo animated and tranfported, that one would think no other could be poffibly ufed, more proper to the ends he propofes, whether it be to approve or difapprove, to magnify or di^ miniih, to ftir or to calm the paflions. Ut fibi quivis Speret idem ; fudet multum^ fruftraqite labor ef Aujus idem. THE laft and loweft is the diftion or exprejfton, which mould indeed be fuitable to 7. Calfyan, in the Terapeft. the Se6L 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 103 the fubjeft and character ; and every affection of the human mind ought to fpeak in its proper tone and language. Shakefpeare's expreflion is fo various, fo flowing and metaphorical, and has fo many peculiarities in it, that a more minute examination muft be referved for another place. Mean while it may be fufficient to obferve, that for a 8 poet to labour in thefe meer ornamental parts of poetry ; to make his diction fwelling and fplendid, fo as to overlook his plan, and obfcure his manners and fentiments ; is juft as abfurd, as if a painter mould only attend to his colouring and drapery, and never regard tie human face divine. 9 Painting and poetry are two fitter arts i each of them has it's Ihades and lights, and each requires it's proper points of view: each has it's deftgn, as well as colouring ; if the former is defective, the latter is ridiculous. An ugly woman, tricked out in a tawdry drefs, renders herfelfmore notorioufly contemptible by her ufelefs ornaments. 8. T} oXt|i &T twor Ir rsV g/o T 6>j x, T* ? oi*ei ? . The poet Jhould labour in his a'iftion in tbofe places where there is no aSion ; not where there art manners and fentiments ; for both thefe are obfcured where tht diflisn is fplendid and glowing. Ariftot. vi$ TT!T. *tuam verfus inopes rerum nugaeque canorae. SECT. XIIL IF we will confider Shakefpeare's tragedies, as dramatic heroic poems, fome ending with a happy, others with an unhappy cataftrophe ; why then, if Homer introduces a buffoon cha- racter, both among his ' gods and 2 heroes in his IJiad, and a ridiculous moniler 3 Polypheme in his 1 . A limping Vulcan takes upon him the office of Gany- mede. II. *. He advifes the gods not to trouble their heads about wretched mortals. I wonder fome of the commentators, who are fond of fetching every thing from Homer, never thought of making Epicurus fleal his philo- fophy from Vulcan. 2. Therfites. II. '. Where Eufhthius has this remark, ' The tragic poets aim at what is grave and ferious, and *' treat fublimely the events of things. The comedians on the contrary treat things luclicroufly, and leffen them. In Homer tbefe tragic and comic cbaraflers are found mixed ; for he plainly afts the comedian when he leffens and brings down from its heroic ftation, the character of Therfites." 3. The character of Polyphemus appear'd to Euripides fo proper for farce; that from hence he form'd his fatyric P lay, Sect. 13." on SHAKESPEARE; his Odyfiey, might not Shakefpeare in his heroic drama exhibit a Falftaff, a Caliban, or clown ? Here is no mixture of various fables : tho' the incidents are many, the ftory is one. 'Tis true, there is a mixture of characters, not all proper to excite thofe tragic pafllons, pity and terror ; play, The Cyclops. Ulyffes told the monfler his name was OYTIS, or Neman. Polyphemus' eye being put out, he calls to his friends, SI piXoi OYTIE pi XVWH &Xw, a'Jt &ir,$i. In Euripides the fcene is as follows, KYK. OYTJS f* XO. Ow* ^' a^ K.YK. OYTIS f*t XO. Oux ^' T TW^XOS. KYK. fl? W o-J. XO. Kat tffw? cr' TK a Se^ T KYK. rxwVlfK, c' OYTI2 -ma' ri> i XO. QvSctpii, KvxXu;^. Cyc. Neman bath killed me. Cho. 7* no one bath hurt tbte. Cyc. homan puts cut my eye. Cho. Then tbou'rt not blind. Cyc. Would tbou waft jo. Cho. Can no man make tbct blind? Cyc. You mock me ; luhere is Noman ? Cho. Nowhere, Cyclops. the jo6 Critical Observations Book I. the ferious and comic being fo blended, as to Form in fome meafure what Plautus calls 4 tragi- comedy ; where, not two different ftories, the one tragic, the other comic, are prepofteroufly jumbled together, as in the Spanifh Fryar, and Oroonoko : but the unity of the fable being preferred, feveral ludicrous characters are in- terfperfed, as in a heroic poem. Nor does the mind from hence fuffer any violence, being only accidentally called off from the ferious flory, to which it foon returns again, and perhaps better prepared by this little refrefhment. The 5 tragic epifode of Dido is followed by the fports in ho- nor of old Anchifes. Immediately after the 6 quarrel among the heroes, and the wrathful de- bates arifing in heaven, the deformed Vulcan af- fumes the office of cup-bearer, and raifes a laugh among the heavenly fynod. Milton has intro- duced a piece of mirth in his battle of the gods where the evil fpirits, elevated with a little 4. In his prologue to Amphitryo. Faclam ut cwimijja Jit tragicomoedia : Nam me per pet lib facer e ut fit camocdia, Reges quo r veniant ft Dii, no n par arbitror, Quid igitur ? quyniam bic ferwus partes quo^tie habet Faciam proinde* tit dixi, tragicomoediam. 5. Virg. Aen. IV. ^r.d V. 6. Horn. IL . fuccefs, Sct 13. en SHAKESPEARE. 107 fuccefs, ' fiand fcoffing and punning in pkafant win. But thefe are mafterly ftrokcs, and touches of great artifts, not to be imitated by poets who creep on the ground, but by thofe only who (bar with the eagle wings of Homer, Milton, or Shakefpeare. But fo far at leaft muft be acknowledged true of our dramatic poet, that he is always a ftrift obferver of decorum ; and conftantly a friend to the caufe of virtue : hence he fhews, in it's pro- per light, into what miferies mankind are led by indulging wrong opinions. No philofopher feems ever to have more minutely examined into the different manners, paflions, and inclinations of mankind ; nor is there known a character, perhaps that of Socrates only excepted, where refined ridicule, raillery, wit, and humour, were fo mixed and united with what is moft grave and ferious in morals and philofophy. This is the magic with which he works fuch wonders. PeEius imniter (ingit^ Irritaty mulcet^ faljis terrorism implet, Ut magus ; et modo me Tbebis, tnodoponit Atbenis. I T feems to me, that this philofophical mix- ture of character is fcarce at all attended to by the moderns. Our grave writers are dully grave j 7. The fp^eches which Satan and Belial make in derifion, are after the caft of Homer. II. '. 374. and IL *'. 745. and Critical Obfervations Book I/ and our men of wit are loft to all fenfe of gravity. 3 Tis all formality, or all buffoonery. However this mixture is vifible in the writings of Shake- fpeare j he knew the pleafmg force of humour, and the dignity of gravity. And he is the beft inftance, that can be cited, to countenance that famous pafiage in 8 Plato's banquet, where the philofopher makes a tragic and a comic poet both allow, againft their inclinations, that he who according to the beft rules of art was a writer of tragedy, muft be likewife a good writer of comedy. 8. The Banquet was held in Agatho's houfe, a tragic poet. The perfon, who relates, concludes with faying, that having drunken a little too much, and fallen faft afleep, he waked juft about break of day, when he found Agatho the tragedian, and Ariftophanes the comedian difputing with Socrates. Socrates had brought both thefe poets to confefs what is mentioned above. And yet it is obfervable that, among the ancient dramatic writers, the fock and bufkin perhaps never interfered : Sophocles and Euripides never wrote comedies : Ariftophanes and Menander never attempted tragedies. SECT. Se&. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. SECT. XIV. IT is furprifing how, in fo fhort a time, Shakefpeare and Johnfon could bring the ftage to fuch perfection, that after them it received no x farther improvement. But what cannot men of genius effect, when, in an age of liberty, they have power to exert their faculties ? * Popifh I . This is Ariflotle's obfervation on the Grecian ftage, fpcaking of the perfection it was brought to by Sophocles, and Euripides. Ka cu-oXXaj fwhtCofaij fti]CXa cfjV. 1 ' Polydore Vergil, 1. 5. c. 2. " Sol emus -andilcquus faepe ufque ad i>itinm. Quinft. 1. 10. c. i. fhiloftratus, in the life of Apollonius, VI, 6. p. 258. fpeaking of his feveral inventions, adds, "O& E Seft. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. 113 formed his ftory into a regular and tragic fable ; and 6 introduced dialogue between the aftors, omitting the tedious narration of fmgle perfons. His FIATEPA p rijf r^etMiuf auro jyutlo. See Athe- naeus, 1. i. p. 121. Horace fpeaking of him fays, in art, poet. 280. Et docuit magnumque loqui, nitique cotlurno. And Ariftophanes, 'AXX' a riPfiTOS 7u 'E\hwut tsvpyujxi; jV/Aolflt fftpt Kat Xocr{AiC-a{ T^a/ixor Xijfox. This will explain what Ariftotle fays in his poetics, chap. ir. ' ET Si TO f*,*lS^ Ix fMX^ut [A-JQuv, t X/^tw; ycXoioc^, ^tx TO ix eetlv^xa pAm&aKtn, oij/e 9r0-ff*w9i. 5/ however ''tiuat late [e-^i fo he calls it, from the times of Thefpis to Aefchylus, or rather to Sophocles] ier it bad its proptr gravity and grandeur, by getting rid of trifling fables [flories of Bacchus and Silenus] and the burlefque Jlile, ivhicb it received from thofe fatirical pieces. 6. Kat TO,TI rat uVoxgilwx 'Ats-^t'A' ^Ja/s, xj T T xo( yuttrw eoca xupaSiaf wo? 'X'-t, >Jj '^itu^ elsr^afAfwW TO ZflMA ^ $i xotlu, et$gu- 7T4.' Qv?u. We fee therefore nvhat ftrange eyebrotvs there are to the majki ufed in Menander 's comedies ; and hmv the S O D T is distorted, and unlike any hitman creature. Mr. Theobald, in his preface to Shakefpeure, has cited this paflage, and thus corrected it, x^ CTTUI i|ir^f*fUK TO Ippa,, i. e. andhovj the eyes -inere goggled ar.d dijlorttd. But furely, inftead of SfiMA, with little or no variation, it mould be ZTOMA. And this is plain from the reprefentations we have of the comic mafk>, which may be feen in Madam Dac'er's Terence ; and are likewife in an old MS. Terence in the Bouley library at Oxford ; in which mafks the mouth is hideoufly, and ridiculoufly diflorted : and the chief reafon of the mouth being thus formed was, to help the aftor to throw Sect. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. nj likewife, which they fuited to the character to be reprefented, was the invention of Aefchylus: and doubtlefs much more becoming it was, than thofe ridiculous countenances, which the actors gave themfelves, by befmearing their faces with wine-lees : thefe mafks were of fome ufe to thofe who were fpectators at a diftance, as well in helping to diftinguifh the feveral characters, as in aflifting the voice. But however they muft hide all the various changes of the countenance, fo neceflary in a good actor, and more expreflive of paffion than any gefture whatever. Notwith- ftanding the improvements made in tragedy by Aefchylus, yet he lived to fee himfelf excelled by 8 Sophocles. With what rapidity did the tragic mufe thus advance to perfection ? But throw his voice to a greater diftance. This is plain from A. Gellius, lib. 5. c. 7. Perfona, a perfonando ditto, eft: nam caput et os cooperimento perfortae teQum undique, unaque tantum vocis emlttendae t'ia per'vium, quod non vaga tteque diffufa ejl t in unum tantummodo exitum colic flam coatfamque vocem, ft magis claros canorofque fonitus facit. 8. Sophocles was the firft that did not aft his own plays, having but a weak and unharmonious voice. He added a third actor, which critics imagine fufficient to be brought together in converfation in one fcene, for more they fuppofe would occafion embarrafment and confufion. Nee quarta loqui pirfana labortt. I a There I 1 6 Critical Qbfervations Book I. But what muft appear moft ftrange to us mo- derns, is the inexhauftible invention of thefe Attic poets, who could write fo correct, yet fo quick and almoft extemporal. The loweft ac- count of the plays of Aefchylus amounts to above feventy ; Sophocles and Euripides wrote a greater number. The genius of our Shake- fpeare feems to equal any of the ancients, and his invention was fcarce to be exhaufted. Dryden did not come far mort, but he wanted fteady and honeft principles, and that love for his art, which is always requifite to make a compleat artift. For when the mind is filled with great and noble ideas, 'tis no fuch difficult matter to give them a tone and utterance.'; Or as our Platonic 9 Spencer expreffes it ; The noble heart that harbours virtuous thoughts And is with child of glorious great intent^ There is another piece of art of Sophocles' worth notice, and that is, his confuting the genius and abilities of hi& chief aftors, and fitting the parts to them. See Triclinius, or whoever elfe was the writer of this poet's life. Sophocles undoubtedly wrote better plays than Aefchylus : but who has excelled Shakefpeare ? 'Tis remarkable, that the Athe- nians gave leave to the poets to revife the plays of their old bard, and then to bring them on the ftage. So Quinfti- lian informs us, 1. i o. c. i . We have had feveral poets too t .it have attempted the fame with Shakefpeare. 9. In his Fairy Queen, B. 2, c. 12. f, 47. Can Se&. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. Can never reft until it forth have brought Tb* eternal brood of glory excellent. THERE is apaiTage in l6 Plato's Minos, that at firft fight contradicts this account of the original of tragedy, which is there faid to be of a much ancienter date, than the times of Thef- pis. " Dr. Bentley, in his very learned differta- tion on the epiftles of Phalaris, thinks that Plato was miftaken. But this can hardly be allowed in a piece of hiftorical learning, relating to his own country ; if it be confidered too, that Plato was a critic, as well as a philofopher. There are others again who will literally interpret Plato's words, in contradiction to all other authorities. However, if he be here understood, as often he mould, with fome latitude, perhaps the whole difficulty will difappear. Socrates is defending the character of Minos, which had been abufed : " How comes it then (fays fome one) that " Minos has been fo afperfed for a barbarous and " cruel prince ? Why, replies Socrates, if you " have any inclination to have a good name, c * keep fair with the poets, which was not the " cafe of Minos ; for he waged war with this " city, which abounds with arts and fciences, " and with all other forts of poets, as well as 10. Plat, in Min. p. 320, 321, edit. Steph. vol. 2. i-i, Bentl. diflcrt. &c. p. 235, 278. 13 " tragic 1 1 8 Critical Obfervatiom Book I/. <* tragic writers. For here tragedy is of ancient " date, not, as men think, beginning from " Thefpis or Phrynichus j but if you'll examine, " you'll find it an old invention of this ftate. cc For tragedy is a kind of poetry moft proper " to pleafe the people, and to work upon their -' affections." C FI $z -r^dfiu^'at \<;i arA#iaV ivQoife, ? o%ot[4ivq t x' etW &AA ft <7AeQI> xufLuouv o$>f tuolt o oi^ut touxet/, aXA 1 tfieTiovla* wet*. We don't knonu the fever al changes of comedy fo well, becaufe it has not been improved fence it's beginning as much as tragedy. For 'twas late e^re the archon gave the comic chorus: but the aftors played voluntarily. Arifl. xeip. t. 1 4. *H SI aVo ruv TO.

iXtx, a lr^ t t otaf* >of*^of*a. Arift. xttp. $'. And Ariftophancs, if. 260. 'E/w ^' a'xoXt?6o/v <7ox,ai TO ^aXX;X6v. Schol. rjfi7ro. See the fchol. on the Sect. 14^ on SHAKESPEARE* 121 and remained, according to it's etymology, a fong in country towns, when tragedy was publicly acted at the expence of the magiftrate. Thefe village fongs were either abufive and fcurrilous, expofing the follies and failings of the neighbour- hood ; or they were of the obfcene kind, as more agreable to the ridiculous figure carried in the proceflions of the feltival. It had another name, tpfy$i* t the wine-fong ; as T*W/, is the goat-fong : a veffel of wine being the prize of comedy, and a goat of tragedy. Ariflophanes calls the old comedians IS T^oSau^ov^, in that paffage, rather from their diabolical faces be- daubed with the lees of wine, than from their prize. the fame play, -jr. 242. where the (lory there told has a near refemblance to what the priefts and diviners advifed the Philiftines, being afflicled with emerods : viz. to make them images. And they accordingly made them images of the emerods. \ Sam. vi. 4& 17. But another word fliould be ufed, not emerods. 15. Ariftoph. nub. -jr, 29$. f5 cxu^-p, fujJi ro'/G^:ttf/coii, ot iOQH)1aii' [lege s xufAixoi ro>j1arj .J TsOaat (x,oi titutysfiH. Omitting the guefies of others, J think it may eafily be thus reftored, Miti y d-Ttrt So-mtv' opus Tf8a' B^J hottpsgtt. which exaftly anfwers to Cicero's verfion. The philofo- phers Plato and Xenophon were very fond of Epicharmus. The latter cites him in his Socratic memoirs, L. II. c. I. \vhere the verfes are thus to be ordered, Tuv IEJMVV 'ZcwXifj'ij afjutv Travla T|a6' 01 Ssat. n*wei cv, 'Twas ufual for him to inculcate the precepts of Pythagoras, as Jamblicus tells us, c. 36. So Theodoret Therap. J. p. 15. NBJ ogS, x) tf? x.au' TMas x*,^* T^^Xat. From thefe and many other inftances, the reader may fee the propriety of the change in Theocritus of FIAIEIN into HAXIN. 19. Plato in Gorg. p. 505. edit. Steph. 20. Ibid. p. 506. after, Sett. 14. e># SHAKESPEARE. after, according to his elegant manner. The Stoic philofophers were highly fond of this way t)f writing , and thus the difcourfes of Epictetus are for the moft part written. Neither are in- ftances of this kind wanting in Shakefpeare. As. in the firft part of K. Hen. IV. Act V. juft before the battle Falftaffhas this dialogue with himfelf. " What need I be fo forward with him that calls '* not on me ? Well, 'tis no matter, honour pricks " me on : but how if honour pricks me off, " .when I come on ? How then ? Can honour " fet to a leg ! No. Or an arm ? No. " Or take away the grief of a wound ? No. " Honour hath no fkill in furgery then ? No. " What is honour ? A word. What is " that word honour ? Air. A trim reckon- " ing ! Who hath it ? He that dyed a wed- " nefday. Doth he feel it ? No. Doth " he hear it? No. Is it infenfible then ? " Yea, to the dead. But will it not live with " the living ? No. Why ? Detraction, " will not fuffer it. Therefore, Til none of it : " honour is a meer fcutcheon, and fo ends my " catechifm." I will mention one inflance more of this old comedian's manner, which was fometimes to repeat the fame thing in almoft the fame words - t and this in proper characters feems to have an air of wit : you expect fomething, and you find ^nothing. I H Tc* 126 Critical Obfervationt Book f. 1 Tcx pv iv TJJWJ ly v, Fmcquidem interillos egoeram, tuncautemapudillos. Plautus was a great imitator of Epicharmus, as Horace informs us in that well-known verfe, Plautus ad exemplar Siculi properare Epicharmi Dicitur. In his Curculio, Adi V. Scene IV. He has this imitation of his Sicilian mafter, uoi homini dii funt propitii^ ei non effe iratos puto. Again in his Stichus, E mails mukis, mdum quod minimum eft^ id mini- mum eft malum. Sir Hugh Evans, in the merry wives of Wind- for, is full of thefe elegant tautologies fo proper to his character -, in Aft I. Sc. I. Ev. " Shall " I tell you a lie ? I do defpife a liar as I do " defpife one that is falfej or as I defpife one " that is not true." So Hamlet, in a jocofe vein, fays, For if the king like not tie comedy ; Wby then, belike, be likes it not, perdy. 21. Ariflot. rhet. 1. 3. c. ix. Demetrius ng 'E 5 -/*. X^. X^'. There 14. on SHAKESPEARE. 127 There is no reafon to tire the reader with more inftances, for a hint of this nature is fufficient. Xenophon in his treatife of the Athenian re- public takes notice of the exceflive fcurrilities of the old comedians. But the emperor Marcus Antoninus fpeaks more favourable of them ; and fays this freedom of fpeech had an air of dif- cipline and inftrudlion, and by inveighing againft perfonal vices was of ufe to humble the pride and arrogance of the great. What a reflection to come from a great man! The " old comedy, without any fcruple, ex- pofed real perfons, and brought real ftories on the ftage, fparing neither magiftrates or philo- fophers, a Cleo, Hyperbolus, or Socrates. Eupolis, atqus Cratinus^ Ariftopbanefquepoetae^ Atque alii quorum comoedia prifca virorum eft, Si quis erat dlgnus defcribi, quod malus acfur, Quod moechus fore t, autjicarius, aut alioquin Famofus ; multa cum libertate notabant. - While the people kept the power in their own hands, they had full fcope of indulging this li- 22. Concerning the difference of comedy, fee Platoniu c , and the other writers of comedy prefixed to Kuiler's edition of Ariftophanes. Of the old comedy were written in all 365 plays j of the middle^ 617 ; Athenaeus fays he had red above 800 : of the new, there were 64 poets. Menan- o%3*. This fame fort of ^a.^a.^y,a-n; Shake- fpeare ufes at the end of every aft in his Henry the Fifth. In the fourth, he pays a handfome complement to queen. Elizabeth and the earl of Eflex. Wert now the general tfour gratious emfre/i (As in good time he may) from Ireland coming, Bringing rebellion broached on his Jkuord ; How many would the peaceful city quit To we/come hint ? After the fame manner the conclufion of As you like it, and f Troilas and Creffida, is to be considered, When Sect. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. 129 When the middle comedy took place, and the chorus was reprefied, and the posts not allowed to name the perfons ; yet by relating of real facts, the dulled of the audience could not be ignorant at whom the jeft was pointed. All the. writers of the middle comedy are loft, We have among the comedies of our own country, the Rehearfal, written after this model : for here Bays Hands for Dry den -, the two kings, for Charles and his brother James , and the 14 parodies have all the caft of this ancient humour. But we can now 24. Parodies were invented by Hegemon of Thafos, as Ariftotle Jays ; or at leaft he highly excelled in them, and brought them on the flage. Horace has an elegant parody on a verfe of Furius, who in a poem wrote, Jupiter hybtrnas cana ni-ve confpuit Afycs. He turns it thus, Farms hjbernas cdna ni*ve confpuit Alpet. Ariftophanes is full of thefe parodies, the bombaft tragedians, and Euripides, being the conllant objefts of his ridicule. So Piflol in our poet talks in a fuftian ftyle, in fcraps of verfes from the older tragedians : and the whole play introduced in Hamlet, is to be confidered in this light. Sometimes parodies are ufed not to ridicule the veifes thus charged, but they have an air of pleafantry and imitation ; fuch are many paffages from Homer and Euripides parodized by Plato : and by Julian in his Caefars. I wonder the follow- ing ihould efcape the commentators, where Silenus applies K * 130 Critical Obfervations Book I. now have no more fuch inftances ; the govern- ment here, as formerly at Athens, putting a flop to this licentious fpirit. And to their thus inter- fering was owing the rife of the new comedy, and of a Menander. Happy for us, would the fame caufes produce the faTne effects, and new Menanders arife ! But I am afraid we want fome Attic manners. We attempt to paint the cha- racters of others, without having any character ourfelves : and our men of wit have been fo loft to whatever is decent and grave, that their vici- ous principles appear thro' all the cobweb fo- phiftry, in which they try to invelope them. What Menander was, may be partly guefled from fome few remaining fragments of his plays, the verfe uied by Homer concerning a gay Trojan to Gal- licnus. Horn. II. 6. 872. ''~ '/^^" =/O v trairj! rpfx, r'vr= xa'jj. Julian. There are parodies ftill more elegant, when adifcourfe has 3 quite different turn given it ; as in the Adtlphi, where Demea full of his own praifes tell* Syrus, how he educates his fon ; and Syrus afterwards repeats Demea's own words, giving him an account how he inftru&s his inferior fervants, Adelp. Aft III. fc. 4. and in the firft part of K. Henry the fourth, Aft 2. where Hal humouroufly imitating Falftaff's manner, turns his own fpeech againlt him. and Seci. 14. &n SHAKESPEARE; and from his tranflator Terence. But does it not look like want of invention in Terence, that he made ufe of Athenian manners and characters, when he brought Menander's plays upon the Roman ftage ? 'Tis the humours and cuftoms of their own times, that people love to fee repre- fented ; not being over follicitous or interefted in what is tranfaded in other countries. Hence 'twas wifely judged by Steele, in his imitation of the Andria, to work it into an Englifh ftory. And 'twas barrennefs of invention that made the Latin ftage-writers meerly translators. Indeed the Romans had few authors that can be called originals. Their government was military, and the foldier had the chief praife ; the fcholar flood only in a fecond rank. And juft as Virgil and Horace began to flourifh, a young tyrant fprung up, and riveted on the Romans by degrees fuch ihackles of fervitude,. that they have never even to this day been able to make them off. . And mould it ever be the misfortune of this ifland to feel the effects of tyranny, we muft bid farewell to our Miltons and Shakefpeares, and take up contentedly again with popifh myfteries and mo- ralities. K 2 SECT, 132 Critical Objer"vations Book I. SECT. XV. IT was finely and truly obferved by a certain philofopher, whom the rhetorician ' Longinus praifes, that popular government (where the publick good alone, in contradiftinc"lion to all private intereft and felfifh fyftems, prevails) is the only nurfe of great genius's. For while the laws, wliich know no foolifh companion, cor- rect the greater vices, men are left to be either perfuaded or laughed out of their leffer follies. Hence will neceffarily arife orators, poets, philo- fophers, critics, &c. Wit will polifh and refine wit ; and he, whom nature has marked for a flave, will ever continue in his proper fphere. In tyrannic forms of government, the whole is reverfed ; the people are well dealt with, if they are amufed with even mock-virtues and mock- fciences. This is vifible in a neighbouring na- tion, where modern honor is fubftituted in the room of ancient honefty > hypocritical addrefs, inilead of morals and manners -, flattery and fubordinate homage is introduced, and eafily fwallowed, that every one in his turn might play the petty tyrant on his inferior. In fuch a ftate, where nature is fo diftorted and debafed, what poet, if he dared, can imitate i. Longin. n ? tty. fett. XLIV. naturally Setfl. 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 133 naturally men and manners? And fhould acciden- tally a genius arife, yet he'll foon find it necef- fary to flatter defpotic power. For perfect wri- ters we muft therefore go to Athens ; not even to Rome -, nor feek it in Virgil or Horace. For who, I would afk, can bear the reading fuch a blafphemous piece of flattery as this ? Melibaee, Deus nobis baec otia fecit. Namque erit ille mibi * femper-deus, All the beautiful lines in that eclogue, cannot atone for the vilenefs of thefe. Or what can we think of the following ? Sive mutata jwventm Ales in terris itnitaris almae Filium Majae, PATIENS VOCARI CAESARIS ULTOR. Horace certainly had forgotten his patron J Bru- tus, and all the dodtrines he learnt at Athens, when 2. Semptr-Jeuty a perpetual deity : ufi/, as the gramma- rians fay. So Callimachus in his hymn to Jupiter, Qtlv aorlv, For fo th verfe is to be written. 3 . Horace was early patronized by Brutus. When he was at Athens he imbibed the principles of the Stoic phi- Jofophy : at the breaking out of the civil wars he joined K 3 himfelf 1 3 4 Critical Obfervatiom Book I, when he praifed this young tyrant for his bloody profecutions of the Romans, who attempted the recovery of their ancient liberties and free con- ftitution. But you have none of thefe abandoned principles in the Athenian writers ; none in old Homer, or in our modern Milton. One could wifh that Shakefpeare was as free from flattery, as Sophocles and Euripides. But our liberty was then in it's dawn; fo that fome pieces ot flattery, which we find in Shakefpeare, muft be afcribed to the times. To omit fome of his rants about kings, which border on 4 blafphemy -, how hjmfelf to Brutus, who gave him the command of a Roman legion. His fortune being ruin'd, he went to the court of Augultus, turned rake, athcift, and poet. Afterwards he grew fober, and a Stoic philofopher again. Virgil had pot thofe private obligations to Brutus : his ruin'd circum- ffances fent him to court. An emperor, and fuch a minifter as Maecenas could eafily debauch a poor poet. But at length Virgil, as well as Horace, was willing to retreat : and at laft he ordered his divine poem to be burnt, not be- caufe it wanted perfection as an epic poem, but becaufe it flattered the fub\ r erter of the conftitution. 4. In Macbeth Aft II. Macd. Moft facrileghus murtker bath broke ofe The Lord's anointed temple, and ftole thence The life oW building. Jn K. John Adi V. Hubert is fpeaking of the monk who poifon'd K. John. Are- 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 135 haw abruptly has he introduced, in his Macbeth, a phyfician giving Malcolm an account of Ed- ward's touching for the king's evil ? And this, to pay a fervile homage to king James, who highly valued himfelf for a miraculous power, (as he and his credulous fubje&s really believed,) of curing a kind of fcrophulous humours, which frequently are known to go away of themfelves in either fex, when they arrive at a certain age. In his K. Henry VIII. the ftory which Ihould have ended at the marriage of Anna Bullen, is lengthened out on purpofe to make a chriftening of Elizabeth j and to introduce by way of pro- phecy a complement to her royal perfon and dig- nity : and what is ftill worfe, when the play was ibme time after acted before K. James, another prophetical patch of flattery was tacked to it. If a fubjeft is taken from the Roman hiftory, he feems afraid to do juftice to the citizens. The patricians were the few in confpiracy againft the many. And the ftruggles of the people were an honeft flruggle for that mare of power, which A refolded villain Wbofe Ixnw/j fudctenly bur ft out. So 'tis written of Judas, Als I, 18. He fell headlong and, burjt afunder : ihdx-ncrt pi(r<&. You fee lie has Chrift in view whenever he fpeaks of kings, and this was the court- language : I wiih it never went farther. K 4 was 136 Critical Objervation* Book I. was kept unjuftly from them. No wonder the hiftorians have reprefented the tribunes factious, and the people rebellious, when moft of that fort now remaining wrote after the fubverfion of their conftitution, and under the fear or favour of the Caefars. One would think our poet had been bred in the court of Nero, when we fee in what colours he paints the tribunes, or the people : he . feems to have no other , idea of them, than as a mob of Wat Tylers and Jack Cades. Hence he has fpoiled, one of the fineft fubjects of tragedy from the Roman hiftory, his Coriolanus. But if this be the fault of Shakefpeare, 'twas no lefs the fault of Virgil and Horace ; he errs in good company. Yet this is a poor apology, for the poet ought never to fubmit his art to wrong opinions, and pre- vailing faftiion. AND now I am confidering the faulty fide of our poet, I cannot pafs over his ever and anon confounding the manners of the age which he is defcribing, with thofe in which he lived : for if thefe are at all introduced, it mould be done with great art and delicacy , and with fuch an antique caft, as Virgil has given to his Roman cuftoms and manners. Much lefs can many oF his anacronifms be defended. Other kind of errors (if they may be fp called) are properly the Sed. 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 137 the errors of great genius's ; fuch are inaccura- cies of language, and a faulty fublime, which is furely preferable to a faultlefs mediocrity. Shake^ fpeare labouring with a multiplicity of fublime ideas often gives himfelf not time to be delivered of them by the rules of flow-endeavouring art : hence he J crowds various figures together, and metaphor upon metaphor-, and runs the hazard of far-fetched expreffions, whilft intent on nobler 5. The crouding and mixing together heterogeneous metaphors is doing a fort of violence to the mind ; for > v*s each new metaphor calls it too foon oft" from the idea which the former has rais'd : 'tis a fault doubtlefs, and not to be apologized for ; and inftances are very numerous in Shake- fpeare. The poet is to take his fhare of the faults, and the critic is to keep his hands from the context. Yet 'tis ilrange to fee how many pafiuges the editors have corrected, tneerly for the fake of confonance of metaphor : breaking thro' that golden rule of criticifm ; mend only tbt faults of tranfcrilers. Bentley Ihew'd the way to critics, and gave a fpecimen, in his notes on Cullimachus, of his emendations of Horace by correcting the following verfe, Et malt tornatos ineudi rtddere verfus. Hor. art. poet. 441. where he reads ter natot, for confonance of metaphor. But pray take notice, ter nafos, is a metaphorical expreffion ; for nafcor, natus, fignifies to be born : and are things born brought to the anvil ? Is not here diffonance of metaphor with a witness ? ideas 138 Critical Qbfer*vations Book I. ideas he condefcends not to grammatical nice- ties: here the audience are to accompany the poet in his conceptions, and to fupply what he has fketched out for them. I will mention an inftance or two of this fort. Hamlet is fpeaking to his father's ghoft, Ob ! anfwer me, Let me not burft in ignorance ; but tell Why thy canonized bones , 6 hear fed in death, Have burft their cearments ? &c. Again, Macbeth in a foliloquy before he murders Duncan, Bejides, this Duncan Hath born his faculties fo meek, hath been So clear in his great office, that his virtues Will plead, like angels, trumpet -tongi? d againft The deep damnation of his taking of: And Pity, like a naked new-born babe, Striding the blaft, or heav'ns cherubim hors'd Upon thefightlefs couriers of the air, Shall blow the horrid deed in every eye ; Ibat tears Jhall drown the wind. Many other paflages of this kind might be men- tion'd, which pafs off tolerably well in the 6. Such expreflions, Longinus fed. 32. calls prettily enough, rafMFtftmK/Ti{, mouth Sect. 15. w SHAKESPEARE. jnouth of the actor, whik the imagination of the fpectator helps and fupplies every feeming inaccuracy ; but tliey will by no means bear a clofe view, more than fome designedly unfinifhed and rough fketches of a mafterly hand. JUST after I had tranfcribed for the prefs the above remarks, a circumftance fovery ftrange in itfelf happened to me, that I cannot help acquainting the reader with it. There is a vanity, we too often indulge, in relating trifles, which we ourfelves are concerned in, not confidering how little the reft of the world intereft them- felves in our affairs. And fome there are, who, rather than not talk of themfelves, will relate their reveries and idleft dreams. If our dreams came from Jove, as the 7 poet has it, perhaps they might be worth relating; but when our waking ideas are little better than fumes and va- pors, what can be expected when we revert to a world of our own forming, but there that mimic fancy will produce the moft monftrous and ill- joined refemblances ? After this frank declaration, what regard or credit may I expect to my own vifion ? which, however, as it has a particular relation to the fubject in hand, and from the ufual liberty allowed to us mifcellaneous authors, 7. Horn. II. . 63. K y' ? T' of IK Ao's i r . Milton XII, 6 1 1. TorGsdisalfginJletp. I cannot 140 Critic al Obfervations Book I. I cannot help introducing ; and, as Herodotus adds after relating any ftrange or fabulous ac- count, the candid reader may believe juft as much as likes him beft. Methought Apollo appeared to me , in his left hand he held his filver bow, and on his re- fplendent moulders hung his graceful quiver ; and taking me in his right hand, which felt colder than fnow on mount Caucafus, he led me (as Milton exprefies it) fmootb Jliding without ft ep, to the fummit of a high hill, and there gracioufly prefented me with a glafs of a moft miraculous nature ; for it would Ihew every object in it's proper light, and difcover it's beauty or defor- mity, however gloried over by fubtlety or fo- phiftry. But to my misfortune, thro' my con- fufion and furprife, down it dropped, and brake in ten thoufand pieces. Being ten times more afraid of the anger of the god, than regretting my lofs, I was about making my apologies, when Apollo fmiling interrupted me, " Know, ** faid he, that the gods are never angry with " mankind ; their own follies are to them pu- *' nilhments fufficient." I fancied to myfelf that I rejoiced extremely, that this affair was fo well ended i tho' I could not but perceive I was bewildered in a multi- plicity of various objects, which furrounded me. The god feeing my confufion anointed my vifuaj Sect 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 141 vifual nerve with a balfam of fovereign virtue to remove all films and mortal mifts. Imme- diately the high hill and extended profpects va- nifhed ; and I found myfelf on a plain together with my celeftial guide. We were methought entering a large court, which was terminated with a moft magnificent gate, built after the mo- del of a triumphal arch, on the top of which was infcribed in letters of gold ETAAIMONftN OIKHTHPION. At the approach of the god, the folding doors of burniflied Corinthian brafs flew fpontaneouQy open, and difcovered a profpect beautiful be- yond even a poet's imagination. The firft object, that ftruck my admiring eyes, was a verdant hilloc, whofe fides were covered with flowering Ihrubs and myrtles ; thro' thefe there ran down in a rapid current a filver ftream, and watered all the valleys beneath. This was the chief man- fion of the mufes with Hercules, who was ac- coutred with his all-fubduing club and lion's ikin. I was fomewhat furprifed to find one of thefe divine perfonages abfent \ but foon learnt that Melpomene was gone to be umpire between Sophocles and Euripides : for Homer, it feems, had given a golden tripod, as a prize to the poet who mould be declared conqueror. My impatience glowed in my face to be prefent at this trial of fkiUj which the god perceiving 1 Complied 142 Critical Obfervafiom Book & complied with my curiofity, but at the fame time hinted, how much better it were for fuch an earthly being to fubmit every concern to hea- venly direction. Sooner than he fpake I arrived at a fpacious fquare inhabited by tragic poets ; where dired> ly fronting the entrance ftood a moft fuperb ftrufture fupported by a hundred pillars of the Corinthian order. This was the palace of So- phocles. After patting thro* the moft fump- nions apartments, we arrived at the theatre, which was of a femicircular form, and capable of holding ten thoufand fpectators. Apollo took his feat on the right hand of the ftage, and Melpomene fat on the left : for the gods never give the upper hand to the goddeffes. The~ play to be acred was king Oedipus: I was ad- miring all around the elegant profufion of or- naments, when the fcene opening difcovered in the moft beautiful painting a wide court before a royal palace ; in the center was placed an altar fmoaking with incenfe, and at proper diftances temples and groves. Around the altar the The- ban youth proftrated themfelves ; and the chief prieft ftood eminently confpicuous in his ponti- fical robes. Immediately comes out of the pa- lace king Oedipus, and moft majeftically ftalked" acrofs the ftage to the proftrate Thebans. Had' not Apollo affiftcd- me, I mould never have i underftood 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 143 underftood a tenth part of any one icene , for it feem'd to me a language I never heard be- fore : I am certain 'twas not the leaft adapted to our barbarous and northern mouths. The pronunciation was both according to quantity and accent, which makes the language naturally a lefs kind of recitative. The reader may have fome notion of what a Grecian play was, if ever he heard the famous Italian Senefmo, in recitative mufic, pronounce any of Mr. Handel's fineft operas ; for queen Jocafta had exactly his tone and accent. But the voice of Oedipus was fuller and more malculine : his mafk did not offend me in the leaft ; it affifted his voice, and feem'd to give a. dignity to the character. 'Tis impoffible for me to exprefs, the propriety, the folemnity and graceful mufic of the chorus-, whether they fung alternately, or together, the lyric poetry, which was worthy to be heard with the moft facred filence. 'Twas an entertainment religioufly folemn: for the Grecians to their moft chearful amufements allways joined religion, which they thought was given them by the gods to exhilarate mankind, not to add to their com- mon calamities of life new difquietude and de- fpair. When the play was over, the audience went directly to the palace of Euripides. The fronc was raifed on Ionic pillars, and the whole ftruc* ture 144 Critical Obfervations Book I. ture appeared elegantly plain in the exacteft neatnefs. The tranfition of dreams is fudden and unaccountable j and fo it happened to me* for I found myfelf at once in the theatre of Eu- ripides , where the play to be acted was Oreftes, and the chief part was performed by the poet himfelf, who appeared without a mafk. Nor was the mafk, as 1 was informed, allways ufed either by the comic or tragic poets* I remem- ber particularly that fcene, which paft between Electra and her brother, where he is difcovered reclining on a couch, and juft awaked. The care of the fifter to her diftempered brother was pathetically moving : upon her mentioning the name of Helen, Oreftes ftarted, and feemed to recollect a thoufand difmal ideas, and his mur- thered mother came into his thoughts : his face grew paler, and his voice hollow and trembling ; at the fame time the accompanying mufic chang- ed to the cromatic ftyle. What muft the effect be of the united force of mufic and poetry! However upon the whole I liked the Oedipus of Sophocles better ; and was not a little furprifed to find that Euripides made choice of his Oreftes j for furely it does not exceed the reft of his plays. The moft furprifing of all was, that Melpomene adjudged the Prize to Euripides : but upon en- quiry I found, that Socrates was feen in private that very morning with this tragic mufe , and 'twas Seim at all ? The human mind naturally and neceflarily perfues truth, it's fecond felf ; and, if not rightly fet to work, will foon fix on fome falfe appearance and borrowed reprefentations of what is fair and good : here it will endeavour to acquiefce, dif- ingenuouily impofing on itfelf, and maintaining it's ground with deceitful arguments. This will account for that feeming contradiction in many critical characters, who fo acutely can fee the i faults Sect, i. on SHAKESPEARE. 151 faults of others, but at the fame time are blind to the follies of their own efponfed fentiments and opinions. There is moreover in every perfon a particular bent and turn of mind, which, whenever forced a different way than what nature intended, grows aukward. Thus Bentley, the greateft fcholar of the age, took a ftrange kind of refolution to follow the mufes : but whatever fkill and fa- gacity he might difcover in other authors, yet his Horace and Milton will teflify to the world as much his want of elegance and a poetic taft, as his epiflle to Dr. Mills and his diflertations on Phalaris will witnefsfor his being, in other refpects, the beft critic that ever appeared in the learned world. Ariftarchus feem'd very much to refemble Bentley. * Cicero tells us in his epiftles, that whatever difpleafed him he would by no means believe was Homer's : and I don't doubt but he found editors, whofe backs were broad enough to bear whatever loads of reproaches he was pleafed to lay on them. J The old rhapfodifts, 2. Cicer. epift. ad famil. Ill, 2. Sedjl, ut fcribis, eat literae non fuerunt dlfertat, fcito meat non fuffi. Ut enim Ariftarcbus Homeri iierfum negat qutm non probat ; fee tu (libet enim mibi jocari) quod difertum non erit, ne pvtetit mtum. 3. Aelian. Var. Hift. XIII, 14. L 4 the Critical Objervations Book II. the Spartan lawgiver, or Athenian tyrant, might have ferved his turn much better than fuch a ghoft of an editor, the very coinage of his brain, as was lately raifed up by the Dr. when he fo miferably mangled Milton. However this unbridled fpirit of criticifm iliould by all means be reftrained. For thefe trifles, as they appear, will lead to things of a more lerious confequence. By thefe means even the credit of all books muft fink in proportion to the number of critical, as well as uncritical hands thro' which they pafs. There is one thing, I think, mould always be remember'd in fettling and adjufting the context of authors ; and that is, if they are worthy of criticifm, they are worthy of fo much regard as to be prefumed to be in the right, 'till there ire very good grounds to fuppofe them wrong. A critic fhould. come with abilities to defend, not with arrogance at once to ftart up a corrector. Is this lefs rimmed ? Is it not fo intended to fet off what is principal, and requires a higher fi- niming ? Is this lefs numerous ? Periiaps the poet fo defigned it, to raife the imagination flill higher, when we come to fublimer and more fonorous fubjects. Does not even variety, which goes fo far to constitute what is beautiful, carry with it afuppofal of inferiority and fubordination? Nay, where no other confideration can be pre- fumed, Set. i. on SHAKESPEARE. fumed, fome allowances furely are to be given to the infirmity of human nature. 'Tis the artift of a lower clafs who finifhes all alike. If you examine the defigns of a mafterly hand, you'll perceive how rough thefe colours are laid on, how flightly that is touched, in order to carry on your view to what is principal, and deferves the chief attention: for by this cor- refpondence and relation, and by thus making each part fubfervient to the other, a whole is formed. And were it not a degree of prophanation, I might here mention the great Defigner, who has flung fome things into fuch ftrong lhades, that 'tis no wonder fo much gloominefs arfd melan- choly is raifed in rude and undifciplined minds : the fublime Maker, 4 who has fet this univerfe before us as a book ; yet what fuperficial readers are we in this volume of nature ? Here I am cer- tain we muft become good men, before we be- come good critics, and the firft ftep to wifdom is humility. In a word, the moft judicious critics, as well as the moft approved authors are fallible -, the former therefore mould have fome modefty, the latter fome allowances. But modefty is of the higheft importance, when a critical inquirer is examining writings which are truly originals ; 4. Milton VIII, 67. fuch 1 54 Critical Otfervaftons Book II. fuch as Homer among the ancients, Milton and Shakefpeare among the moderns. Here we are to proceed with caution, with doubt and hefita- tion. Such authors are really * Makers, as the original word Poet imports. In their extenfive minds the forms and fpecies of things lie in em- bryo, 'till call'd forth into being by expreflions aniwering their great idea. 6 " The poet's eye in a fine frenzy rowling, * Doth glance from heav'n to earth, from earth " to heav'n : 5. Sir Philip Sydney in his defence of poefie, " The " Greekes named him IIOIHTHN", which name hath, as the " moft excdlent, gone through other languages : it com- ' meth of this word FIOIEIN, which is tO niflfec : wherein I know not whether by luckeor wifdome wee Engliflimen " have met \Vith the Greekes in calling him a JJiafiCC." Johnfon in his Difcoveries, " A poet is that which by the Greeks is called r' Ifo^y, O-IIOIHTHE, a maker, or " a feigner, &c." So Spencer ufes the word in his Fairy Queen, B. 3. c. 2. ft. 3. " But ah! my rhimes too rude and rugged are, ' When in fo high an Objeft they do light, And ftriving fit tO mafic, I fear do mar. Floury, verfui facer t. Julian in his Caefars, "flj-Tr^ "O^^^ i$u<; noiftN i'^r. Xenophon. in Sympof. "ire y $ymt on o "O/ATif 1 ^ o fftQuTetfo' riF.riOIHK.E 9^w7rtw. Plato in lone, 'AXXa Siia ftoi^a TTO f*oi'o ar- riOIEIN xaXa;?, ifi o *j fiMfftt avTM Uf(M^9VUt* 6. A Midfummer- Night's Dr$am, Aft. V. " And, Sect, i. on SHAKESPEARE. 155 " And, as imagination bodies forth " The forms of things unknown, the poet's pen " Turns them to fhape, and gives to aiery nothing " A local habitation, and a name." 'Twere well therefore if a careful and critical reader would firft form to himfelf fome plan, when he' enters upon an author deferving a drifter inquiry : if he would confider that origi- nals have a manner allways peculiar to them- felves , and not only a manner, but a language : if he would compare one pafTage with another; for fuch authors are the beft interpreters of their own meaning : and would reflect, not only what allowances may be given for obfolete modes of fpeech, but what a venerable caft this alone often gives a writer. I omit the previous knowledge in ancient cuftoms and manners, in grammar and conftruction , the knowledge of thefe is prefup- pofed , to be caught tripping here is an ominous (tumble at the very threfhold and entrance upon criticifm ; 'tis ignorance, which no giiefs-work, no divining faculty, however ingenious, can atone and commute for. A learned 7 wit of France mentions a certain giant, who could eafily fwallow windmills, but was at laft choak'd with a lump of frefh butter. Was not this exactly the cafe of Bentley, that giant in criticifm, who having at one mouthful 7. Rabelais B. IV. c. xvii. fwaliowed 156 Critical Obferuations Book II. fwallowed his learned antagonifts, yet could not digeft an Englifli author, but expofed himfelf to the cenfure of boys and girls ? Indeed 'tis but a filly figure the beft make, when they get beyond their fphere ; or when with no fettled fcheme in view, with no compafs or card to direct their little fkiff, they launch forth on the immenfe ocean of criticifm. SECT. II. OF all the various tribes of critics and com- mentators, there are none who are fo apt to be led into errors, as thofe who, quitting the plain road of common fenfe, will be continually hunting after paradoxes, and fpinning cobwebs out of their own brains. To pafs over the caba- liftic doctors, and the profound Jacob Behmen with his fucceflbrs -, how in a trivial inftance did both Scaliger and Voffius fling away a deal of pains in mifmterpreting a line of Martial, that would not puzzle a fchool-boy tolerably taught ? Among the ancients 'twas cuftomary to fwear by what they efteemed moft dear ; to this cuftom the poet alludes, not without fome malicious .wit, in an epigram, where a Jew fwears by the temple of the Thunderer ; (the word Jehovah did not fuit a Roman mouth ; ) "I don't believe " you, fays Martial, fwear by your pathic, your i < boy Sed. 2. o?2 SHAKESPEARE. " boy Anchialus, who is dearer to you, than the " God you pretend to adore." " * Ecce negas, jurafque mihi pertempla tonantis : " Non credo : jura, verpe, per Anchialum. I knew an ingenious man who, having thorough- ly perfuaded himfelf that Virgil's Aeneid was a hiftory of the times, apply 'd the feveral characters there drawn to perfons of the Auguftan age. Who could Drances reprefent but Cicero ? " * Lingua melior, fed frigida bello u Dextera. cc Genus huic materna fuperbum " Nobilitas dabat, incertum de patre ferebat. Nor could any thing be more like, than Ser- gefthus and Catiline of the Sergian family. In the defcription of the games, he dafhes his fhip thro' over eagernefs againft the rock. And the rock that Catiline fplit on was his unbridled, licentious temper. 1. Mart. ep. XI, 95. vid. Scalig. in prolegom. ad libros de emendatione temporum. Et VofT. in notis ad Catullum. And our learned Spencer, who has examin'd the corre&ions of thefe critics. 2. Virg. Aen. XI, 358. &c. What he adds incertum de patre ferebat, is exaftly agreable to what Plutarch relates of the accounts of Cicero's father. His mother's name was ftelvia, one of the moft honorable families of Rome. Thefe j j 8 Critical Obfervations Book II. Thefe and fome other obfervations, too nu- merous to be mention* d here, pafled off very well j they carried an air of ingenuity with them, if not of truth. But when lopas was Virgil, Dido Cleopatra, Achates Maecenas or Agrippa, lapis Antonius Mufa, &c. what was this but playing the Procruftes with hiftorical facts ? SUPPOSE, in like manner, one had a mind to try the fame experiment on Milton, and to imagine that frequently he hinted at thofe times, in which he himfelf had fo great a mare both as a writer, and an actor. Thus, for in- ftance, Abdiel may be the poet himfelf : " Nor number nor example with him wrought " To fwerve from truth, or change his conftant " mind " Tho' fmgle ? " This was all thy care, " To ftand approv'd in fight of God, tho' " worlds " Judg'd thee perverfe. 'Tis not to be fuppofed that the common- wealthfman Milton could bear to fee an earthly monarch idolized, deified, called the lord, the anointed, the reprefentative of God : no, that Tight he endured not -, he drew his pen, and anfwer'd himfelf the royal writer, Se#. 2. on SHAKESPEARE. 15. J nz, EinaN npos ON MEFAAHTOPA TMON, thus exploring his own undaunted heart, " O heav'n, that fuch refemblance of the higheft " Should yet remain, where faith and realty " Remain not ! " Who cannot fee whom he meant, and what particular facts he pointed at in thefe lines ? " So fpake the fiend, and with Necejfity " The Tyrant's plea, excus'd his deviliih deeds. Nor can any one want an interpretation for Nim- rod, on whofe character he dwells fo long. " Till one fhall rife " Of proud ambitious heart, who (not content " With fair equality, fraternal Hate) " Will arrogate dominion undeferv'd " Over his brethren, and quite difpofiefs " Concord, and law of nature from the earth : ' c Hunting, (and men, not beafts mall be his game) " With war and hoftile fnare, fuch as refufe " Subjection to his empire tyrannous. " A mighty hunter thence he mall be ftil'd " Before the Lord, as in defpite of heav'n M Or of heav'n claiming fecond fov'reignty : *' And from rebellion mail derive his name, *' Tko' of rebellion others be accufe. 3. Horn. II. x 403. 160 Critical Obfervation* Book II. Could the character of Charles the fecond, with his rabble rout of riotous courtiers, or the cavalier fpirit and party juft after the reftoration be mark'd ftronger and plainer, than in the beginning of the feventh book ? " But drive far off the barbarous difibnance " Of Bacchus and bis revellers , &c. It needs not be told what nation he points at in the twelfth book. " Yet fometimes nations will decline fo low " From virtue (which is reafon) that no wrong, " But juftice, and fome fatal curfe annex'd, " Deprives them of their outward liberty, " Their inward loft. Again, how plain are the civil wars imagined in the fixth book ? The Michaels and Gabriels, &c. would have lengthen'd out the battles endlefs, nor would any folution been found j had not Cromwell, putting on celeftial armour, THN nANOHAIAN TOT EOT, for this was 4 Milton's opinion) like the Mefliah all armed in 4. Milton points out this allegory himfelf, in his defence of Smeftym. p. 180. fol. edit. " Then (that I may have " leave to foare awhile as the poetfc ufe) then ZEAL, whofe fubftance is ethereal, arming in compleat diamond, ^* afcends his fiery chariot drawn with two blazing meteors, V figured Se#. 2, on SHAKESPEARE." 16 f in heavenly panoply, and afcending his fiery chariot, driven over the malignant heads of thofe who would maintain tyrannic fway. " figured like beafts, but of a higher breed, than any the " zodiack yields, refembling two of thofe four which " Ezechiel and St. John faw, the dfie vifaged like a lion, to " exprefs a power, high autority and indignation ; the " other of count'nance like a man, to caftderifion and fcorn " upon perverfe and fraudulent feducers : with thefe the " invincible warriour ZE A i. fhaking loofely the flack reins " drives over the heads of fcarlet prelats and fuch as are " infolent to maintain traditions, brufing their ftifF necks " under his flaming wheels." I have often thought that Milton plan'd his poem long before he was blind, and had written many paflages. There is now extant the firft book written in his own hand. He let the world know he was about an epic poem ; but defjgnedly kept the fubjecl a fecret. In his cffay on church government, p. 222. fol. edit, fpeata- ing of epic poems, " If to the inftinft of nature and the " imboldning of art ought may be fruited, and that there " be nothing advers In our climat or the fate of this age, it " haply would be no rafhnefs from an equal diligence and " inclination, to prefent the like offer in our ancient flories." How near is this to what he writes ? IX, 44. Unlefs an age too late, or cold Climate, or yean, damp my intended iving Depreft. 'Tis eafy to fhew from other places in his profe works many the like allufions to his epic poem j which in his blindnefs and retreat from the noifie world, he compleated and brought to a perfection perhaps equal with Homer'* or Virgil's. M Let 162 Critical Obfervatiom Book II. Let us confider his tragedy in this allegorical view. Sampibn imprifon'd and blind, and the captive ftate of Ifrael, lively reprefents our blind poet with the republican party after the reftora- tion, afflicted and perfecuted. But thefe revel- ling idolaters will foon pull an old houfe on their heads ; and God will fend his people a deliverer. How would it have rejoiced the heart of the blind feer, had he lived to have feen, with his mind's eye, the accomplimment of his pro- phetic predictions ? when a deliverer came and refcued us from the Philiftine oppreffors. And had he known the fobriety, the tolera- tion and decency of the church, with a Til- lotfon at it's head ; our laws, our liberties, and our conftitution afcertain'd , and had confidered too the wildnefs of fanaticifm and enthufiafm -, doubtlefs he would never have been an enemy to fuch a church, and fuch a king. However thefe myftical and allegorical reve- ries have more amufement in them, than folid truth ; and favour but little of cool criticifm, where the head is required to be free from fumes and vapours, and rather iceptical than dogma- tical. 5 Verifpetiem dlgncfcere calks > Ne qua fubawato twudofum tinniat auro ? 5, Pcrfeus. V, 105. SECT. on SHAKESPEARE* 163 SECT. III. TH E editors of Shakefpeare are not with- out many inftances of this over-refining humour upon very plain pafikges. In the co- medy of Errors, Act III. (the plot of which play is taken from the Menaechmi of PlautusjDromio of Syracufe is giving his mafter a ludicrous defcription of an ugly woman, that laid claim to him as his wife. " S, Dro. I could find out countries in her. " S. Ant. In what part of her body ftands " Ireland ? ** S. Dro. Marry, Sir, in her buttocks j I " found it out by the bogs. " S. Ant. Where Scotland ? " S. Dro* I found it out by the barrennefs^ *' hard in the palm of her hand* " S. Ant. Where France ? " S. Dro. In her forehead*, arm* d and reverted^ " making war againft her l hair. Shakefpeare had the hint from * Rabelaisj where friar John is humouroufly mapping, as it were, Panurge : 1 . The editors would have it, making war againft he* heir: i.e. making war againft Henry IV. of Navarre ; whom the French refitted, on account of his being a pro* teitant. 2. Rabelais B. III. chap. 28. Mi " Behold 164 Critical Obf equations Book II. " Behold there Afia, here are Tygris and " Euprates; lo here Afric on this fide lieth ' Europe." But our poet improves every hint, and with comic fatyre ridicules the countries, as he goes along; Ireland for it's bogs, Scotland for it's barren foil, and France for a 4iieafe that is well known there* " J Nomenque a gente recepit.'* In her forehead, making war againft her hair, is art allufion to a certain flage of the diftemper, when it breaks out in crufty fcabs in the forehead and hairy fcalp ; hence called corona veneris, the venereal crown : armed and reverted* are terms borrowed from heraldry. And this allufion* obvious to the audience, frequently occurs in Johnfbn, as well as elfewhefe In our author, upon mentioning a French crown. Mercutio likewife in Romeo and Juliet Act II. ridiculing the frenchified coxcombs, has an allu- fion to another ftage of this difeafe, when it gets into the bones. u Why is not this a lamentable " thing, grandfire, that we mould be thus xyirat; w? i^yie. *'/*'fj w Kw>rair, lt.T izo $? X;'/j? 'A&iw J- xVaj ; [Ot<5 repone, abforpt. a prior. Syllab.] a. yvi*, rce.^u rapia. Our poet fliews his great knowledge in antiquity in making the dog give the fignal. Hecate's dogs are mention'd in all the poets Virg. Aen. VI, 257. Vifaeque canes ululare per urbem Adwtntante dea. Theoc. II, 35. Hecattm Set 3. on SHAKESPEARE. Thrice the cat four times the hedge-hog, &c. have given fignals for us to begin our incantatipni. Thrice and four times, i. e. frequently ; terque quaterque, As yet no incantation is begun ; nor is there any reafon to alter the context into twice and onee^ (which fome have done,) tho* three be a magical number, as Virgil lays, c u Numero deus impare gaudet. But fuppofe the incantatipn was begun, the numbers three and nine are not always ufed. The witch Circe, in Ovid, in her magical opera- tions is thus defcribed, 'j feconvertitadortus." And Statins in the infernal facrifice. Theb. IV, 545- * Lafte quater fparfas. Hecaten voeat altera, fawam dltera Tijtpbonen. Serpentes atque widem INFERNAS errare CANES. Hor. f. i. 8. Apollon. 1. 3. 1216. *O|iij> **;? X0ONIOI KYNEE ifo/yfe^o. It ftiould be ^8&'ai XL'?, in the feminine gender, as Horace has it : and fo Homei^ when fpeaking of any thing infamous, contemptible, &c. 12. Virg. eel. VII J, 75. 13. Ovid. Met. XIV, 386. i la 172 Critical Obfervations Book II. In Julius Cae'far Aft II. Porcia fays to Brutus, * To keep with you at meals, ccmfort your bed " And talk to' you fometimes ? " This is but an odd phrafe, and gives as odd " an idea," fays Mr. Theobald. He therefore fubftitutes, confort. But this good old word, however difufed thro* modern refinement, was not fo difcarded by Shakefpeare. Henry VIII. as we read in Cavendiih's life of Woolfey, in commendation of queen Katherine, in public faid, " She hath beene to me a true obedient " wife, and as comfortable as I could wifh." And our marriage fervice Mr. Theobald might as well quarrel with, as ufmg as odd a phrafe, and giving as odd an idea. In the Midfummer-Night's Dream, Ad IV, " Oberon. Then, my queen, in I4 filence fad, " Trip we after the night's made. In filence fad, i. e. ftill, fober. As Milton de- fcribes the evening, IV, 598. " Now camey?/// evening on, and twilight gray " Had in her fober livery all 'things clad. " Silence aecompany*d. That fad and fober are fynonimous words, and fo ufed formerly, is plain from many paflages in our author. 14. They have printed it, Infilenitfade. In Sett 4* on SHAKESPEARE. In Much ado about Nothing, Act II. " Benedick. This can be no trick, the con- " ference was fadly born. And in Milton VI, 540. " He comes, and fettled in his face I fee " Sad refolution and fecure. Sad 9 i. e. fober, fedate. Spencer in his Fairy Queen. B. I. c. 10. ft. 7. " Right cleanly clad in comely fad attire. i. e. fober, grave. And B. 2. c. 2. ft. 14. " A fober fad and comely courteous dame. Thefe few inftances, among many others that may eafily be given, are fufficient to mew how in- genious commentators may be led into miftakes, when once they indulge their over-refining taft, and pay greater complements to their own guefies, than to the exprefiions of the . author. SECT. IV. THERE is no fmall elegance in the ufe of a figure which the rhetoricians call the apofiope/is ; when in threatening, or in the ex- preflion of any other paflion, the fentence is broken, and fomething is left to be fupplied. 'Tis 174 Critical Obfervations Book II. 'Tis a figure well known from that common paffage in Virg. Aen. I, 138. * c Quos ego fed motos praeftat componerc " fluftus. And Aen. Ill, 34- " Quid puer Afcanius ? fuperatne et vefcitur aura ? " Quern tibi jam Troja So in king Lear, Aft II. " Lear. No, you unnatural hags, " I will have fuch revenges on you both, " That all the world fliall I will do fuch things, " What they are yet I know not. I mention thefe well-known places to introduce others lefs known. And here I beg leave to explain a paflage in Horace, who ufes this figure with the utmoft elegance in his ode to Galatea, Venus is introduced jetting on Europe, Max ubi luftt fatisy Abftineto Dixit irarum calidaeque rixae : * Cum tibi invifus laceranda reddet Cornua taurus ..... i. Hor. L. II. Od. 27. The Dr. would thus alter the JAM tit* INJC-SSUS laceranda reddtt Cornua taurus. What Sad, 4- on SHAKESPEARE. 17$ What then ? Why then treat this odious creature as cruelly or as kindly as you pleafe. 'Tis an elegance not to be fupplied in words. Immediately Venus begins foothing her vanity with the dignity of her lover, and with her giving a name to a part of the world. Whether any commentator has taken notice of this beauty in Horace, I don't know : Dr. Bentley is at his old work, altering what he could not tafle. This figure has a very near refemblance to another called by the Greeks, CMP* &* vTro'voiav, figura praeter expettationem : when the fentence is in fome meafure broken, and fome- what added otherwife than you expected. Arifto- phanes in Plut. $. 26. wee^ mee y &c. the y they exprefied by it* as, ante, bodie, &c, Tho* many other inftances may be given, yet the generality of thofe writers paid very little regard either to etymology or pronunciation, or the peculiar genius of our language , all which ought to be conjured. As to Shakefpeare, he did not feem to take much care about the printing of thofe plays, which were publifhed in his life, but left it to the printers and players j and thofe plays, which were publifhed after his death, were liable to even more blunders. So that his fpelling being often faulty, he mould thence be explained by fome happy gueffing or divining faculty. This EPOON AYTOS AE FEAOPIA TEYKHE KLTXESS1N OIONOISI TE DAS! AID? AE TEAEETO BOAE EK2 O AE TATIPOTA AIA2TETEN EPISANTE ATPEAE2 TE FANAK^ AN'APON KI AIO? AKHIAAEYS feems I 8 8 Critical Obfervations Book II. Teems one of the eafieft pieces ofcriticifm ; and what Englifli reader thinks himfelf not matter of fo trifling a fcience ? When he receives a letter from his friend, errors of this kind are no impediment to his reading : and the reafon is, becaufe he generally knows his friend's drift and defign, and accompanies him in his thoughts and cxpreflions. And could we thus accompany the diviner poets and philofophers, we mould com- mence criticks of courfe. However I will men- tion an inftance or two of wrong fpelling in our poet, and leave it to the reader to judge, whether fuch trifling blunders have been fufficiently reftored. In Hamlet, Ad III. in Mr. Theobald's edi- tion, p. 301. the place is thus printed : " Hamlet. For thou doft know, oh Damon " dear, " This realm difmantled was " Of Jove himfelf, and now reigns here " A very, very Paddock. " Hor. You might have rhim'd. The old copies read, Paicock, Paiocke and Pajocke. Mr. Theobald fubftitutes Paddock* as nearefl the traces of the corrupt fpelling : Mr. Pope, Peacock ; (much nearer furely to Pat cock, than Mr. Theobald's Paddock) thinking a fable is alludecj Scdt. 6. on SHAKESPEARE. 189 alluded to, of the birds chufing a king, inilead of the eagle, the peacock. And this reading of Mr. Pope's feems to me exceding right. Hamlet, very elegantly alluding to the friendmip between Pythias and his fchool-fellow Damon, calls Horatio, his fchool-fellow, Damon dear ; and fays, this realm was difmantled of Jove himfelf, (he does not fay of Jove's bird, but heightning the compliment to his father, of Jove bimfelf^) and now reigns here, a 'very Peacock \ meer mew, but no worth and fubftance. Horatio anfwers, " You might have rhim'd : i. e. you might have very juftly faid, " A very, very Afs. Now Horatio's reply would have loft it's poi- nancy, had Hamlet called his uncle, a paddock; for furely a toad or paddock is a much viler animal than an afs. Again, in that well-known place where the ghoft fpeaks to Hamlet, nothing, as it feems to me, mould be altered but a trifling fpelling : " 3 Cut off even in the bloffoms of my fin, " Unhouzzled, difappointed, unaneal'd. 3. Mr. Theobald has very rightly explair/d this pnfTage ; but why initead of difappointed he fubititutes unappointed, I can't find any reafon ; nor does he himfelf give any. In fome editions, without any authority or critical {kill, they have printed, UnltufeTd, ttwnoitted} K^anrfaTt/. UN- 190 Critical Obfervations Book II. UNHOUSEL'D, i. e. not having received the facrament. ^Oltfel, is the eucharift or facrament. Sax. ljufl* Lat. bqftiola : to Ijoufe!, is to give the facrament to one on his death-bed : nd cer- tes ones a year at left it is lawful to be houfeled. Chau- cer in the parfon's tale, p. 212. DISAPPOINTED, having miffed of my appointment by the prieft ; not confeffed and been abfolved. Appointment is fo ufed in Meafure for Meafure, Act. III. Tour beft appointment make with fpeed^ i. e. what reconciliation for your fins, what penance is ap- pointed you. UNANNEIL'D, not having the laft aitncth>ngC, extreme unction : andeD, anoyled, from the Lat. oho inunftus. In Othello, AftV. " I'verubb'd this young Qua! almoft to thefenfe *' And he grows angry. lago is fpeaking of Roderigo, a quarrelfome and lewd young fellow. Now of ail birds a Quail is the moft quarrelfome and lewd, a fit emblem of this rake. The Romans fought them as we fight our cocks. Ovid. Amor. L. II. eleg. VI. EC ce coiurnices inter fua praelia vivunt. In Antony and Cleopatra, Act. II. Antony fays of Octavius, His quails ever beat mine. The lewdnefs of this bird is mention'd by Xenophon in his memoirs of Socrates, L. II. c. i. Sect. 6. on SHAKESPEARE. 191 Tov oJVe OPTTFE2 TJ T? ^A? n SHAKESPEARE." As for this lady which be Jheweth bere^ Is not (I wager] Florimel at all ; But few: fair /ranion, fit for fetch a fear That by misfortune in his band did fall. Fit for (ucb a fear i i. e. fit for fuch a fearful per- Ton, fuch a coward ; as perhaps fome might think it fhould be interpreted. But this place in Spen- cer is wrongly fpelt, and it fhould be thus writ* ten, But fome fair frannion^ fit for fuch a fere. But fome loofe creature fit for fuch a companion. Fere is fo ufed by Spencer and Chaucer. So that Spencer and Shakefpeare mould both be correct- ed. The ftory is taken from Plutarch in his life of Antony, htywv TJJV TU'^>P *WT, AjU7r^oTatT)jy Xffotv ^ p^V?v, JTTO T>J? KouVa^o? cipeuigSfftiou. The Latin tranflator is wrong here, TU^>J is his Genius, not chance or fortune. o y% cos Q?oiiw KJ jytpovot o Zivs tioxtv louuv* ' ST- $k if TH* ALMIGHTY FATHER SHINES. Several pafiages in Shakefpeare are corrupted thro* thefe fort of omifiions. In Macbeth, Aft I. Lady Macbeth reading a letter," And re- " ferred me to the coming on of time, with, " Hail king that malt be ! Tis very plain it mould be, Hail king that ft) alt be HEREAFTER ! for this word me ufes em- phatically, when (he greets Macbeth at firft meet- ing him, " Greater than both by fa. All-bail hereafter! Being the words of the witch, " All-hail, Macbeth ! that lhalt be king hereafter. Inftances of parts of words omitted we have in Timon, Act IV. Sc. IV. Timon is fpeaking to the two courtefans, " Crack the lawyer's voice, " That he may never more falfe title plead, ** Nor found his quillets fhrilly. HOAR the * Flamen, A That 202 Critical Obfervatiom Book II. * ThatfaMs againft the quality of flefli, " And not believes himfelf; Read , HOARSE, i. e. make hoarfe. For to be hoary is a mark of dignity. We read of reve- rence due to the hoary head, not only in poets, but in fcripture, Levit.-xix, 32. Tboujbali rife up before the HOARY bead. Add to this,, that HOARSE is here moft proper, as oppofed to SCOLDS. In King Lear, AdV. " Lear. Ha! Gonerill! hah, Regan! they " flattered me when the rain came to wet " me There I found 'em. Go to, they " are not MEN o' their words; they told me " I was every thing , 'tis a lie, I am not ague " proof. Read, they are not WOMEN 0' their words. And to add one inftance more. In the Tempeft, Ad II. " Ten confciences, that ftand 'twixt me and " Milan " Canfyd be they, and melt, e'er they moleft ! We muft read, Difcandy'd It they, and melt e'er they moleft ! tyfcandfd. i. e. difiblved. Difeandy and melt $ are Sed. 6. en SHAKESPEARE. 203 are ufed as fynonomous terms in Antony and Cleopatra, Aft IV. " The hearts " That pannell'd me at heels, to whom I gave " Their wifhes, do difcandy, melt their fweets " On blofibming Caefar. By the bye, what a ftrange phrafe is this, tte hearts that pannell'd me at heels ? And how juftly has Mr. Theobald flung it out of the context ? But whether he has placed in it's room a Shake- fpearean expreflion, may admit of a doubt. " The hearts " That pantler'd me at heels. Now 'tis contrary to all rules of criticifm to coin a word for an author, which word, fuppofing it to have been the author's own, would appear far fetched and improper. In fuch a cafe therefore we mould feek for remedy from the author him- felf: and here opportunely a paflage occurs in Timon, Ad IV. " Apem. Will thefe moift trees ** That have outliv'd the eagle, page thy heels " And flap when thou point'ft out ? From hence I would in the above-mention'd verfes correcl, . The 204 Critical Observations Book II. " The hearts " That/wffV me at the heels, to whom I gave " Their wifhes, &c. But to return to the place in the Tempeft : The verfe is to be flurr'd in fcanfion, thus : Vifeandy'd be tbef and melt \ e'er they \ molfft. The printers thought the verfe too long, and gave it, Candfd be tbey and melt. But candy 3 d, is that which is grown into a con- fiftency, as fome forts of confectionary ware: Fr. candir. Ital. candire. Hence us'd for con- geal'd, fixt as in a froft. So in Timon. Wdltbe cold broo^ CANDIED with ice, &c. "Difcandfd therefore feems our poet's own word. We have many inftances of words omit- ted in the books of the ancients. In the laft verfe of Ariphro the Sicyonian, in a poem upon health cited by * Stobaeus j the prefent reading is, Which is thus to be filled up, a. InStobaei excerpt, p. 117. Marcus Scd. 8. on SHAKESPEARE. 205. Marcus Antoninus, B, IV. feft. 23. cites a piece of a verfe from J Ariftophanes, T il WO'AI (piXij Ktxpojr-. But the modern books are a Uttle defective. With this paffage tranflated I mall end this fection. " Every thing is expedient to me, which to " thee is expedient, 6 World : Nothing to me " comes or before, or after it's rime, which to " thee is feafonable. Every thing to me is fruit, ^%^ * T. X. See too Paufanias p. 149. u'Jt), aJJ, &*&;. And Hefychius, in B. B*J-. ^'XXJT>J?, fXix&/r?jf. x. T. X. Inftances in Englifli of the B prefixed, are '{-, 25?QmtJlC : ^vera-u, j'f, to beafe: xxa ? , a {juthe or bulfee: raiuia, a tJ^atoUc: ra/raw, a foufl): r///aj, b^t I &c. Con- cerning the JEol. digamma fee Dionys. Antiq. p. 16. Inftances from hence of the W prefixed, are vbug, FvSvf, taatcc: A'9^, Fe} ? , tocat{)cr : o;-, FoZv-, toine : "Epyoc, Ftpyoy, toCUli J aT, FsJajr, fO ttJOUHD. Hinnitus, inljinnping : y?, [in Plaut. & Terence] ^/, tariff, a of cards, to be plaid flor<7 xXtiJ'*? avct/<*$ *t, EAOflN e* ^CX/M af7r i^va. Eia 8e&. 9. on SHAKESPEARE. 221 In the Temped, Aft IV. " Profp- The cloud- capt towers, the gorgeous " palaces, " The folemn temples, the great globe itfelf, " Yea, all, which it inherit, fhall dijjolve. This is exactly from Scripture. Pet. ep. 2. iii, 10. reiser* AT0HZONTAI. and tf. 1 1. TBTftiv v TXVM- TV ATOMENHN. Seeing then that all thefe things Jhall be DISSOLVED, and jf. 12. Ou^v) ZB-U^'JUSVOI AT0H20NTAI % wrf* K*v See. the common tranilation is, Neqiie hie prius a pefte graves manus abftincbit^ which has neither the fenfe nor beauty of the former interpretation. In the Tempeft, Adi. " To run upon the fharp wind of the north* I would rather read, ; " To ride upon the marp wind of the north. This is the fcripture expreflioh,. "Thou caufeft me to ride upon 'the wind, Job xxx. 22. 'The Lord rideth on thefwift cloud, If. xix. i. Extol him that rideth upon the heavens*. Pf. Ixviii. 4. So SecVio. on SHAKESPEARE. 223 So Milton II, 540. " And ride the air * In whirlwind, And again, X, 475. " Forc'd to rids . " Th* untradlable abyfs. And II, 930. " As in a cloudy chair, afcending rides " Audacious. And Shakefpeare himfelf in Macbeth, A<5t IV. " Infected be the air whereon they ride. ' But perhaps that expreflion of the pfalmift, civ. 3. Who walketh upon the wings of the wind : will vin- dicate Shakefpeare in faying, ct To run upon the fharp wind of the north. SECT. X. TH E editors often change the author's words, (if they happen, which may often be the cafe, not to underftand them) into others more frequently ufed. In the foregoing fection I have fhewed how delinquent was changed into delighted: and here I fhall add fome other in- ftances. Mr. Theobald has very learnedly proved that Shakefpeare ufes the word netion^ in the fame 324 Critical Obfervations Book II, fame fenfe as Cicero does, for idea, conception of things, &c. See his note in Antony and Cleo- patra, Vol. VI. p. 244. and in Othello, Vol. VII. p. 384. Methinks he mould have alter'd fome other paflages : as in Julius Caefar, Ad III. " Yet in the number, I do know but one, " That unafiailable holds on his rank " Unfhak'd of motion. Read, Unjhatfd of notion, i. e. animi et propojtti tenax. In All's well that ends well, Aft II. " 2. Lord. The reaibns of our ftate I cannot " yield, " But like a common and an outward man, " That the great figure of a council frames " By felf unable motion. Read, notion, i. e. from his own ideas, and conception of things.. In Meafure for Meafure, Act III. Lucio is fpeaking of Angelo to the Duke. " He is a motion generative. Read, notion: " though he has the organs of " generation, yet he is meer ideaj all fpirit, " no fiefh and blood.'* The fame word I would reftore to Milton. B. II, 151. Who Sect. 10. on SHAKESPEARE. 225 " Who would lofe " Tho' full of pain, this intellectual being ; " Thofe thoughts that wander thro* eternity ; " To periih, rather, fwallow'd up and loft " In the wide womb of uncreated night, " Devoid of fenfe and ' motion ? .. Read, notion, i. e. devoid of all external and in- ternal fenfe. In King Lear, Aft III. " Edg. Fraterretto calls me and tells me " that Nero is an angler in the lake of darknefs. Nero was a fidler in hell, as Rabelais tells us, B. 2. c. 30. And Trajan was an angler, Shake- fpeare was a reader of Rabelais, as may be proved from many imitations of him ; and here plainly he has that facetious Frenchman in his view. Trajan might have this office given him in hell, I. Who, fays he, would be annihilated, lofe his Intel - " leftual being and all his thoughts ? Motion therefore is " an improper word here, that's no part of thought, nor " abftra&ed has any excellence in it. I am perfuaded, he " gave it, Devoid of fenfe and ACTION. *' Deprived of our faculties, to perceive and to aft." Dr. Bentley. A printer might eafily miitake motion, for notion ; but hardly for afiion. Q not 226 Critical Qbfervatiom Book II. not only becaufe he was a perfecutor of the Chriftians, but as he was a great drinker, and that he might have liquor enough in the next world, he was made a fifherman : Rabelais has as trifling reafons as this, for many of his witti- cifms : but whatever was Rabelais' reafon is ano- ther queftion : this however was not Nero's office. But the players and editors, not willing that fo good a prince as Trajan mould have fuch a vile employment, fubftituted Nero in his room, without any fenfe or allufion at all. From Rabelais therefore the pafiage mould be thus corrected, Trajan is an angler in the lake of darknefs. For one cannot fay with any propriety, Nero is ajidler in the lake of darknefs. I cannot pals over a moft true correction, printed in the Oxford edition, of a faulty paflage in Antony and Cleopatra, Ad III. which was originally corrupted by this change of the firft editors. " Cleop. What (hall we do, Enobwbus ? " Eno. Think, and die. Drink and die , This emendation is undoubtedly true. 'Tis ipoken by Enobarbus, in allufion to the fociety of the 2TNAnoANOTMENOI, mention'd in Plutarch, p. 949. D. The hint was i taken Se&. 10. on SHAKESPEARE. 227 taken from a comedy of Diphilus, mention'd by Terence in his prologue to the Adelphi, " ZTNAII00NH2KONTEI Diphili comoedia eft: " Earn commorientes Plautus fecit fabulam. The fame kind of blunders we have frequent in ancient books : I will mention one in thofe verfes of Tyrtaeus, which Stobaeus has pre- ferved. Huvoy J 1 ' te^Ac* TTO wcAijt -n isotvli re tPty-tar, "()$o/*6i%OKri p-ivy- This was an expreflion that Tyrtaeus was fond of^ and he repeats it again, 'AAA ^^g af, ft aiding firm i one leg advanced before the other: the legs being fevered and fet afunder, each from the other. But he took the expreflion from Homer, II. p. 458. SrJJ ft [4, Which the tranflator renders, Jirmiter dlvaricatis cruribus ftans : and the fcholiaft interprets by 2 8 Critical Obfervations Book II, Vfcv^wf ?*V which interpretation Milton fol- lows: " * Stand frm, for in his look defiance lours. Notwithftanding Tyrtaeus borrowed this from Homer, yet by laying fo much ftrefs on this po- fture of fighting, and by his often repeating it, Plato in his firft book of laws makes no fcruple of calling it Tyrtaeus' own exprefiion. Aa7g 9 3* u " There are many mercenaries, who firmly ftand- " ing their ground with one foot boldly advanc- " ed before the other, (for fo Tyrtaeus expreflfes ** it) would gladly die fighting in battle." SECT. XI. NOTHING is more common than for words to be tranfpofed in hafty writing, and to change their places. This has happen'd in Timon, Adi III. 2. Par. L. IV, 873. Milton, in this whole epifode, keeps dofe to his mafter Homer, who fends out Ulyfles and Dio- mede into the Trojan camp as fpies. II. *'. 533. T ft t, And the Lacedemonian form of prayer, T xA* 67ri icr? oiFa.Qo~s TV 9"sV &$ovou, which words Mr. Addifon in his fpeclator, Vol. III. No. 207. renders, to give them all good things as long as they are virtuous. But this is neither the conftruction, nor the meaning : for T< XA in} -reiv <*fa0oV, is the fame as T* xAaxr6<, whatever things are fair, boneft, good, and becoming : as oppofed, to the fervile, deformed, dilhoneft. Xenophon, in his memoirs of Socrates, has an allufion to this prayer of the Lacedemonians -, fpeaking of Socrates, he fays, Ev^elo arpo? ? 9-f AFIAflS T*T*9* ^* JoVi. And our Milton in his moft di- vine hymn, where the only petition is jf. 205, B. V. " Be bounteous ftill " To give us only good. 0.4 The 232 .Critical Objervations Book II. The compilers of our liturgy did not forget this beautiful prayer. We fpimblg befeecl) fljee to put atoav from us all fjurtful things, ana to gifce us tljofe things tolncf) be profitable for us. Trin. Sund. Coll. 8. And in that truly divine prayer in the communion fervice, &Umgl)tv CoD, tl)e fountain of aUteifoom, &c. &c. The fecond Alcibiades of Plato Shakefpeare feems to have red ; for in his Antony and Cleopatra, Act II. he has the following plain allufion, to what the philofopher endeavours fo much to inculcate, viz. How little we know of our real good , and that filly mortals would be ruin'd by their petitions, did the Gods but hearken to them : " Men. We, ignorant of our felves, * c Beg often our own harms, which the wife " powers " Deny us for our good -, fo find we profit '' By lofing of our prayers. Mr. Theobald has very pertinently cited here thefe lines of Juvenal " Quid enim ratione timemus * c Aut cupimus ? quid tam dextro pede concipis " utte " Conatus non poeniteat, votique peracli ? " Evertere domus totas optantibus ipfis " Dii faciles, " Nam Soft. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 233 " Nam pro jucundis aptifllma quaeque dabimt " dii: tc Carior eft illis homo, quam fibi. Nos animo- " rum " Impulfu, et caeca magnaque cupidine ducti, &c. I cannot help propofmg a moft certain correction, as I think, of this laft cited verfe of Juvenal : for the poet, following his mafter Plato, is con- demning what is done by the blind impulfe of the mind and the covetous fancy ; befide the verfe will be more harmonious if we read, " Nos animorum " Impulfu eaeco, magnaque cupidine dudi, " Conjugium petimus. SECT. XII. AUTHORS are not careful enough of their copies, when they give them into the printer's hand ; which, often being blotted or ill written, muft be help'd out by meer guefs- work. Printers are not the beft calculated for this critical work, I think, fmce the times of Aldus and the Stephens's. What wonder there- fore if in fuch a cafe we meet, now and then, with ftrange and monftrous words, or highly improper expreffions, and often contradictory to the author's defign and meaning ? We have taken 234 Critical Obfervations Book II. taken notice in a former fection of pannelled be r ing placed in the context inftead of paged. Of the like fort is the following paflage in Romeo and Juliet, Ad II. " Young Abraham Cupid, he that mot fo true, " When king Cophetua lov*d the beggar maid. Shakefpeare wrote, Young Adam Cupid, &c. The printer or tranfcriber, gave us this Abram^ miftaking the ' d for br : and thus made a paffage dired i. A letter blotted, or a ftroke of the pen, might eafily occafion the corruption. And hence many blunders arife. In Spencer, B. I. c. 7. ft. 33. " His warlike fhield, &c. '* But all of diamond perfect pure and clean : We mult read, Jbeen. See B. z. c. i. ft. 10. and B. 4. c. 5. ft. ii. Again, B. 3. 0.4. ft. 49. " Like as a fearful dove, which thro' the rain " Of the wide air her way does cut amain. Read, reign: i. e. realm, or region : in which fenfe Spencer often ufes it, and Milton, B. I. 543. The reign of chaos. In 8.5. 0.7. ft. 31. " Full fiercely laid the Amazon about, " And dealt her blows, &c. " Which Britomart withftood with courage ftout, " And them repaid again with double more. Read, ft ore : Sec c. 8. ft. 34. Se&. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 235 direft nonfenfe, which was underftood in Shake- fpeare's time by all his audience : for this Adam was a moft notable archer ; and for his fkill be- came a proverb. In Much Ado about Nothing, Act I. " And he that hits me, let him be clapt " on the moulder, and called ADAM." Where Mr. Theobald's ingenious note is worth reading. His In B. 6. c. 5. ft. 4. " Now wringing both his wretched hands in one. Read, atone : i. e. together : frequently fo ufed by Spencer. Thefe blunders feem entirely owing to the wrong guefies of the printer, or tranfcriber. Some ftrokc of the pen occa- fion'd the following corrupt reading in the Medaea of Euripides, if. 459. KO.X. ruvS' a* uTrnpnttui; IA01 w, TO <7o y *rpo " Ego tamen ne propter haec quidem defeffus amicorum " gratia venio, profpedlurus tibi, o mulier." What con- ftruc~Uon is this? <&Xo? r,xa" befide dirncnxivtm is, ammo concidij/e, animum defpondijje, Sec. I imagine the poet gave it, iX^. vxu, I come your friend: as we fay in Englifh. But printers can blunder, as well as tranfcribers in copy after copy. In Milton's Samfon Agoniftes, jr. 1650. the Meffenger is defcribing Samfon's pulling the temple on the Philiftins. " Thofe two maffie pillars " With horrible confufion to and fro " He tugg'd, he took, 'till down they came, and drew " The whole roof after them. We 23-6 Critical Obfervations Book II. His name was Adam Bell. So that here, Young Adam Cupid, &c. is the fame as, Young Cupid that notable archer, &c. The ilory of king Cophetua and the beggar maid is elfe.where al- luded to by Shakefpeare ; and by Johnfon, in Every Man in his Humour, Act III. fc. IV. " I have not the heart to devoure you, an' I " might be made as rich as king Cophetua." In Julius Caefar, Act. 1. " CaiTius. Tell me, good Brutus, can you " fee your face ? " Brutus. No, Caffius -, for the eye fees not " it/eft * c But by reflection from fome other things. Caff. 'Tisjuft " And it is very much lamented, Brutus, " That you have no fuch mirrors, as will turn " Your hidden worthinefs into your eye, " That you might fee your fhadow. We muft con-eft, he Jhoak. Again, in his elegant fonnet to the foldier to fpare his houfe : " The great Emathian conqueror did fpare " The houfe of Pindarus. We muft read, lid fpare. As Mr. Theobald and Dr. Bentley often tells us, that they had the happinefs to make many corrections, which they find afterwards fupported by the authority of better copies ; fo with the fame vanity, I can afiure the reader, I made the above emendations in Milton, and found, after all, the paflages corrupted by one J.Tonfon. 'Tis Sedl. 12. on SHAREWARE. 237 'Tis plain from the reply of Brutus, and the whole tenor of the reafoning, that Caflius fhould fay, *' Tell me, good Brutus, can you fee your eye? The analogy is no lefs beautiful, than philofo- phical, of the rational faculty (the internal eye) to the corporeal organ of fight : and in the firft Alcibiades of Plato, p. 132, 133. of Stephens' edition, there is exactly a parallel inftance. Caffius tells Brutus that he will be his mirror, and mew him to himfelf. In Julius Caefar, Ad IV. Antony. Thefe many then/hall die 9 their names are frickt. Octavius. Tour brother too muft die : confentyou Lepidus ? Lepidus. / do confent. Octavius. Prick him down^ Antony. Lepidus . Upon condition , Pu B L i u sjbatt not live ; Who is your fitter's fon, Mark Antony. The triumvirs, A. U. 7 1 o. met at a fmall ifland formed by the river Labinius, (now Lavino,) near Mantua ; as Appian de bell, civil, writes. Others fay in an ifland formed by the river Rhenus, now Reno : and there came to a refolution of cut- ting off all their enemies, in which number they I included 238 Critical Obferuations Book II. included the old republican party. Antony fet down Cicero's name in the lift of the profcribed : Octavius infifted on Antony's facrificing Lucius, bis uncle by the mother 1 s fide : And Lepidus gave up his own brother, L. yEmilius Paulus. As 'tis not uncommon to blunder in proper names, I make no doubt but in the room of-Publius we mould place Lucius, Antony's uncle by his mother's fide : and then a trifling correction fets right the other line. Lepidus. Upon condition Lucius /hall not live. Ton are hisjifter's /?, Mark Antony. In Antony and Cleopatra Act III. Caefar is fpeaking of the vaflal kings, who attended An- tony in his expedition againft him, " He hath affembled " Bocchus the king of Lybia, Archelaus " Of Cappadocia, Philadelphos king " Of Paphlagonia ; theThracian king '- " King * Malchus of Arabia, king of Pont., " Herod of Jewry, Mithridates king " Of Comagene, Polemon and Amintas, " The king of Mede, and Lycaonia, M Witb a more larger lift of feeders. 2. Plut. p. 944. B. ' 3- Plut. ibid. MaT^fc. || *ApC. Shakefpeare very rightly writes, Ma/ { fa, : and fo Hirtius de bell. Alex. This Se&. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 239 This mufter-roll is taken from Plutarch in his life of Antony: the tranflation is as follows, " His land-forces were compofed of a hundred- " thoufand foot, and twelve thoufand horfe. " He had of vaffal kings attending, Bocchus of " Libya, [Tarcondemus of the upper Cilicia,] " Archelaus of Cappadocia, Philadelphus of " Paphlagonia, Mithridates of Commagena, and " Adallas king of Thracia ; all thefe attended " him in the war. Many others who could not " ferve in perfon, fent him their contributions of forces, Polemon of Pontus^ Malchus of Ara- " bia, Herod of Jury, and Atnyntas * ftill king " of Lycaonia and Galatia ; and even the king " of Media fent him a very confiderable rein- " forcement." To omit Adullas, for Adallas, who is the king of Font, but Polemo ? and who of Lycaonia, but Amintas ? Firft then the king of Pont is to be ftricken off the lift. And I make no doubt but in the original writing it was fo : and what the poet blotted out, the printer gave us, because he faw it filled up the verfe : 4. "Krt Si 'Aftv/laf o Avxxotut x^ FaXoU*. And moreover^ &c. The words in Plutarch fhould be tranfpofed, for Amyntas was not king both of Lycaonia, and Galatia:, thus, m oi 'Ap-'JiTa? o Avxawuv, x^ o tacrtXii.^ Ta.\sC\^i. And moreover, Amyntas of Lycaonia , and the king of Galatia. And 'tis remarkable, this blunder of the tranilator's is avoided by the eafy change I make of Shakefpeare's words. " King 240 Critical Obferuatiom Book II. " King Malchus of Arabia. Having gotten rid of the king of Pont : how lhall we reconcile to Plutarch ? " Polemon and Amintas, " The king of Mede, and Lycaonia. This may be done by an eafy tranfpofition of the words, " Polemon, and Amintas " Of Lycaonia ; and the king of Mede. In Antony and Cleopatra, Act. IV. " Caefar. My mefienger, " He* hath whipt with rods, dares me toperfonal " combat^ " Caefar to Antony. Let the old ruffian know, is a feaman's phrafe. In a Midfummer Night's-Dream, A6t IV. " Queen. Sleep thou, and I will wind thee " in my arms. " Fairies, begone, and be J always away. Read, * e Fairies begone and be away. Away, [Seeing them loiter. The fairies being gone, the queen turns to her new lover, " So doth the 6 woodbine the fweet honey-fuckk " Gently 5. Mr. Theobald thinks the poet meant and be all ways away. i. e. difperfe yourfelves, and fcout out feverally, - in your watch. 6. Mr. Theobald has printed it, " So doth the woodbine, the fweet honey-fuckle, " Gently entwift the maple ; Ivy fo, &c. R This 242 Critical Obferuations Book II. " Gently entwift , the female Ivy fo " Enrings the barky fingers of the elm. Read, wood rim, i. e. the honey-fuckle entwifts the rind or bark of the trees : " So doth the wood rim the fweet honey-fuckle " Gently entwift. In Shakefpeare's time this was the manner of fpelling ; fo Spencer in the Shepherd's Calendar, eclog. 2. " But now the gray mofs marred his rine. In Troilus and Creffida, Ad IV. " Par. You told, howDiomede a whole week, " by days, " Did haunt you in the field. Prefently after Diomede fays to Aeneas, " By Jove I'll play the hunter for thy life. " Aen. And thou fhalt hunt a 7 lion that will " fiie With his face back. How This is too great a variation from the received reading : and how jejune is it to tell us, that the woodbine and the honey- fuckle is the fame thing i 7. Homer has the fame companion of Ajax retreating from the Trojans. II. A'. 547. and of Menelaus. II. ^'. 109. And Virgil of Turnus, Aen, IX, 792. Ce* Soft. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 243 How can we doubt then but Paris fays, Did bunt you in the field ? In Antony and Cleopatra, Act III. " Caefar. Unto her 8 " He gave the 'ftablifhment of Egypt, made " her " Of lower Syria, Cyprus, Lydia " Abfolute queen. Ceufaevum turba leonem Cum telis premit infenfes t at territui Hie, 4/per, acerba tuens, retro redit ; et xeque tergA Ira dare out virtus patitur, &c. 8. He is fpeaking of Cleopatra, whom prefently after he defcribes (following the hiftorian) drefled in the habit of the Aegyptian Goddefs Ifis : whofe name fhe took, /<* "laij i%fnfAarnrt. Plut in Anton, p. 941. Which is thus rendered, novae Ifedii nomine rejponfa dabatpopulii : it fhould be, novae Ifidii nomen fibl atquirebat. The poet has too faithfully followed the tranflators. "She " In the habiliments of the goddefs Ifis " That day appear'd, and oft before gave audience^ " As 'tis reported, fo. This circumflance is prettily alluded to by Virgil. Aen. VIII, 696. defcribing Cleopatra in the naval fight at Adium. Regina in medi'n patrio vocat agmlna fiflro. R 2 Read 244 Critical Obfervations Book II. Read Lybia : as is plain from Plutarch in his life of Antony. npalTn* piv cintQyvt KAtcT^-r^v fiotfff- AiATflCv 'AJvnlx KJ KUJT x, AIBTH2, *, xo/Aj? Sue/'*?> X. T. A. Plut. p. 941- B. 'TIS pleafant enough to confider, how the change of one fingle letter has often led learned commentators into miftakes. And a n being accidentally altered into B, in a Greek rheto- rician, gave occafion to one of the belt pieces of fatyre, that was ever written in the Englifh language, viz. HEPI BA0OY2, a treatife concern- ing the art cf finking in poetry. The blunder I mean is in the fecond fection of Longinus, El ESTIN TOT! Til H BA0OT2 TEXNH, inftead of IIAeOYS. A moft ridiculous blunder, which has occafion'd as ridiculous criticifms. That the A mould be written for a n is no wonder, fince Dionyfius in his Roman antiqui- ties, p. 54. lias the following remark, KglvJou TWV TpWIXWV SlUV etXSVtf XTTtX.O'tV Oj>V AENAS tyyv *%VGJU S^KZca* T\ I1ENATA2. $OK&yci(> II jU>/7rw j-p^wiua^^- tv^nkvx tw A J?Av TJ Mvatpiv V arAtsV. The old Greek word for Urine, they wrote AEAOS, but when the Greek alphabet was compleated, RHAO2 : this word grown antiquated, they ufed OINOZ. In Theo- critus, Id. . $. 13. we muft read, 'Ex sr/ta oiy]Aj HHAON* ej/w , and appear fill fublhnly fufpended to your contemplating fcholar. In another place, f. 94. The fchool of Socrates is called 4fov?s-i'e>o, the fchool of careful contempla- tion. And themfelves, >?-. 101. are called, pi- /juvcc'v7/f<, the fad and folemn contemplators. Plato in his apology alludes to thefe pafTages of Ariflophanes, and fpeaks of this buffoonery, eat f -n? Swx^Tijf eoQos f it pl1iwp Qpovltsw. ?Tis frequently hinted too, that he taught his fcholars Se. 12. on SHAKESPEARE. 492 fcholars direft atheifm, and a contempt for the religion of his country. And in the fecond fcene Socrates and his fcholars, like a fociety of natural philofophers, are employed about many curious enquiries, as whether a gnat fings thro* it's mouth or fundament, with others of the like important nature. ETT T>JV Srpsi]/. riwf ^TA TT' iptrgnri ; MA. Ai^u-rotla. ** Socrates lately inquired of Chaerepho concern- " ing the nature of fleas, for infhmce, how many " of it's own feet a flea could go at one leap : " for having bitten the eyebrow of Chaerepho, it " leaped upon the bald pate of Socrates. Strep- " Well, and how did he meafure it ? Schol. " Moft dextroufly." Thefe paflfages of Ari- flophanes will be fufEcient to make way for my correction of Xenophon in his Banquet, p. 176, 177, edit. Oxon. which I would thus read, , tAA>jAotf o 4>PONTI!TH , n A^PONTISTOS TliN METEIZPHN 250 Critical Obfervations Book II. wett. Ow-0* sr, e

o Swx^W, METEJiPOTE- PON T( TWU twv ; 'AAA' * pa A/', VE2\OTIIN, yd% fft tyaur) ytce(Atl(}v. As puns cannot be tranflated, fo I fliall not attempt to tranflate this. I have ventured to infert ANH before n<[)EAOT- 2IN, to compleat the pun on the preceding word ANHflEAESTATATflN. And have likewife cor- reftcd iJ/uAAflw and a7r^? s inftead of \]/VAA< and Airtyft. For the fenfe is, " tell me how " many feet of a flea you are diftant from me : " as is plain from Ariftophanes : not as the words now are printed, void of all allufion and turn, " tell me how many feet a flea is diftant from " me." There is a kind of pun in repeating pretty near the fame letters with the preceding word, to which the rhetoricians have given a particular name, and in making a fort of a jingling found of words. Of this the fophifts of old were fond, and they are ridiculed ingenioufly in Plato's Banquet for this affectation. I0 nATSANIOT tl io. Plat. Symp. p. 185, edit. Steph. I HAT2A-' Set 12. on SHAKESPEARE. nAYSAMENOT, Moiffxxfft ydf pt ISA Afv &?) oi $e'i. And again in his Gorgias " fl AftSTE II-flAE, I'rflc zrfofftiiru r x7 . i. e. to addrefs you. in your own manner. Which I mention be- caufe the interpreters feem to mifimderftand him, So in Terence. Andria, Act I. " Inceptio eft amentium, haud amantium. Nor is Homer without inftances of this kind. II. . 201. *AAj'iioV II. And Virgil, Aen.VII, 295. Imitating oldEnnius, Num captipotuere capi ? Num incenfa cremavit Troja viros ? Aen. VI, 32. Bis conatus erat cafus effingere in auro^ Bis patriae cecidere manus. And Milton frequently, as B. I. jf, 433. " And unfrequented left " His righteous altar, bowing lowly down " To beftial Gods ; for which their heads as low " Bow'd down in battel. 1 1. Plat. Gorg. p. 467. See Ariftot. Rhet. 1. 3. c. 9. I, 642, 252 Critical Obferuations Book II. I, 642. " Which tempted our attempt, and wrought our fall. VI, 868. " And to begird th' almighty throne " Befeeching or fafieging. IX, 647. " Serpent! we might have fpar'd our coming " hither, " Fruitkfe to me, though fruit be here t* excefs. Inftances in Shakefpeare are without number - y however I will mention one or two. Macbeth, Aft I. " What thou wouldft highly^ " That thou wouldft holily. " And catch '* With itsfurceafe, fuccefs. Hamlet, Ad I. " A little more than 1Z kin, and lefs than kind. Of this jingling kind are the following verfes, where the letters are repeated. Homer II. $. 526. 12. He fcems to have taken this from Gorboduc, Aft J. In kinde a father, t>ut ntt in kindelynefs. IKad Se'. 407. Our countryman Dryden was fo fond of this repetition, that he thought it one of the greateft beauties in poetry , and ufed to repeat this verfe of his own as an inftance, When MAN on MAN? Multiplied bis kind. It cannot be denied that Virgil abounds with many examples of this fort, which his commen- tator Erythraeus terms alliteratio, allufio verborum^ and ajfonantia fyllabarum. And the ingenious Mr. Benfon, the editor and admirer of Johnfton's tranflation of the pfalms, lays the higheft ftrefs on this alliteration. Milton, who knew the whole art and myftery of verification, has fometimes almoft every word with the fame letter repeated, as VI, 840. " Oer fields, and &*lms, and Mmed ^ads fa " rode. IX, 901. " Drfac'd, <&flower'd, and now to dfath ^vote. And 254 Critical Obferuations Book II. And fo in other places, not fo frequent as Virgil, or Spencer. This will appear in giving an inftance from Spencer, B. I. 39. " And through the world of waters wide and " deep. This line Milton has borrowed, III, n. " The rifing world of waters | dark and and the verfes, cited from the Twelfth Night, mew that our author was pleafed with the allufion. It feems the cor- ruption was owing to fome fort of ill-written, abbreviation, that might be in the original, as Egp att , and which could not eafily be underftood by printer or player. S From 2 5 8 Critical Obfervatiom Book II. From fuch like abbreviations arife no fmall blunders in ancient books. In the Greek ma- nufcripts we often find a*0pjr-, OpV, thus abbreviated, A~ ? , 'A,. This abbreviation has occafion'd fome confufion in many printed books. As for example, in a difiertation of Maximus Tyrius, T o Qtos x*7a nhoiruva, what Deity is according to Plato. We find Plato is there called, o uvoT7- TWV ONTHN. It would be compli- ment fufficient to fay, o cvcpwvoTa?- TWV ANUN 5 i. e. oivfycanw. There is very little difference between ONTHN and ANHN, if it be confidered how eafily the ftroke over oivav might be mif- taken for a t by a tranfcriber : Plato 9 the mojl eloquent of 'mortals? feems the compliment intend- ed by Maximus Tyrius. ANUN is changed into ATTHN in our prefent printed copies of Marcus Antoninus, B. IV. f. 38. T ii/ip0vix' ATTON fAT8 x. T. A. It mould be T >jy. arm : i. e. wfyuTtew &#G\t7ft x. T. A. In Seft. 14. on SHAKESPEARE. In St. Matthew's gofpel, xxvii, 9. it has been very rightly obferved, that the tranfcriber of thisverfe miftook ZPIOT for IPIOT -, but as fome MSS. are extant without either reading, I ftiould print .it, .Tote tTTA^oiOtf TO p'jjSb o7- x. T. A. So that 1^ or Z^ was a glofs, and from the margin received into the text. SECT. XIV. IT is not at all furprifing that the perfons in the drama Ihould be changed, either thro* the blunders, or wrong judgment of the tran- fcribers and players. In the Tempeft, Aft I. " Profpero. What is the time o* th* day ? " Ariel. Paft the mid feafon. " Profp. At leaft two glafles ; the time twixt " fix and now " Muft by us both be fpent mod precioufly. Who can imagine that Profpero would afk a queftion, and anfwer it himfelf? But a trifling diftinclion will make all right. " Prof. What is the time o'th' day? " Ar. Paft the mid feafon, " At leaft two glafles. S 2 " Profp. 26 o Critical Obfer nations Book II. " Profp. The time twixt fix and now ee Muft by us both be fpent moft precioufly. In As you like it, Ad II. The Duke is fpeak- ing of the happinefs of his retirement. " And this our life, exempt from publick haunt, " Finds tongues in trees, books in the running " brooks, " Sermons in ftones, and good in every thing : " I would not change it. " Am. Happy is your Grace, &c. How much more in character is it for the Duke to fay, " I would not change it," than for Amiens ? InK. Henry V. Aft IV. K. Henry. But, hark, what new alarum is this fame? The French have reinforced their fcatter'd men. Iben every foldier kill his prifoners. Give the word through. Enter Fluellen and Cower. Flu. Kill the poyes and the luggage ! 'tis exprefslj againft the law of arms, &c. How fhould the King know the French had reinforced their men ? It fhould thus be printed, K. Henry. But, hark, what new alarum is this fame ? Enter Se<5h 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 261 Enter a Meffenger. Meff. The French have reinforced their fcatter'd men. K. Hen. Then every foldier kill his prifoners : Give the word through. [Exeunt. In Antony and Cleopatra, Ad I. " Cleopatra. Excellent falfhood ! " Why did he marry Fulvia, and not love her ? " I'll feem the fool, I am not. Antony " Will be himfelf. " Ant. But ftirr'd by Cleopatra. " Now for the love of love, and his foft hours, efe I make no queftion but the author thus gave it, " Cleo. Excellent fallhood ! " Why did he marry Fulvia, and not love her ? 41 I'll feem the fool, I am not. Antony " Will be himfelf, but ftirr'd by Cleopatra. [Aftde. * Ant. Now for the love of love, and his foft " hours, &c. SECT. XV. THERE are no ancient books now re- maining, but what, more or lefs, have fuffered from the ignorance of tranfcribers foift- ing into the text fome marginal note, or glofs. S 3 One 262 Critical Obfer vat ions Book II. One would have imagined, that printing mould have put an end to thefe fort of blunders ; yet Mr. Theobald has with great judgment difco- vered a marginal direction, printed from the prompter's books, in As you like it, A6t IV. where a fong is inferted, ' Then fmg him home, [ " The rejlfoatt bear this burthen."} This being written in the prompter's copy, by way of direction to the players, the unattending printer mixed them with the poet's own words. Again, in Richard II. Aft III. " Bol. Thanks, gentle uncle -, come, my lords, " away, " [Tofgbl with Glendower and bis complies] " A while to work and after holiday. The intermediate verfe he has rightly flung out for the fame reafon. In the Merry Wives of Windfor, Aft V. " Mrs. Ford. Where is Nan now, and her " troop of fairies, and the Welch devil Herne? There was a plot carrying on againft Falftaff, which was to be afted near Herne's oak, in Windfor-Park. Mr. Theobald has printed, the Welcb devil Evans. Thinking, Herns got into the Sett. 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 263 the text by the inadvertent tranfcriber's calling his eyes too haftily on the fucceding line, where the word again occurs. But perhaps the occafion of the blunder might be more accurately traced. There was fome little machinery neceflary to be furnifhed out in the acting of this plot, with fairy dancing, &c. The management of this was left to Mr. Herne, then belonging to the houfe, who is mention'd by Johnfon in his Mafque at Whitehall, February 2, 1609. where fpeaking of the magical dances of the witches, he fays, " All which were excellently " imitated by the maker of the dance, M. " Hierome Herne, whofe right it is here to be K TIC-|W$. ' when 266 Critical Obfer nations Book II. " when Cyrenius was governor of Syria.'* But Cyrenius was not governor of Judea, 'rill it became a Roman province and /Vrchelaus was depofed. The author of the Epiftle to the Hebrews, fpeaking of the effects of faith, has thefe words, chap. xi. it. 36, 37. *ETOI pccstfen IIEIPAN EAABON, e & tv, EIIEIPA20HZAN, i x. T. A. And others HAD -rtti ALL of cruel mac kings andfcoiirgings^ yea more- over of bonds and imprifonment : they were ftoncd y they were fawn afunder, WERE TEMPTED, were Jlain with the fiwrd, &c. It has been very rightly inquired, how came here among thefe punifh- ments and torments, EnEIPA20H2AN. And this enquiry has fet the critics a guefllng, to find fome word, near the traces of the original, which will tally with the fenfe. However I cannot but think that ivMQgtrtiqrav was a marginal interpre- tation of arv !Xoy, i. e. they were tempted to forjake the faith : which the fcribe removed out of it's proper place, among thofe verbs which feem'd to be formed moft like it. After I had made this correction, I found, upon a minuter examination, the word omitted in fome ancient copies. When lately a certain gentleman who had more ingenuity than truth on his fide, putting on Sed. 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 267 on the mafk of a Jew, began to call in queftion the application of fome prophecies in the Gofpel, the propereft anfwerer had been Dr. Bentley , who forc'd this fophift once before to quit the critical ftage. But the Dr. piqued at what he thought the negleft of his merit, left all theolo- gical controverfies, and even ordered his half- finifhed Remarks to be broken off in the middle of a fentence. Had our critic taken in hand this perfonated Hebrew, how finely would he have mingled his fcience of antiquity with his fkill in languages ? How well would he have known what to defend, how far, and where to flop ? ITT) iJjf x. tASwv Thus far the evangelift. Then comes a ca- baliflical annotator, and in imitation of the reft of the prophecies, adds, in a marginal note, the following words, But where is it faid that the Mefiiah mould be called a Nazarene ? Muft not a poor pun, or play 268 Critical Obfervations Book II. play upon a word be forced on us, even to give a diftant hint of fuch an 4 appellation ; a quibble, in this place, unworthy the gravity of an evan- gelift ? And to wire-draw what is faid of s Samp- Ion into a prediction of the Meffiah's being born at Nazareth, is the laft effort of commentators driven to their utmoft fhifts. Non tali auxiliff, non defenforibus iftis Tempus eget. Sometimes authors add interpretations of dif- ficult words for the fake of perfpicuity, and thefe we find in Cicero, Caefar, and the correcteft writers. Nor are the following any other glofles, but what were added by the evangelift himfelf. Mark vii, 2. Kovo)f. xiv, 36. arolj'^. XV, 42. E5T ^v zsct^offfy.^^ o If* But it is objected, that we muft take all the fcripture together juft as we find it. What, writers for hire, and ignorant fcribes to be placed in equal regard and authority with the evangelifts! Weak and wicked as this objection is, yet I have heard it from foolim friends, as well as evil- minded enemies. Thefe marginal notes carry with them no air of fraud or ill defign -, they are fuch as moft critics fcribble in their books, 4. Ifaiah xi. i. 5. Judg. xiii. 5. and Sed. 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 269 and which printing generally hinders from being ingrafted into the body of the original work. However even the invention of printing has not kept them from getting into Shakefpeare. I don't fee, without recurring to the above- mention'd expediency of emendation, what to- lerable fenfe can be made of the following paflage in Julian's Caefars, which I will cite from the folio edition of Spanheim. p. 310. T cc^en dvl) rS A^oc-Sjuij?, jcoAflOcdUri* JJJflsv * o^g T KA<5ty'flW?f \7I7rias T vw'rij7ov ol of T X. 7. T Some one had written in the margin of his book, #'vTi T A>j|wsf KoAocxdO'oiv J^S-EV T KAw^ov, this heavy interpretation was admitted, and, to make room for it, the tranfcriber removed thofe well applied verfes of Ariftophanes. The meaning of which the reader will underftand, if he turns to a fati- rical treatife of Seneca written to ridicule Clau- dius and to flatter Nero -, but not to be compared in philofophical wit and humour to this fatyr of Julian. Indeed 15. on SHAKESPEARE. 271 Indeed when thefe glofies are abfolutely falfe, or very ridiculous, 'tis eafy to difcover them. So in Plato's laws, L. I. p. 630. edit Steph. TWV iv 2' ing. Confequently Andronicus muft have " been on the ftage, before Shakefpeare left " Warwickfhire to come and refide in London." So that we have all the evidence, both internal and external, to vindicate our poet from this baftard ifiue j nor mould his editors have printed it among his genuine works. There are not fuch ftrong external reafons for rejecting two other plays, called Love*s Labour's loft, and the Two Gentlemen of Verona : but if any proof can be formed from manner and ftyle, then Every Man in his Humour, Aft I. fc. 5. What nen.u book ha you there? W*hat ! Go by Hieroxjmo ! Cynthia's Revels> in the indu&ion. Another prunes his mujiaccio, lifps and fiuears That the old Hieronimo (as it ijJbs firjl afied) was the only be/I and jadicioujly pen* d play of Europe. Alchymift, Adi V. Subt. Here's your Hieronymo's cloake and hat. Yet how much this play was dleemed among many, will appear by the following ftory : " A young gentlewoman within " thefe few yeares, who being accuitomed in her health " every day to fee one play or other, was at laft ftrucke " with a grievous ficknefie even unto death : during which " time of her fickneiie being exhorted by fuch Divines as " were there prefent to cll upon God, that hee would in " mercy look upon her, as one deafe to their exhortation " continued ever crying, Oh HieroKjrtu, tiieronymo t methinks " I fee the, brave Hieronymo! " Briithwait's Englifh Gentleman, p. 19-. fhould Sect. 16. on SHAKESPEARE, 275 Ihould thefe be fent packing, and feek For their parent elfewhere. How otherwife does the pain- ter diftinguilh copies from originals ? And have not authors their peculiar flyle and manner, from which a true critic can form as unerring a judg- ment as a painter ? External proofs leave no room for doubt. I dare fay there is not any one fcho- lar, that now believes Phalaris* epiflles to be ge- nuine. But what if there had been no external proofs, if the fophift had been a more able chro- nologer, would the work have been more ge- nuine ? Hardly, I believe ; tho' the fcholar of taft had been equally fatisfied. The beft of cri- tics might be impofed on as to half a dozen verfes, or fo, as * Scaliger himfelf was, but never as to a whole piece : in this refpect the critic and the connoiffeur are upon a level. That 2. Scaliger's cafe was this; Muretus, having translated fome verfes from Philemon, fent them in a jocular vein to Scaliger, telling him at the fame time they were a choice fragment of Trabeas, an ancient comic poet : and Scaliger in his commentary on Varro (p. 212.) cites them as Tra* beas 1 own, and as found in fomc old manufcript. Th verfes are ingenious and worth mentioning, Here , fe querelis, eju/atu, fietibus, Medicina feret tniftriis mortalium, Aitro parantiae lacrimae contra farent. Nunc hate ad minutnda mala non magis va/inf, T Summ 276 Critical Obfcrvation* Book II. That Anacreon was deftroyed by the Greek priefts we have the teftimony of a learned Gre- cian, and this poet is mention'd as a loft author by J Petrus Alcyonius : fo that we have nothing now remaining of Anacreon's, but fome frag- ments, quite of a different caft and manner from thofe modern compofitions, fo much admired by minute fcholars. ^uam nenia fraeficae ad excitandas mortuos. Res turbidae conjilium, uon Jletumexpctunt. Philemon's verfes want fomc little corre&ion, and thus, as I think, they Ihould be red, Ei to, oaxft/ jjftZy tut xuHuv 'Ati S' Ni;r y a 'ETgoai^u ra w^ajftar', vS" * EJf rctvra, Siffvor', AX Tr) aJrijn o 'Ea' TI xXair?, a' TI /xr), j Xvw?} "E^JEt yaf, , ra 3. See what is cited from him above, p. 34, 35^ n. Several other proofs may be added ; ^ Od. XXXI. X' o Xti/*7r8{ O/;'r};. o XvxcVs Ofi'ri?, >^^ white-footed Oreftes : i. e. treading the ftage in white bufldns. TJie mentioning the name of Oreftes puts the poets in mind of the ftage : fo Virgil, Scenis agitattu Qrejles* If Sed:. 1 6. on SHAKESPEARE. 277 *A?f &*S X. T. A. *<>? S-OT* Iv T. A. Imitated, much for the worfe, from the of Theocritus. /. But it happens very unluckily, that Sophocles had no play afled fo early as Anacreon's writing his odes, and Sophocles was the inven- ter of the white fhoe; as the compiler of his life informs us. So that here is an additional proof of this ode's not being genuine. I fuppofe Sophocles' white (hoe was what Shakefpeare in Hamlet, Aft III. calls rayc d Jboes : i.e. with rays of fylver, or tinfel. Homer's epithet of Thetis, is K^V^TTS^X, which Milton hints at in his Mafe, By Tfatis tinfel-JIippeSdfeet. T 3 u A rnaa 278 Critical Obfervations Book II. " A man may rime you fo (as the clown fays " in Shakefpeare) eight years together, dinners " and fuppers and deeping hours excepted : 'tis " the right butterwomen's rank to market." Tho* a few lines may pafs often unfufpe&ed, as thofe of Muretus's did with Scaliger , yet when they happen to be inferted into the body of a work, and when their very features betray their baftardy, one may venture not only to mark them for not being genuine, but entirely to re- move them. In K. Henry the fifth, there is a fcene between Katharine and an old woman, where Mr. Pope has this remark, " I have left *' this ridiculous fcene as I found it , and am tl forry to have no colour left, from any of the * c editions, to imagine it interpolated." But with much lefs colour Mr. Pope has made many grea- ter alterations ; and this fcene is rightly omitted in the late elegant edition printed at Oxford. But 'tis a hard matter to fix bounds to criticifm. However I will venture to make one afiay on a pafTage of Horace, which has flood unmolefled many ages. The poet, after dedicating his works to his patron Maecenas, addrefies in a flattering ode the emperor. The fubject is grave, and treated accordingly both with dignity and gravity. The prodigies, he fays, which hap- c pen'd at the death of Caefar feem'd to be fore- runners' Sect. 1 6. on SHAKESPEARE;, 279 runners of no lefs evils thanthofe which threatned the world in the times of Deucalion : " Omne cum Proteus pecus egit altos " Vifere montes. Horace knew where to leave off, which is a difficult matter for a lefs cultivated genius. Had the poet a defign to burlefque Deucalion's flood, he could not do it more effectually than by the choice of fuch trivial circumftances as follow, ' Pifcium et fumma genus haefit ulmo, " Nota quae fedes fuerat columbis : " Et fuperjecto pavidae natarunt " Aequore damae. The fifhes were caught intangled on the boughs of high elm^ the ufeial habitations of doves (but rather of crows and mag-pies, &c.J and the fearful hinds foam in the fea : what is fuperjcflo ? covering the face of the earth^ the commentators tell us : but here, covering the backs of the hinds. But a more trifling ftanza I never red , and the author, fome monk or other, made it out of the following verfes of Ovid Met. I. w Sylvafque tenent delphines, et aids " Incurfant ramis, agitataque robora pulfant : '' Nat lupus inter oves, &c. T * Th* 2 o Critical QbJeroMlons Book II. The monk having murdered Ovid> and rifled his luxuriant thoughts, placed them in the mar- gin of his Horace ; and the corruption, once made, was foon propagated. But how well do the verfes run without this ridiculous patch ? " Jam fatis terris nivis atque dirae " Grandinis mifit Pater ; et rubente " Dextera facras jaculatus arces " Terruit Urbem : " Terruit gentes -, grave ne rediret ** Seculum Pyrrhae nova monftra quaeftae, " Omne quum Proteus pecus egit altos " Vifere montes. " Vidimus flavum Tiberim, retortis " Litore Etrufco, &c. &c. Ovid himfelf has fuffered much by thefe monkilK interpolations and additions, nor has even Virgil efcaped them. The players have in fome places interpolated Shakefpeare , and thefe interpola- tions, with other faults of his tranfcribers, are with great caution to be taken away ; but if every critic will have a pull at him, and if this is left to meer unreftrained will and fancy, we may, in time, be in danger of lofmg the original itfelf ; and the following fable may be but tpo juftly ap- ply'd to our critics. Once upon a time a middle-aged man had ^courage to marry two wives together, the one young, Sett. 16. on SHAKESPEARE. 281 young, the other advanc'd in years. They were both great admirers of their hu (band, and no little admirers of themfelves and their own dexterity : The hufband, a good-natur'd man, left himfelf to be drefifed and comb'd by thefe two women, who ambitioufly ftrove, each of them, to make him as much as poflible like themfelves. The elder lady thought nothing fo becoming as grey hairs, which fhe term'd filver hairs, all which fhe was very careful to preferve, but the black hairs me plucked out by handfuls. On the other hand, the young lady, thinking an old man the moft unhappy thing that could befal her, was refolved the world mould think fhe had married a young hufband , with this view therefore fhe comb'd her hufband's head, and on her part, pulled out all the grey hairs me could find. But the unfor- tunate hufband, too late, found the ill effects of trtifting thefc CORRECTORS ; for by their means he foon became almoft entirely bald. BOOK 282 Critical Observations Book III. BOOK III. 'HEN one confiders the various tribes of rhetoricians, grammarians, ety- mologifts, &c. &c. of ancient Greece : and here find the wifeft and beft of * philofophers inculcating grammatical niceties to his fcholars j not fo foreign to his grand defign of bettering mankind, as we now perhaps may imagine : when again we confider that the Romans followed the Grecian fteps -, and here fee a Scipio and Laelius joining with an African (lave in polifhing the Latin language, and tranflating the politeft of the Attic authors ; and fome time after read of z Cicero himfelf, that he, when his country was diffracted with civil commotions, mould trouble his head with fuch pedantic accuracies, as whether he Ihould write ad Piraeea^ Piraeeum^ or in Piraeeum. When, I fay, all this is confidered, and then turn our eyes home-ward, and behold every thing the reverfe i can we wonder that the ancients mould have a polite language, and that we fliould hardly emerge out ot our priftine and Gothic barbarity ? i. See Plato inCrityl and Xen. eV.f*. L. III. c. 13. and L. IV. c. 6. --. Cicer. in Epifl ad Att. VII. 3. - Amongft on SHAKESPEARE. 283 Amongft many other things we want a good grammar and dictionary : we muft know what is proper, before we can know what is elegant and polite : by the ufe of thefe, the meaning of words might be fixed, the Proteus-nature, if poffible, of ever-iriifting language might in fome meafure be afcertained, and vague phrafes and ambiguous fentences brought under fome rule and regulation. But a piece of idle wit mall laugh all fuch learning out of doors : and the no- tion of being thought a dull and pedantic fellow, has made many a man continue a blockhead all his life. Neither words nor grammar are fuch arbitrary and whimfical things, as fome imagine: and for my own part, as I have been taught from other kind of philofophe'rs, fo I believe, that right and wrong, in the minuteft fubjects, have their ftandard in nature, not in whim, caprice or arbitrary will : fo that if our grammarian or lexicographer, mould by chance be a difciple of modern philofophy ; mould he glean from France and the court his refinements of our tongue, he would render the whole affair, bad as it is, much worfe by his ill management. No one can write without fome kind of rules : and for want of rules of authority, many learned men have drawn them up for themfelves. Ben Johnfon printed his Englifh Grammar. If v $hakefpeare a pd Milton never puhlilhed their rules, Critical Obfervations Book III. rules, yet they are not difficult to be traced from a more accurate consideration of their writings. Milton's rules I mail omit at prefent ; but fome of Shakefpeare's, which favour of peculiarity, I mall here mention : becaufe when thefe are known, we mall be lefs liable to give a loofe to fancy, in indulging the licentious fpirit of criti- cifm ; nor mail we then fo much prefume to judge what Shakefpeare ought to have written, as endeavour to difcover and retrieve what he did write. RULE I. &ljafcefpeate alters proper names according to tlje (Sngliflj pronunciation. Concerning this liberty of altering proper names, Milton thus apologizes in Smectymnuus, " If " in dealing with an out-landifh name, they " thought it beft not to fcrew the Englifh mouth " to a harfh foreign termination, fo they kept " the radical word, they did no more than the " elegant authors among the Greeks, Romans, " and at this day the Italians in fcorn of fuch a " fervility ufe to do. Remember how they " mangle our Britifh names abroad ; what tref- " pafs were it if we in requital ihould as much " neglect theirs ? And our learned Chaucer did " not flick to do fo ? writing Scmyramus for lil : . CM SHAKESPEARE. 285, " Semiramis^ Ampbiorax for dmpbiaraus, K. Betes " for K. Cyx the hulband of Alcyone, with many " other names ftrangely metamorphis*d from " true orthography, if he had made any account " of that in thefe kind of words.'* Milton's obfervatiori is exceeding true -, and to this affecta- tion of the Romans is owing the difficulty of antiquarians tracing the original names and places. Our Cafwell, Bowdicb and Cotes, in a Roman mouth are Cqflivellanus, Boadicia and Cotifo. The Portus Itius mention'd in Caefar was a port below Calais called * Vitfan or Whitfan. The old Ger- man words Qlat 8te ; i. e. fat or fruitful earth, the Romans called Batavia. When the north- eaft part of Scotland was pronounced by the natives Cai Dim, i. e. a hill of hazel, the Ro- mans foon gave it their Latin termination, and called it Caledonia. Many other names of places our antiquarians and etymologifts eafily trace, if they can get but the radical word. This rule then is univerally true, that all nations make foreign words fubmit to their manner of pronun- ciation. However our Shakefpeare does not abufe proper names like Chaucer or Spencer, tho' he has elegantly fuited many of them to thi Englifh mouth. In his Midfummer-Night's Dream, Act II. he hints at a ftory told by Plutarch in the life of 2 Caniden's Brit. p. 254. Thefeus, 286 Critical Qbf equations Book III. Thefeus, of one ntg/yxw, daughter of the famous robber Sinis, whom Thefeus flew: he true hero-like, killed the father and then debauched the daughter. Her he calls very poetically Perigenia. Cleopatra had a fon by Julius Caefar, whom Plutarch tells us was called Kaao-ag/'av, Shakefpeare in Antony and Cleopatra very properly writes it Ceferic, not Cefarion : n\diuv y does not make in Latin or Englifh Platan, but Plato. And J Prif- cian the Grammarian obferves that the Latins .omit the n at the latter end of proper names. So * Cicero in his Tufculan difputations : Hinc ilk Agamemno Homcricus. And Virgil. Aen. VIII, 603. " Haud procul hinc Tarcbo, et Tyrrheni tuta " tenebant. From whence Aen. X, 290. Inftead of " Speculatus litora Tarcbon, we muft write larcbo. The Jews name in the Merchant of Venice Scialac, he makes. Englilh and calls Sbylock. In Romeo and Juliet, Mcntecchi and Capello, are Montague and Capukt. And Amleth^ he writes Hamlet \ and Cunobeline or Kymbeline^ he calls Gywbeline. 3. Prifc. 1. 6, p. 690. 4. Cic. Tufc. difp. Ill, 26. Macbeth's on SHAKESPEARE. 287 Macbeth's father is varioufly written in the Scotifh chronicles. Macbeth fil. Findleg : Innes of Scotland p. 791. Macbeth Mac~Fin!eg : Ibid, p. 803. Machabcus Filius Finele : Johan. de Fordin Scot. L. IV. c. 44. Salve, Maccabaee Thane Glam- mis , nam eum magiftratum defuntto paulo ante patre Synele acceperat. Hector Boeth. Scot. hift. L.XII. Sinell thane of Gammis : Holinfli. p. 168. " By SineFs death, I know, I'm thane of Glamis. So our author, in Macbeth, Act I. In Cicero's offices B. II. c. ix. is the following paflage, Itaque proptcr aequabilem praedae partitio- nem, et BARGULUS ILLYRIUS LATRO, de quo eft apud Tbeopcmpum, magnas opes habuit. Thus the editions in Shakefpeare's time -, and thus I found it in two manufcripts. In the fecond part of K. Henry VI. Aft IV. Suffolk fays, " This villain here, " Being captain of a pinnance, threatens more " Than Bargulus thejtrong Illyrian pirate. In fome later editions 'tis printed in Cicero, Bardylis Illyrius latro. For my own part, I really imagine that Cicero gave this lilyrian name -a Roman pronunciation and turn : but why the editors of Cicero print it Bardylis^ I don't know; Plutarch in the life of Pyrrhus writes it B'^wAA*voV, o acrjjju- KOU ^ojxtT* i|u$av)jf, lays an ancient gram- marian -on the Ajax of Sophocles. Now allow- ing Shakefpeare to ufe the word orphan, as a Grecian would have ufed it, and how elegantly does he call the fairies, the orphan heirs ofdeftiny: who adminifter in her works, acting in darknefs and obfcurity ? The whole pafiage runs thus : In the Merry Wives of Windfor, Act V. " Fairies, black, gray, green and white, " You moon-mine revellers, and Ihades of night, " You Orphan- heirs of fixed deftiny, " Attend your office and your quality. Had the poet written ouphen-heirs, he would have repeated the fame thing. Thefe oupbs'I find in modern editions have routed the owls out of their old pofiefiions : but I mall beg leave to reinftate them again, in the Comedy of Errours, Act II. " This is the fairy land : oh fpight of fpights ! " We talk with goblins, owls and elvifh fprights! " If we obey them not, this will enfue, " They'll fuck our breath, and pinch us black " and blue. Thefe 302 Critical Obfervations Book III. Thefe owls which the Latins called ftriges, ac- cording to vulgar fuperftition had power to fuck children's breath and blood, Ovid. Faft. L. VI. '35- " Nocte volant, puerofque petuntnutricisegentes* " Et vitiant cunis corpora rapta fuis. " Carpere dicuntur lactantia vifcera roftris, " Et plenum poto fanguine guttur habent. Plin. XI, 39. " Fabulofum puto de ftrigibus, ubera infanthirri " eas labris immulgere. NOR is Shakefpeare's peculiarity in ufing words to be paffed over. In Richard II. Aft II. " Why have thofe banilh*d and forbidden legs, " Dar'd once' to touch a duft of England's " ground? i. e. mterditted. As the pope's legate told K. John, " He [the pope] hath wholly interditted and " curfed you, for the wrongs you have done " unto the holy church." Fox. Vol. I. p. 285. So in Macbeth, Aft I. " He fhall live a manfork'd. In on SHAKESPEARE. 303, In Macbeth, Aft III. " And put a barren fcepter in my gripe, " Thence to be wrench'd with an unlikeal hand, i. e. not of my line, or defcent, In Macbeth, Aft V. " For their dear caufes vt Would to the bleeding and the grim alarm " Excite the mortified man. dear caufes, i. e. dreadful. So in Hamlet. " Would I had met my dear eft foe in heav'n. Perhaps from the Latin dirus, &IC0, Uear. In the tranflation of Virgil by Douglafs 'tis fpelt Dere, which theGloflary thus explains, ** &?erc, to hurt, " trouble: Belg. S>ecren, H>wreil. F. Theut. " 2)eran. AS. S>ertaiT, nocere. It. hurt, injury." And mould it not be thus fpelt in Shakefpeare ? But inltances of our poet's ufing words contrary to the modern acceptation of them are number- Jefs. RULE 304 Critical Qbfervations Book III. RULE III. ^e fometime* omits ffje primary ano proper fenfe, anD ufe tooroa in tljeir feconoarn ano im* proper 0gmfication Changes of garments, for different drefles, is a common exprefiion : and we fay, to change, for to drefs : properly to change one drefs and put on another. But Shakefpeare ufes to change^ only for to new drefs and adorn. In Antony and Cleopatra, A& I. " Charm. Oh ! that I knew this hufband, which " you fay muft ' change his horns with garlands. i. e. new drefs and adorn. In Coriolanus, Aft II. " Cor. From whom I have received not only " greetings, " But with them, * change of honours. i. e. been newly adorned with honors i received new ornaments of honors. Again, becaufe the popifh and heathenim myfteries are vain and whimfical, he therefore ufes myfteries, for vanities, or whiwfies. 1 . They have printed it, charge. 2. They have likewife printed it here, charge. In on SHAKESPEARE. 305 In Henry VIII. Aft I. " Cham. Is'tpoffible the fpells of France mould " juggle " Men into fuch ftrange J myjleries. i. e. vanities* and whimfies. He is fpeaking of court fafhions. RULE IV. loc ufcs one part of fpeeclj fo; anotfje;. For inftance, be makes verbs of adjettives^ as, toftale^ i. e. to make ftale and familiar. &A~v. As Virgil. " Patera libamus et auro, i. e. pateris aureis. In Antony and Cleopatra, Ad IV. " I hope well of to morrow, and will lead you " Where rather I'll expect victorious life * 6 Than death and honour. i. e. than honourable death. So Spencer B. 2. c. 7. ft. 42. " Soon as thofe^r//Y/ir and arms he did efpy. i.e. tbofe glittering arms. Again, be ufes adjectives adverbially. So Vir- gil. " Magnumque fluentem Nilum. Sole re- ic cens orto. Se matutinus agebat. Arduus in- tc furgens, &c. And Homer II. j3'. 147. AABPOS iirJM>w. And \ on SHAKESPEARE. 309 And Milton, VII, 305. " All but within thofe banks where rivers now " Stream, and perpetual draw their humid train. In Henry VIII. Aft i. " He is equal rav'nous, as he is fubtle. In Hamlet, Aft III. " I am myfelf indifferent honeft. In Henry IV. AftV. P.Henry fpeaking of Percy, " I do not know a braver gentleman, " More active valiant, or more valiant young. i. e. more actively valiant, or more valiantly young : or, one more valiant with activity, and young with valour. In Macbeth, Aft I. tc Your highnefs' part " Is to receive our duties ; and our duties '* Are to your throne and ftate, children and " fervants ; " Which do but what they mould, by doing " every thing 44 4 Safe toward your love and honour. Safe, i. e. with fafety, fecurity and furetimip. 4. 'Tis correaed, Fiefs. X 3 RULE 3 i o Critical Obfervation* Book IIL RULE V. l^e ufe0 tye artifcc participle paffitjefo, In King Lear. e Who by the art of known, and feeling forrows, tc Am pregnant to good pity. ing^ i. e. caufmg tbemfehss to be felt. In Antony and Cleopatra, Aft IV. " Cleop. Rather on Nilus' mud tc Lay me Hark naked, and let the water-flies* ic Blow me into Mcrring. i. e. into being abhorred and loathed. In Macbeth, Aft V. tc As eafie mayfl thou the intrenchant air " With thy keen fword imprefs. Intrenchant, \. e. not furTering itfelf to be cut. Fr. trenchant^ cutting. The woundlefs, the in- vulnerable air, as he expreffes it in Hamlet. This manner of expreflion the Latins ufe. Virgil. Sifttmt amnes : i. e. fe fiftunt. Accmgunt ofcri, i. e. fe accingunt. Dives inacceffos ubifolisflia facos JJ/iduo refonat cantu. i. e. on SHAKESPEARE; 311 i. e. t efonare faciti as Servius explains it. And Aen. I. 565. Turn breviter Dido vultum demifla profatw. i. c. demiffo vultu. In King Lear, Aft III. " This night wherein the cub-drawn bear would " couch. the cub-drawn, i. e. having her cubs drawn from her ; being robbed of her cubs ; the bear then is moft reftlefs and furious. Prov. XVII, 12. Let a bear robbed of her whelps meet a mcm^ rather than a f col in bis folly. Spencer B. 6. c. n. ft. 25. " And fared like a furious wild bear " Whofe whelps are ftol'n away. I will mention one paffage from the Ac"ls XXVII. 15. where the active participle is ufed paflively, or elleptically, viz. iViJoJIis' for tWoi/lt? aJ-r\, or iTriSo'jlts TO -nrXoroy TW aysjw-w. when the foip could not bear up into the wind, we let her drive : Mi} jwupivx [zrAot's] dvlofflx,\t*t7v TW av/AM, tTTiSo-jlig t!pff o^*9. Our failors now fay, to fail in the wind's eye^ literally tranflating the Greek phrafe, aw1o(p9aAjt*l TW ' ixilevw t^exri'ftT ANOMON. Schol. toiVci ro ilS, IV ri, wj RULE IX. He ufes, H5ut, for otherwife than : $r, for ^^> / o 9-wV, i. e. as Suidas interprets it, 7w? 11 owls**?. i. e. once for ail, perempto- rily. And thus the paflfage in the epiille to the Hebrews, VI. 4. is to be explained, Tou\ AUAZ (pw1w8I? , qai vere et omninofunt illuminati. And fine! is ufed fometimes in this fenfe by the pureft Latin authors. Milton, III, 233. " He her aid cc Can never feek, once dead in fins, and loft. i. e. once for all, thoroughly. Homer ufes AIIAST in the fame fenfe OJ. /*'. * AI1AH -ar^os xu/xa p^avwv oi-rro Svpov oX& From, on account of. In Coriolanus, Acl III. <6 Com. \ have been conful, and can " Her enemies marks upon me. From Rome, on account of Rome, in her fervice. So Milton in Samfon Agoniftes, >'-. 8. u O wherefore was my birth from heav'n foretold " Twice by an angel - " And from fome great act " Or benefit reveal'd to Abraham's race ? i. e. on account of fome great aft or benefit &c. AV, for not only. In Coriolanus, Aft III. *' Sic. As now at laft " Giv'n en SHAKESPEARE. 319 Giv'n hoftile ftroaks, and that not in the " prefence " Of dreaded juftice, but on the minifters " That do diftribute it. not in the prefence^ i. e. not only in the prefence &c. So the Latins ufe non, for non modo : and the Greeks OT for OT MONON. In Theocritus Idyll. X, 19. TupAof for companions: jwrf, for young perfons : reports, for people who made the reports. In Anthony and Cleopatra, Aft II. Ant. And have my learning from fome true ' reports " That drew their fwords with me. In King Richard II. Aft I. " Mowb. O let my foveraign turn away his face, " And bid his ears a little while be deaf, " Till I have told thisjlander of his blood, " How God and good men hate fo foul a liar. this Jlander, i. e. this flanderer. So Terence ufes Jcelus for fceleftus. Andria A6t V. Scelus quern hie lattdaL And Virgil has this figure in a feenv ing intricate paffage. Aen. V, 541. " Nee bonus Eurytio prarlato invidit honori. Nor did the good Eurytio envy him the preemi- nence of honor. So 'twill be conftrued : but bo- ncri^ is, the honorable perfon^ prtlaio^ ^hich was prefer* d before him. As Milton, III, 664. I. Some read, reporters. N. B. Moft of the readings, which are brought as examples, have been altered in fome editions or other, of our poet. " But on SHAKESPEARE. 321 " But chiefly man either erpreflfeo, or tacitl? In Homer, II. -|'. 579. Ei i' y iyuv au'rcV AIKA2H, "AAAo iirnrtietv Avv I0EIA ^ ?f. The adjective ifi, in the latter part of the fen tence, agrees with cognitis Caefaris diffi- " cultatibus, copiarumque paucitatei non eft vi- " fum dare fpatium convalefcendi." In Hamlet Ad III. " Tour majejly and we, that have free fouls, it " touches us not. He begins with a nominative cafe, as if he would fay, what care we, it touches us not : but cutting fhort his fpeech makes a folecifm. Many kinds of thefe embarraffed fentences there are in Shake- fpeare. And have not the beft authors their *M%Q\QytoU) as the grammarians call them, feem- ing inaccuracies, and departure from the com- mon and trite grammar ? RULE XIII. i^e mafce0 a fu&Dcn ftranftttsn from f!)e plural number to ti;c 0su!ar. And fo likewife do the moft approved writers of antiquity. 324 Critical Obfervatiins Book III. Terence in Eunuc. Ad: II. '< Dii boni! quid hoc morbi eft? adeon* homi- " nes immutarier " x amore, ut non cognofcas eundem efle ? On which paffage thusDonatusj More fuo aplu- rali numero adfingularem fe convertit. Here eun- dcm agrees with bominem included and underftood in the plural homines* Sophocles in Elect, tf. 1415. ii 4>/X7*I TTNAIKES, wtytt aviix* AA *l& I1PO2MENE. for vpfffuvilt. As the fpeech is directed to the chorus, he confiders them as one or ma- ny. Euripides in Phaen. >-. 403. Flo. "EW jugy piywv, *'x EXEI In the fecond verfe o a poetical licence that Virgil introduced into the Latin poetry : but there have not been wanting hands, to fill thefe broken verfes up for both the poets. It may not be difpleafmg to the reader to point out fuch Kind of workman- fhip in Virgil. In the fixth Aeneid, the hero fpeaks to the Sybil. " Foliis tantum ne carmina manda, " Ne turbata volent, rapidis ludibria vends : ** Ipfa canas, oro. Fmem dedit ore loquendi. The river God Tyber is fpeaking of himfelf. Aen. ** Ego fum, pleno quern flumine cernis Stringentem ripas, et pinguia culta fecantem Coeruleus Tybris. Coelo gratiffimus amnis. Some on SHAKESPEARE. 333 Some other fufpe&ed places may be pointed out : but I fubmit to the judgment of the rea- der, whether he can think thefe additions, any other than botches in poetry : and how much more virgilian would thefe verfes appear, were they left as I have here marked them ? I T ought not to be forgotten that Shake- fpcare has many words, either of admiration or exclamation, &c. out of the verfe. Nor is this without example in the Greek tragedies. In the Hecuba of Euripides tf. 863. Ow'x ef * Sophocles in Aj. ^. 748. {> TtjWs T)J\ And again ^. 1021. OijUOl r, w? i* TO ar In Hamlet Acl I. " Gh. So art thou to revenge, when thou fhalt *' hear. " Ham. What? " Gh. I am thy father's fpirit. And 334 Critical Observations Book III. And prefently after, " Gh. If thou didft ever thy dear father love " Ham. Ohheav'n! " Gh. Revenge his foul and moft unnatural " murther ! " Ham. Murther! " Gh. Murther moft foul> as in the beft it is. In Othello Aft HI. " Oth. Oh, yes, and went between us very oft. " lago. Indeed! " Oth. Indeed ! ay, indeed. Difcern'ft thou ought " in that? And in many other places exactly after the caft of the ancient plays. There are fome poetic liberties that our author takes, fuch as length- ening words in fcanfion, as ixitensfs, fideier, an- gery, Hinerj, sarjeant, captain, fiat fa, desire, villain, firs, hour, grace, great, &c. &c. V OSS I US fpoke very ignorantly of our lan- guage when he afferted that our verfes run all, as it were, in one meafure, without diftindion of members or parts, or any regard to the natu- ral quantities of fyllables. For are not thefe fubftantives as much trochees, conduci, confort, conttji, &c. and die verbs from thefe fubftantives, as much iambics, ccndiicf, confori, contcjl, &c. as .Ill en SHAKESPEARE. as any Latin or Greek words whatever ? Again, sin/tilt faithful, nature, venture, &c. have all the fkft pliable long. However our pofition in the main determines the, quantity, and a great deal is left to the ear. But let us take any verfe in Milton or Shake- fpeare, for example, r Say ftrft.fcr heav'njhides nothing fromjthy view. i 2 3 4 5 And tranfpofe the words, Say firftjfor heav'n'nothing'from thyjview hides. i I 2 1 3 ! 4 5 . who cannot feel the difference, even fuppofmg he could not give a reafon for it ? THE greateft beauty in diction is, when k. correfponds to the fenfe. This beauty our lan- guage, with all its difadvantages, carr attain ; as I could eafily inftance from Shakefpeare and Milton. We have hariri, rough conibnants, a s well as the foft and melting, and thefe fhould found in the fame mufical key. This rule is moft religioufly obfervcd by Virgil -, as is like- wife that of varying the paufc and cefura, or as Milton expreffes it, tbejenfe b:l'-:- ^srloujh dra i sor t cut from one verfe into anstber. For it is variety and uniformity that makes beauty ; and, for want of this, our riming poets foon tire the ear: for 336 Critical Obfervations Book III. for rime neceflarily hinders the fenfe from being uarioujly drawn out from one verfe to another. They who avoid this Gothic bondage, are unpardona- ble, if they don't ftudy this variety , when Shakefpeare and Milton have fo finely led them the way. But to treat this matter, concerning his metre, fomewhat more exactly : 'tis obferved that when the iambic verfe has its juft number of fyllables, 'tis called acataleftic ; when deficient in a fyllable eataktic\ when a foot is wanting to compleat the dipod, according to the Greek fcanfion, bra- chycataleftic - y when exceeding in a fyllable, by- fercataleftic. The iambic monometer acataledic, of two feet. I 2 Bea | tus !l I 2 No It | is ftruck I 2 Laft night 1 of all I 2 For Hec | iiba Haml. I Z Two on SHAKESPEARE, 337 Two truths | are told Macb. i 2 Iambic monometer hypercatalectic, of two feet and a femiped. , plv I zrxt I 2 Bea | tus il | le I 2 and more | i beg | not I 2 Then yield | thee cow | ard i 2 Macb. and prey [ on gar | bage i 2 Ham. The Iambic dimeter brachycatalectic of three feet. OH, ulv u ] zseu Ap, I 2 3 Bea | tus II | le qui 1 2 3 Till then [ enough | come friends i 2 3 So pry | thee go [ with me Macb, if sight | and fhape | be true why then | my love | adieu. As you like it. i 2 3 Z The 33$ Critical Obfervations Book III. The lambick dimeter cataleftic ; better known by the anacreontic ; of three feet and one femiped. i 2 3 Pater | narii | ra bo j bus i 2 3 i Nay come | let's go | toge | ther i 2 3 a king | of flireds | and pat | ches i 2 34 Harrh it is | a peer [lefskinfj man 123 i and all | things un | be come | ing 12 3 i Had i [ three ears | i'd hear | thee j 2 3 i Macbeth. The iambic dimeter acatalectic, of four feet. a, ju=v w | 12 34 iit prif | ca gens j mSrta | lium 1234 Hor. in thun | der light | nmg and | in rain 12 34 Macb. The iambic dimeter hypercatalectic, the third meafure in the alcaic verfe, of four feet and a femiped. , on SHAKESPEARE. 339 , jUty u THOU. Non ru | ra quae | Lirls | quie | ta 12 34 Hot; Hamlet Aft III. a bro | ther's mur | ther. Pray | i can | not 12 34 Othello Aft III. Damn her, I leud minx ! I Sh ! dimn | her,damn | her! 1234 Timon of Athens Aft II. But yet ] they could | havewlmt|they knew] not- The iambic trimeter brachycataleftic, of five feet, which is our common heroic verfe. Suis [ et ip | fa R6 | ma vi | ribus 123 45 if thou | haft a j ny found ( or ufe [ of voice 12345 Ham. The iambic trimeter cataleftic* of five feet and a femiped. 'A, |UV u \ zseu A